You can call me Crazy By: justdance2727. Title 4/5: I liked the title, it suits the story well~ But one thing i'd like to point out is that you only capitalized 2 words in your title, when all of them can be capitalized

Poster 5/5: Your poster was very well done and fit the theme of your story great!

Description & Foreword 10/10: I like your description! It was very well written, and the quotes underneath the characters were a good idea
Layout 5/5: Your story is very organized and neat~

Characterization 15/15: You are very deatailed with your characters! I loved the way the characters talked, you could feel how they felt yourself~

Plot 30/30: You have a very good idea and it was very well worded. Your story didn't move too quickly, nor too fast. It is at a very good pace! keep it up^^

Grammar and vocabulary 18/20: You had no grammar mistakes from what i read. But one thing i would change is the capitals in un-needed places and multiple of the same letters where it's not needed. I understand your are trying to get a point across that they are either yelling or screaming, but that's what the exlamation points are for.

Personal Enjoyment 10/10:I enjoyed reading your chapter, i thought it was kind of funny at a few parts, and it was enjoyable^^

Total: 97/100

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