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sorairo #1
that good update!!!
ahhhh than good to forgive him <3
poor fish xDDD
Kai is a good friend!
ahhhh not take too long to update please :D
sorairo #2
that good update!!!
ahhhh than good to forgive him <3
poor fish xDDD
Kai is a good friend!
ahhhh not take too long to update please :D
allison9087 #3
Gosh I was laughing throughout this whole chapter...omo poor goldfish):
Delvae #4
omg the poor fish xDDD
love it <3 I'm glad he forgave him :) It's so nice to see them together :)
angel_baby_devillove #5
Poooor goldfish :(((( lmao
Best friends? Awesome xd
makemyday
#6
lmao the goldfish xDDDDDDDDD

baekyeol ...finally!!! <3<3<3<3
allkpop09 #7
I should be crying?

LOL I just LOLed the whole time
OMG the part with Kai and Baek in the rain was hilarious
and Baekyeol are so cute <3<3
viktoretka #8
OMG
OMG
LEGIT SOBS RIGHT NOW. I WAS SO CRYING DURING THIS CHAPTER.
I'm following this story since the 2nd chapter or what and I must say that.. gosh.. this story is actually one of my most favorite fanfics ever.. I love it.
And this last update is just.. ah. <33333333
-TADA- #9
The fish!! D:
seonri9095
#10
even baek ways to make up got a lot of *disasterous weather* problem,and RIP gold fish,THEY FINALLY TOGETHER with bestfriends kiss and stuff >///////<
gosh!i've wait your update since...forever#bricked
just give me another update soon authornim#smirk
baek-yeols #11
OMG I follow you on tumblr!! I'm Baconwings ahahah xD
this is so cute.yes.finally they've made up YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY <3 <3 <3
shixunist
#12
Chapter 16.... AHHHHH OMG I was legit crying.
storpelly
#13
OMGA FGAGHAHGAS I MISS YOUR UPDATE OMGGGGG ;_______________; the idea cracked me but why RAIN omg :( but luckily it ended well <3
shixunist
#14
This is so good, I love it so much, omg Chanyeol is so precious, I can't handle my emotions. <3
ELFLuver
#15
aw that was so azvgfhdfvghj /ugly cries
omo904 #16
.....idk why i'm so upset about the dead fish....LOL.
OMG OMG OMG THEY'RE TOGETHER~~~ baekhyun's mind is totally in the gutter while chanyeol says all that innocent stuff. awh...
wait, this doesn't mean the fic is over right?!
i love this fic too much for it to be over already!
lori_senpai
#17
aklsjladjla poor goldfish
this chapter is just so freaking cute
and chanyeol 'hay guise' killed me at the end sasjalfdsçl
kyuwookissme
#18
AN UPDATE, FINALLY. LOVE LOVE U , LIKE ALWAYS
cassye #19
Yey Baekyeol again !
FiveMoreMinutes
#20
..........................
THE FISH
OMG
THE FISH
WHY
WHY DID THAT HAPPEN TO THE FISH
I AM LEGITIMATELY CRUSHED ABOUT THE FISH OKAY
LIKE I COULDN'T EVEN CONCENTRATE ON HAPPY BAEKYEOL REUNION BECAUSE FISH

but yeah baekyeol <3

also kai is kind of super awesome here
TanXueLei #21
This reader legit flailed upon seeing this fic's update. Even though fairly saddened that Chanyeol isn't going to be Baekhyun's boyfriend but bff's-who-kiss-and-stuff I still find it cute. Actually, it's probably the best way to decribe their relationship ^^
koliqizm192 #22
i was reading like "oh that's a good end for this chapter" with a small smile then chanyeol's hay guise killed me, roflabl.
InfiniteGold
#23
I'm just going to go wallow in the awesomeness that is this. Yup. Let me wallow.
EXO4EV3R
#24
This chapter is so beautiful!! *sniffle* excuse me while I cry
MINAkpop #25
this was the best chapter snif even tought i cried a littel
but it was AWSOME
itsyblunchy #26
i cried... at the death of the goldfish... T_T hahahaha lol srsly your update made my entire fxckdup day! i love youuu now :D
cupcakemini5
#27
excuse me as i cry becausethis was perfectly imperfect, and all sorts of awkward, but so precious and words. how do you words, seriously. i can't even function properly from how amazing this chapter was ;=; specially the whole "let's just be best friends" i screamed because i agreed so much with that statement jksdjsjsdklkajksdkldsf his other boyfriends didn't last, i don't wish for that to be the future of this boyfriend-best friend. sobs, i'm supposed to be making pancakes rn not reading fanfic but AJDHKS I LOVE YOU.
LT_Kyungsoo
#28
“Found him,” Kai mumbles, as a sickening squish is heard from the bottom of Baekhyun’s shoe.


