He Heard It By: Queensabelle. Title 5/5: I found that your title fit the story very well! Very good choice!^^

Poster 5/5: Your poster was very well done and fit the theme of your story great!

Description & Foreword 10/10: I like your description! It was very well written, and the quotes underneath the characters well thought out.
Layout 5/5: Your story is very organized and neat~

Characterization 15/15: You are very deatailed with your characters! And i liked the feeling of feeling i was laughing along with the characters at the same time, it proves to me that your characters details are well done.

Plot 30/30: You have a very good idea and you made your idea flow into something very sweet, and funny at the same time. Your flow is just right, it wasn't too slow nor too fast.

Grammar and vocabulary 18/20: You are very good with you grammar and vocabulary. There weren't any mistakes from what i could see. But one thing i would change is the capitals in un-needed places and multiple of the same letters where it's not needed. I understand your are trying to get a point across that they are either yelling or screaming, but that's what the exlamation points are for, so you don't have to deal with capitals and a bunch of letters. If you know what i mean

Personal Enjoyment 10/10:I really enjoyed reading your story, and thought that i could somehow relate to the main characters, because of how well detailed it wa