The Truth

Aldebaran

 

It was just him alone, again. He wasn't young and ignorant anymore; he was twelve. He knew that something was wrong, very wrong. His best friend was hiding something from him. He didn't know what it was though. Everyone he knew seemed to be throwing sorry glances at him. The Moon and the stars weren't smiling anymore. His parents were showing unnecessary concern. He was the only one kept in the dark, and he had to find out what was going on.

 

"Hey, open up, Jason!" He knocked desperately on the door. "It's me, Jung Hwan!" he shouted.

 

The door opened, and there stood a middle-aged woman. Her eyes were just like his or rather, he had her eyes.

 

"Jung Hwan dear, Jason isn't at home now," she said kindly.

 

"Something is wrong with him, isn't it?" he asked anxiously.

 

"Nothing's wrong. He's fine." The woman reassured him, but he could see the tears in her eyes.

 

"Please," Jung Hwan begged. "Tell me what's going on." 

 

"He's sick." She choked back her tears. "He's going for the surgery in three days time."

 

Jung Hwan was shocked; he didn't know it was anything major.

 

"What does he have?" He pressed on.

 

"Hypoplastic left heart syndrome," she replied. "A con heart defect. He didn't want you to know." She sniffed.

 

"Where is he now?" he asked with urgency in his tone.

 

He dashed past the sea of people, and he was silently praying. The skies turned dark, and it started drizzling. The rain washed his tears away; he hoped that it would wash away Jason’s pain too.

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oncloudydays #1
I've re-read this story because back then, I was confused between Jason and Sanduel sometimes. Somehow.
Decided to sieve out all my favourite quotes from your story that evoke emotions in me since I'm bored and you wouldn't mind :P
"The thought of being able to see the brightest star and getting a piece of a star instantly cheered him up."
"The stars smiled down on them."
"He wished everything would be a vibrant blue again."
"the rain didn't do its job well."
"If you die, I'll kill you" <- Still so cute.
Esh, I have to re-read and find the sentences for the third time because I wasn't sieving while reading for the second time. So I might miss out some...Anws, I am glad I re-read because it's like reading a new story. Short chapters that made me enjoy, realising new things like the idol concept weaved in at the ending. <3
Ps. Sanduel is a star?
Pistachio
#2
Thank-you for the comments! They really motivate me to continue writing! <3
trishie_ann
#3
The ending is cute! :D I also like the letter and how u incorporated the stars ^^
watermelon
#4
Hehes..(: You ended your story faster than me :X Good job anyways for ending earlier than me (I will never be able to write like this though :( )
Pistachio
#5
@watermelon<br />
Soon. :D
watermelon
#6
Hehes (: i read your story and when are you updating (;?
Pistachio
#7
Thank-you so much! :D
kaipuccino
#8
OMG I love this story so much ;^; i love your writing style and the plot they are just so adorable asdgkhjh ;o;<br />
update soon
Pistachio
#9
Haha, I was thinking my plot is kinda predictable. :x<br />
I think maybe you've already guessed it. (:
watermelon
#10
You finally updated !^^ Wonder what is the sad story beind the sadness in jason's eyes (;looking forward..