I'm sorry that I laughed at this scene. I laughed out loud. RIP goldfish.
LT_Kyungsoo
#29
OMG YOU UPDATED. YOU. UPDATED.

...

Okay I'm gonna read the chapter now. Lol sorry I got too excited that I immediately scrolled down to comment and spazz.
baekchanloveseu #30
OMFG I LOVE THIS SFM!!!finally a precious update!!!been waiting for it for so long baby!!!
jagi-yah #31
Love itttttt!~ <3
-shano #32
TBH, all the waiting was driving me insane. And i really wanted to punch someone in the face.
It wasn't just you, but a lot of other writers were on hiatus or having "writer's bocks" or something. And i was left without nothing to read. It was pure HELL.

...But its ok. I can understand all those things [i hate them, but i understand], and that why i don't get all "update soon!" or "are you even going to finish this?". Yeah, but i may get annoying when there is an update... does that even make sense?

...sorry. I still love you nonetheless.[?]

And this was hillarous and sweet, so it makes up for the waiting. I was totally cracking up at this. That was karma on its more pure state.

So... thank you Ari (っ◕◡◕)っ ♥~
Kpopism
#33
But I don't really understand the whole best friend that kiss versus boyfriends thing. I really wanted them to be boyfriend and boyfriend :( not bff's with benefits... But nevertheless you are the authornim and I shall see what you have in store for us next :D
Kpopism
#34
“Well,” Chanyeol begins in a shaky voice. “There’s a whole box of bulgogi over there. And I’m really, really hungry. Plus, I really think we should properly bury that goldfish.” 

