I swear to God that I was yelling at my phone when I read that Jonghyun was there O_O i was like "Punch him Channie that's YOUR man!!" and it happened...omfg..I can't even...omo,I'm sorry Jongiee but this is BaekYeol not JongBaek! >.< T-T update soon I love this lots! :D
wow, I'm at a loss for words.
Your fic is amazing, and every time I see that it's updated, my heart does this painful flip cause I know that Chanyeol will be hurt.
I just finished reading Chapter 13 and it's all sorts of amazing :)
I hope you do something that makes Baekhyun and Chanyeol fall apart and then make Baekhyun jealous of Chanyeol, so maybe he goes out with Kim Minhee? I just want Baekhyun to feel the same as Chanyeol has whenever he had a new boyfriend.
Oh, well, as I said before, your story is amazing and I hope you keep up the good work! :)
Omo!!! Ahh Channie get em'!!!! WAIT NOOOOOOO Channie no you can't punch MY jonghyun!!! What are you thinking putting your hands in his cute y face? Wait Baekhyun this is all your fault!!! If only you weren't my favorite bias I would fuss you!! lol Update Soon and Sorry Sorry for my crazy Bias rant!!!^^
LOL, what? I can't... even...
You genius, leaving the chap just there.
I don't even know if this count as a comment. But srsly, I wasn't ready for this, and now I just can't...
You little genius.
I CAN'T BELIEVE CHANYEOL PUNCHED JONGHYUN OUSIHDKALDJAKDAKD IT IS SO AMAZING!!! it made me so happy I LOVE YOU <3
I don't know why, but I just have the feeling that you will finish this fic pretty soon ~~ so, pleeeeeeeeeeease don't do it! Ç_Ç
omg, I'm so awkward and.. yep, just ignore me e_e
I literally squealed when I saw this fic in my "updated subscriptions" alert. Thank you so much for updating! I love everything about this. I need more!!! hehe <3
Omo I love you for updating, just finished reading chapter 12 and saw this and was like lkadsfdwlkjlksd!!!
But seriously, Baekhyun is such an idiot!! How can he be so oblivious to the situation and he thinks he doesn't deserve Chanyeol?? Well let me tell you, you don't unless you ditch the idea of going out with Jonghyun and confess to Chanyeol already!!
T.T Baekhyun you must be deaf if you didn't hear Chanyeol say "I love you" for like a million times!! Anyways, just wanted to say I LOVE this fanfic and appreciate it so much that your updating although your so busy!!
OH MY GOD. THIS FANFIC IS AMAZING! AND I AM SERIOUSLY CRYING RIGHT NOW. BAEK IS MY BIAS BUT I SERIOUSLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY WANT TO FKING PUNCH HIM IN THE FACE. POOR CHAN BBY! <3 CHANNIIIIIIIIE!! :'( YOU GO! PUNCH DINO IN THE FACE! :(
. . . I want to cry.
YOU SERIOUSLY ED UP!!!!!!!!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
. . . . AND, can we please cut to the chase and just let Baekhyun know that Chanyeol feels the same way?
-_-'
Oh god! You are making it worse and worse for me. This chapter just made me feel really crappy because Bacon thinks toooooooooo much. And even though he knows that he likes/loves Chanyeol he still wants to get together with Jjong UGH I want to freaking punch Baekhyun...
Another thingg- it's about the time-line of this chapter. Personally it felt so sudden..i don't really know how to explain it but- I think I just need sleep, I'll read it a second time tomorrow xD
Dude...this is the first fic where I kinda love Kai and want to throttle Baekhyun.
Even when this fic ends, I will still firmly believe that Chanyeol is too good for Baek but I support his choice because love is imperfect and I have been there myself.
Even so... *virtual punches Baek for being such an idiot*
OMFG!!
CHANYEOL!!!
Thats right, if Baekhyun is too stupid to get it, might as well show him whats direcly infront of his face! But im still a little worried because of Baekhyun.. That kid, srsly!
Im dying for the next chapter!
The thought of Chanyeol actually punching Jonghyun is kinda funny... I mean, considering the height difference, that must be an awkward angle to swing with just to hit his face down there lol
JUST GOT REAL. IAKHFSNKJSHFKJDG CHANYEOL, I CANNOT EVEN EXPRESS HOW PROUD OF YOU I AM RIGHT NOW. THAT'S RIGHT, MAKE YOUR CLAIM. oh my god jjong does NOT deserve baek, not when channie's ALWAYS BEEN THERE. baek needs to stop being an idiot, too. is he seriously that oblivious to his best friend's raging LOVE for him?? i honestly can't even ._.
YEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH CHANYEOL
omg baekhyun i'm going to kill you for being so stupid.
...then again... i am 100% guilty of doing the exact same thing he's doing...
can kai punch baekhyun in the face? to make him come to a realization? i'd be okay with that instead.
