7thhaven yesterday's tomorrow By twenty-six R Read Story ◀ View Author ◀ Credit Us ◀   Reviewer Lightning6   Duration 11.28.15 to 11.28.15   Genre angst, sad   Characters jessica, krystal   Overall Grade 100%   KEYpoints Title: 5/5 Your title fit the story very well!^^

Poster: 5/5 You had no poster, but you will not lose marks for this.

Description + Foreword: 10/10 Your description was short and well worded. Good enough to grab peoples attention~

Layout: 5/5 Your story was very well organized. I liked the layout you chose for your story, it fit the theme very well.

Characterization: 15/15 Your characters are very good at speaking for themselves. They were very detailed on the way they felt and spoke.

Plot & Flow: 30/30 The way you worded everything in your story was great, The stories flow was geat, well paced~ Your plot was very well thought out and it turned into a great short story.

Grammar & Vocabulary: 20/20 You did not have any grammar or vocabulary mistakes from what i could see, you did a good job of reviewing your story.

Personal Enjoyment: 10/10 I really enjoyed reading this one-shot. And i think it could win in a Angst themed contest if you ever entered it into one~ haha Reviewer's Notes Thank you for requsting! I hope that this review was helpful in some way~ And if you have any questions, please ask me through either commenting or Pm!^^
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