LOOLOLOLOL I have to admit, I totally thought it was going to be something dirty but this ending to the chapter was so freaking cute omfg omfggggggg
ayeeemaarrt #35
Please make the next chapter the last!
Worlds_Flowerbo
#36
This is just great baekyeol is perfect *fangirling* thi is beutiful great job and the are best friends with benefits this is so fluffy
nigirimeshi #37
Oh my Gosh! T_T This is so perfect! Seriously, you cant imagen my relife right now! And I love how Baekhyuns plan just failed in so many ways bust still worked out somehow :D
I cant belive the next chapter is going to be the last, you can not imagen how much I love this story, I dant want it to end T_T But of coures, I stil want to read on xD
shinees_principessa #38
Finally!
I'm so glad, they're best friends again.... that kiss... and stuff... xD
Awesome chap!
deegyuwoo
#39
Omg. This its really getting better. I was flipping tables all through the fics. Not because I'm enraged but because I'm so all tingly on my feet. The effort baekhyun did is so cute. If only the sky is a little but nicer. But the hell right? This is will about being awkward and up until now you don't fail at it. Perfect as always. And oh you deserved more than you get now and I get the tumblr. its the evil of alll writers. so hey thank you for the update. Thanks. Huggles.
paradoxicy
#40
asdfghjkl where have i been.
why haven't i found this yet.
I WAS MISSING OUT QAQ
<3
dibidibidis
#41
i know i should be happy about the baekyeol and all but...
FISHIEEEEEEE WHY ARE YOU DEAD FISHIEEEEEE SOBS THE FISHIEEEE NO
OMFG I'M LEGIT TEARING
SORRY I'M A BUT THE FISHIEEEE OK
(but d'awww baekyeol and have you ever tried bulgogi that be spicy as )
SUDOKAI #42
YYESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS
peachcloud
#43
Poor fish D;
AMellowFellowYellow #44
Me: "Omg Baek, this is soo AWKWARD! Ha ha, oh wait..."
shineeforever5 #45
HAYYYYY YOUUUU. AYO WASSUP! THEY CAN BE BEST FRIENDS WITH BEST BENIFITS ;) AHHAHAHAHAH I LOVE THIS UPDATE SO FREAKING MUCH :*
panzym
#46
ooomyyyygoood so friggin AWESOME. Finally they get together and hash that out! And Baekhyun finally found out that Chanyeol said I love you during y tiemz! YESSU. When Baekhyun's plan crashed and burned though, I kind of wanted to stop reading cuz I was like holy this is a train wreck and I don't want Chanyeol to open the door and be like wtf you loser get out, but then I realized that wouldn't happen in this story cuz the characters are awesome :D Also lol awkward Kai just being there. Also, it's cool that Jonghyun's being civil about the punch, I kind of hate Key for being the that he is though, but because of him Baekhyun and Chanyeol are now well on their way to being the cutest/awkwardest/bestest couple evar. Anyway. Ranting time done. OMG NO WHY IS IT ALREADY THE LAST CHAPTER COMING UP, SO UNFAIR
Secret_love
#47
i hate the gifs.
why are they so cute.
.
Secret_love
#48
ING KRISUS SAVE ME.
UHUHUHUHUHUHUHUHUHUHUHUHUH
AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH.
LET ME UGLY SOB INTO YOUR BEAUTIFUL LAP.
I LOVE YOU.
That is all.
<3
LucyIncredible
#49
YES! You updated! Update your other story too! That one is REALLY GOOD! lol Update Soon I love this Baekyeol story!:)
OhItsYing
#50
'random video game songs from ten years ago and OSTs of bad dramas' LOL he has unique taste I must say XD
“Boyfriends are stupid. They don’t stay around for long. You’ve been my best friend forever. And I, uh… wanna be best friends… that kiss and stuff… with you. Forever.”
ABSHEDHVNRFMVFGRBNHTBMTGMBMRGVMRG. THAT IS SO SWEET ;________; /tears and snot dribbling down my face. Gross I know. >//<
But if a guy said that to me.......I would've punched him.
Update soon!! :) x
pRiMa_ElF_gRg
#51
OMG! OMG! OMG! They got back! And yes damn y,free n single is awesome~ *starts randomly dancing to the song*
nininguyen50 #52
Why is it that I was only thinking about the fish the whole freaking time??!? lol Yay Baekyeol are together and I hope it stays that way!
Rolllikeadonut
#53
oh my goooooooooosh

THANK YOU THANK YOU!

omfg, this story is so freaking good, fml, and these idiots... FINALLY, HOLY JESUSSSS.

I'M GOING TO CRYYYYYYY, I DON'T WANT THIS STORY TO END OMFG
taemtammie
#54
the poor goldfish will always be remembered...
on the other hand, baekyeol is together!! *throws confetti*
A_Bezarius
#55
I love the chaptr *0* was like... omg
Baek is just... lovely and gross like yeol XDDD
the next is the end? ;A; *fangirl tears*
omg i will wait the last chapter
love u.
ps: Rip Goldfish you always be in my memories ( ´◕ A ◕` )
shawtyshawty
#56
OMFG I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS CHAPTER. THE LAST CHAPTER MADE ME GO URRRG AND SO ANGSTY BECAUSE I WANTED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENED BUT YOU DIDNT UPDATE!! BUT YOU FINALLY DID AND I WUB YOU.

LOL KAI ABANDONING BAEK BUT THATS GOOD, THEY NEED THEIR MOMENT.

