Hey guys. I just noticed that i have alot of mistakes in my stories and i'm so sorry. I have gramatical mistakes and for some reason i cant use cursewords in my story so alot of things must not make sense. Im going over my story and im making edits so it can make sense to you guys, im so sorry once again!! *bows* and i'd love some creative criticism and what do you guys think will happen. i want your thoughts!! im not going to be a snob and say "no new chapter till i get comments" you dont have to comment if you dont want but i really want to edit my (abnoxious) writing before i upload a new chapter. i hope you guys are ok with this, and please keep in mind that this is my first fanfiction so im still getting the hang of things. *bows twice* sorry again guys. promise i'll be back soon!!