Unknown Nightmares By: exoismyoverdose. Title 5/5: I liked the title, it suits the story well~ And it suits the theme we

Poster 5/5: Your poster was very well done and fit the theme of your story great!

Description & Foreword 10/10: I like your description! It was very well written, I also like how you did let people know that there was going to be some very violent scenes. I've seen many author not warn others. 
Layout 5/5: Your story is very organized and neat~

Characterization 15/15: You are very deatailed with your characters! I loved the way the characters talked, you could feel how they felt yourself~

Plot 30/30: You have a very good idea and it was very well worded. Your flow was good, it didn't advance too slow nor too fast. 

Grammar and vocabulary 18/20: You had no grammar mistakes from what i read. But one thing i noticed at the end of your first chapter is that the BANG, was in all red. I would suggest getting rid of that and describing how he got shot yourself, instead of just using the 'sound'. 

Personal Enjoyment 10/10:I enjoyed reading your chapter, I'm honesly a big fan of these kinds of stories, and it was nice to read a new one.

Total: 98/100

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