THANKS GOD. THOSE TWO DUMMIES ARE FINALLY MAKING UP. /PUKING UNICORNS AND HEARTS/
khjbro #57
BAEKHYUN I FEEL LIKE VOMITING RAINBOWS TOO JESUS THESE IDIOTS FINALLY WORKING OUT OMG THIS IS TOO WONDERFUL I'M SITTING HERE HALF SOBBING AND HALF MAKING WEIRD NOISES JFC
"BOYFRIENDS ARE TEMPORARY AND BAEKHYUN WANTS TO KEEP CHANYEOL FOREVER" NOW THEY CAN BE BEST FRIENDS THAT KISS AND STUFF FOREVER
YOU LITERALLY HAVE NO IDEA HOW MUCH I LOVE THIS FIC I'M GOING TO CRY WHEN IT'S OVER
I'M SORRY FOR ALL THE CAPSLOCK I'M JUST REALLY HAPPY LOLOL
SoftCoyote
#58
That poor goldfish. ;-;
I'm so glad you updated!
And you really do get distracted so easily on tumblr. o.o
I've seen those Exo anons. XD
Happy_Limbless
#59
AH! Things are looking great! Well, if you leave out the whole goldfish dying thing...:( RIP
Vampyreunnie
#60
Name names!!

"y free and single?" I knew you had bad taste but geezus!

"Baekhyun feels his skin heat up at Chanyeol’s touch. To be honest, he wasn’t quite expecting this to happen again. Not so soon at least. But he’s all for it. “And what’s that?” He mumbles into Chanyeol’s neck. It’s soon becoming his favorite place to be."

You are such a cocktease! I was all getting in the mood for some ty fun time and then Dumbyeol goes and talks about cleaning up dead fish. *sigh* Now I feel like I need to go write more Baekyeol . Maybe a sequel to Hips.

Anyway, good update. A little bit longer and it could've been the final chapter but I assume you ended it here for a reason.
Update soon. Remember, I know where you are!
siahna
#61
yayyy! :D this was awesome. I really love this story...
but now I'm sad because it's ending. but I suppose if it's time, it's time...
but maybe this means you'll update the dark side again soon, right? *smiles hopefully*
<3
FrozenTears
#62
:D To the glory that is this story... afjk;ldsafsda;rusaf;saf
.... *drowned in rainbows*
Baekhyun-ah, let's all puke rainbows together!
Myakyuji07
#63
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww. Well aint that a sweet one? Hihihihi. Am feelin bad though about Baek's 'ask for forgiveness' plan coz he tried so hard for it yet it turned out floppy hahah. But of coz the plan shouldnt have to be that perfect simply becoz its Baekyeol we're talking about ^^ They r meant for each other. Heheh <3

Wow its almost over! Never thought time went so fast like this~! I'm happy for u, great job really n___n
craisin
#64
ohmygod kaljgrnlejwrnfajirenljkgnsflzjd;ceorijdvg
^this is what happens when I love something too much and is rendered speechless. And I just..... I think you can tell what I'm feeling right now? Cuz I can't quite properly organise my words so. Butbutbut. oh idk I'm crying and because this is so beautiful and kajfnlorjfa;dojlk so yeah.
jessgo #65
I actually don't read a/n's mostly but yours are really funny. can't wait for last chapters. please don't keep us waiting too long ;A;
abi333 #66
I AM SO HAPPY FOR THIS UPDATE YOU DON'T EVEN KNOW!!! YOU ARE MY FREAKING FAVORITE AUTHOR AND I JUST LOVE YOU AND THIS STORY AND YOUR OTHER STORIES AND YEA. I'M SAD THIS IS ALMOST OVER, I MIGHT CRY. BUT I CAN'T FOCUS ON THAT BECAUSE I'M SO HAPPY THEY ARE FINALLY TOGETHER, AND I'M ODDLY HAPPY ABOUT BAEKHYUN'S FAIL OF A PLAN. AND YEA. I'LL BE HERE ANXIOUSLY AWAITING THE NEXT (LAST *cries*) CHAPTER!!
SweetTaboo
#67
That plan didnt work out but
BUT THINGS ENDED UP GREAT

YOU GO BAEKYEOL
Lala1901
#68
asdkfjiemv---WHATTT?????!?!?!?
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
can't there be at least 2 chapters?!?!
first, you haven't updated in a while, and then you come and tell me that this is the second to last chapter?!
nooo.
brb: dying.
-sobs-
i guess.
UPDATE!!
MomoShines #69
Perfection. >.< ima cry when I read this last chapter I just know it.
reebeegee
#70
*sobs* only one more chapter :( Cracked up way too much when Baek squished the fishy. Poor thing....
ForeverFlippingA #71
Oh dear gawd, I actually started tearing up in this chapter. I was like 'OMFG they are so sweet and JALKHDAFLSDJLKAJDL and dammit just kiss already dammit you're ing in love with each other and blah blah blah' and yeah, that went on for several long minutes or so. OTL XD

This fic is really perfect and beautiful and sweet and I'm puking rainbows all over for Baekhyun (because well his mouth is preoccupied LOLz).