Chanyeol punched my y shortie Jjong >.< !! Jjong will be very shocked at yeollie's action . Poor yeollie , he realised that baekkie just used him . Baekkie , you must know that you truly loved yeollie and jjong is merely your crush . Yeollie i'm crying for you *hugging yeollie*
This fanfic is my life. I've seriously never been so happy about a fanfic being updated. I don't even normally comment on fanfics either. What are you doing to me ;A;
HELL TO THE YES. OK. I've just logged on and seen that you've updated 2 chapters. Firstly, I hated you for making Baekyeol so awkward. And then I hated Baekyeol for not saying a thing to each other despite being best friends. And now I love Chanyeol for punching Jonghyun. Baekhyun needs a punch off Kai to get his act together.
Thanks for the update! XD
WHAT THE ACTUAL IS HAPPENING!? I mean I'm happy that Chanyeol punched Jonghyun, but BAEKHYUN NEEDS TO REALIZE THAT HE WANTS CHANYEOL! Chanyeol doesn't deserve this...
AHhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!! Chanyeol is soooooooooooooooooooooo sweat!!!!! Poor baby has gone through so much!!! Baekhyun wae you torture him!!!?? He's giving his LIFE to you!!! Gawl, I'm getting way to over emotional because of this story...I love it! Lol. Good luck with your exams!!
Chanyeol!!!! His heart is going to suffer a lot when he finally realize that he was used. Even if Baek do have feelings for him everything was because of Jjong from the start.
OMG He gave up school for him, I totally hate that part because it doesnt matter if you love someone with all your heart, you have to love yourself first. I think Yeol needs a little more of his Baek-free time in order to put himself 1º and then try to give his heart to someone, he can't just give someone EVERYTHING.
UGGGG Ugly crying right now. I love this fic so much.
PS. The "I love you shower" my creys+
I have an exam tomorrow and I saw the update and just needed to read this.
Sorry for my english, spanish is my mother language.
omo904 wrote almost the exact same thing I wanted to write xD But yeah...it's sad to read from chanyeol's pont of view, he's gone through so much just because he had to fall in love with his best friend and the things he did for his love. GOD HAPPY VIRUS DON'T DO THIS TO ME WITH YOUR FEELINGS! /cries
I hope it'll work out soon for those two...my heart can't handle that much angst at the moment. xD
So many feels. <3
I just want to snuggle Channie till he feels better. I'm glad Baekhyun has realised, maybe now he'll stop been such an and get rid of Jonghyun. :D I enjoyed Chanyeol's POV, I secretly wanted more but heh...it was good to learn more about Channie's feelings for Baek. ^^ Can't wait for the next chapter~!
Oh gooooooooooooooood, Baekhyun didn't dream of the "i love you"-shower. This is so good, I might just cry. One of the best baekyeol ffs I've read so far.
So, a Chanyeol POV. This is damn lovely, I might say. I can relate with him so much, about the science school part (I left my hometown friends behind for my homeland's best science high school and I'm not regretting one second of it. Maybe he would've been happy as well, but I didn't have a Baekhyun here at home :D) but I still feel that he shouldn't have skipped over his dream just to be with Baekhyun (and at that moment it was a dead-end one-sided love too... Sad. I feel really sad about missed chances and .).
And he DID reply to Baekhyun. Awws. Love is such a strong word and such a strong feeling... Usually I feel that fanfictions use it WAY too soon, but in this context, it worked. Because they have been developing this love for years and now they're seeing it. Cute.
This whole comment is a mess because of my weird train of thoughts, but you get the point. I loved this snippet, but I can't wait to see how this story proceeds :)
i won't even lie, i usually come to AFF to laugh at bad fanfic, because there's a lot of it. which is why i didn't have an account until just now. but now i do, because i was desperate to leave a comment on this.
i read fanfic a lot. baekyeol especially because i am hopelessly biased towards them... and this one is my favourite. out of all of them. and yes i have read everybody's favourite absolute chanyeol - it's up there in my favourites but this one beats it. you get the awkwardness absolutely perfect and i love that. i love that not everything goes well but it's not in an annoying 'lol look at all the carnage' kind of way; just realistically, because we all know that if it can go wrong then it will. everybody's reactions are spot on. i felt horribly for chanyeol during the part about him skipping out on the school he'd been dying to go to because of his best friend / first love / complete and utter dunce.
baekhyun as well, i think his oblivion until now has been perfect - to the point where i'm yelling WHY DON'T YOU GET IT, but not to the point where i'm actually questioning whether or not he's even human. portraying him as realistically oblivious is hard to do and my hat is way, way off to you for managing it.
when i started reading this, i saw how the plot was going to go and anticipated something zany and stupid and awful to laugh at - because it had the potential to go that way, and most fanfiction is not that good. but this is beautiful and painful and all the good things that i didn't expect. please keep on keeping on and i'll end this with the cliche hope that maybeyouwillupdatemoreduringsummer hi yes that's all.
(hope your exams went well btw! i just had mine too.)