The part where Baekhyun says he doesn't want to be boyfriends but best friends who 'kiss and stuff' because boyfriends are temporary and best friends are forever and he just wants to be with Chanyeol forever KILLED ME. I was about to cry and puke glitter all over the place and I couldn't do both so I made this weird strangling sound at the back of my throat to express my utter happiness.

Srsly, marry me author-nim, or if you don't want to, please accept my love for you because of this beautiful fic. XDDDDD //waits patiently for next update//
reebeegee
#72
tegrwnelkw update! *goes to read*
bambooshoots
#73
YAY
lovable12 #74
ohmygaahhdd!! you're updating!! ;3;
Kpopism
#75
I can't wait to read what happens next :)
dongbangexofan
#76
;___; when are you updating??? its killin meeee ariii
Secret_love
#77
Ugh I'm on the verge of tears and update pl0xxxx.
LOL
baecon
#78
I swear I just teared up around 24 times. ; A ;
Wonderful work! I hope you update soon~
ヽ(;▽;)ノ
Azy_Nams
#79
Please update soon!!!
ShigaPetal
#80
I need to say this. Commenting on chapter 10.
"Tomorrow… Byun Baekhyun is finally a no longer."
This fic is all kinds of perfect. It's making me get finger cramps from spazzing, and it's making me go crazy.
I'll admit the reason I first subbied was because of that glorious M right next to the title. But now? It's so much more.
I like just as much as the next fan, but when it has backstory, when the characters involved are developed to this extent, it makes it more than just . It makes it emotional, and I'd like to thank you so much for that.
So before I plunge into the , while my mind is still clear, I'd like to congratulate you on being a fantastic author.
Not that it matters, coming from me, but I thought I'd mention it.
You should really write more chaptered things, if they're like this, they'll be wonderful as well.
Again, amazing work.
I'm off to chappie 11~
Secret_love
#81
Oh my gosh i love this.
chanyeol in this fic is just.. perfect.
dskfahlihi;hio;ehrkewnlashfkbf
/cannot contain feelings
Platypusrocks #82
I so need a new chapter T____T
Update soon, pleaaaase :3
hikaoru2Min #83
D: PLEASE UPDATE! THIS IS MY 5th TIME READING YOUR STORY! ;A; PLEASE. I'M CRYING.
Female_Onew
#84
Read the comment BEFORE this one, first~! OOOORRR Maybe you meant BAEK followed JJONG to the nurse and I messed up. Damn, I'm sorry. I can be really dumb sometimes. :P <3 AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAND UPDATE FAST UNNIE!
Female_Onew
#85
He feels goosebumps spread along his skin as he remembers the deathly glare Kai shot him as he followed Jonghyun to the office.

I think you meant "Chanyeol" (Chapter 16, paragraph 4, last line) But if you didn't mah bad~! I just love this story so much! (I think I read it, like... 4 times now??) and little stuff like this kinda bother me. Sorry, I just had to point it out. Mian. <3 I love you and OMG THE WAY YOU MAKE KAI A IS JUST EPIC AND HAH HIGHFIVE YOU SHIP JONGKEY~! <33
hikaoru2Min #86
OH HOLY MOTHER CRAP! THIS FANFIC IS NOW ONE OF MY FAVORITE FANFICS EVER. OH GOD. PLEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEE UPDAAAATE!!!
Gloupsidou #87
Please please please pleaseeeee update soon
MondoCorea
#88
ahah really nice ! :D i love how the story is going on! (btw i agree on OnTae pairing X3)
Jordin-Rae #89
No! Y U NO HAVE NEXT BUTTON??
Chansa #90
i love your story :D with the slight awkwardness :D

(maybe it's more than slightly awkward and i'm too awkward to notice it)

anyway, waiting patienly for your update. <3<3:*