Well f*** it. LOL Sorry I curse when I'm too emotional. Chanyeol is hurt, a lot and i cant stand it, it makes me feel like crying T.T Urgh Chanyeol u've sacrified so much i feel like telling u that u deserve someone better but but.. BAEKHYUN IS THE ONLY ONE FOR U!!!
Gahhhhh Byun Baekhyun u're so stupid and oh my God I love u, but u really deserve a knock on the head. And prolly a slap on the face too, LIKE SERIOUSLY. HOW CANT U SEE CHANYEOL????
Grrr Baekhyun need to do something to make it up for everything, really. ;( If not i wont be as happy when they really do get together.. Wait omg lol I got too carried away, arent I? >.<" OTL OTL
i dont know, but you always make me somewhat excited that i feel giddy everytime i see an update of of this. It's just because this story is so good. And i barely make story comments as of now, but i really wanted to do this.. Ahahah.. Please update soon... Im so excited to read more of this...
So Chanyeol didn't know that Baekhyun "uses" him for Jonghyun?omg, he will be very sad... T____T
after all of his sacrifice.. omg.. Baekkieeee... open your mind, you idiot cute little thing!!!!!!
Channie had sacrified a lot for Baekkie , Baekkie why don't you realise how much he loves you dude ! Throw that super short JongHyun away ( Sr my y Jjong ) and go dating with Channie . Don't know how Channie feel when he knows Baekkie's reason to ask him make out with him !
Awww yeah Chanyeol's POV. This just makes me think Baekhyun's more a turd for not realising how much his best friend has done for him. /facepalms
Love your writing though so thanks for the update~
OMG im so glad you updated! Im addicted to this story and this chapter gave me just the right fix, Im so high rn @_@ I loved Channies pov, I cant wait for the next update!
it hurts damn much. i'm rooting for you as well Chanyeol even 'tho my bias is Baek baby but if he ever leaves you for that 'stupid shorty' u said i will be in ur side. Baek is TOO painfully oblivious and i'm starting to get tired of his behavior :( Chanyeol be strong yes? if it's time, leave him and give ur little poor heart a break, k? :)
omgomgomg channie's pov was just kjhlkhjfhhsdndkljkls seriously..the end when he said ILY over and over again ;A; i hope you update soon..baekhyunnie...why are you so blind?! ;A;
fhdbfksajndgjnsk The ending of it :D Now baekhyun just needs to realize that it wan't just him dreaming when he heard Chanyeol saying he loved him. gencskfjskladlslk
I have a headache, so i'm not going to leave a long comment today. Just letting you know that, as always, i loved the chap.
Every time you update i got all excited. Each time there is a new chap, i'll go to spazz to my friend and start babbling, like "omg, what should i do? should i read the last chapter again before the new one? or the last two?"[?].
Yep, so, thank you for updating even though you have finals.
AND I AM SO DSAOIDJASOJDIOASHFOASDJIAOSGFHAOSJDAIOSKLFMASIDHASOFIASO RIGHT NOW AND I'M CRYING HARD BECAUSE I JUST ALL OVER MY OWN WORK AND I CAME HERE AND THEN READ THIS AND THEN JUST CALM DOWN BECAUSE THIS IS AWESOME AND MADE ME UNDERSTAND CHANYEOL A LOT MORE AND OMG I'M SO SCREWED I'VE LOST AN ENTIRE PAGE OF WORK AND OMG THIS FIC AND OMG I'M A MESS MY FEELINGS MY FEEEEEEEELINGS
WAhhhhhh!!!!! I missed your updates ;_; I've been looking forward each day checking asianfanfics daily to see if you updated. Your baekyeol is one of my favourites :D. Thank you for working so hard to bring us such an awesome story XD XD XD
omg. ohmaigawd. Chanyeol's POV, the missing link! The crucial part of the puzzle to make it feel more complete... thank you for including this! Since we already know and feel how much pain Baekhyun's going through, it would only be just to leave out Chanyeol's pain too! And what a pain it is, I hadn't realized the stress Chanyeol was under with school and his future and stuff... he'll be even more heartbroken when he finds out Baekhyun only asked him to have cuz he wanted experience for someone else ;_; BUT he'll also be happy to know Baekhyun loves him back! Though Baekhyun thinks Chanyeol rejected him even though he didn't and now I'm just rambling and re-telling the whole plotline. Anyway. UPDATE GRAHHAHAGEIEOG;JIDFS >_<
i havent commented in a while so here. oh my ghad oh my ghaddd.... chanyeol must have been so depressed when he didnt get in because of cute little bacon. well then. i hope next chapter will be good ~ and lotsa Baekyeol. Thank youu ^^~
First time reading it and I'm already hooked. I love attention-seeker Chanyeol. Specially if the one he wants to look at him is Baekhyun. Such a cutie.
Haiiiii, so I've been a silent reader all the time but now I decided to comment lol.
And first I wanna express my feeling by these words;
ASDFGHJKL;PHGFTYRFGHKLMNSDRT
I ING LOVE THIS FIC ; ~~~~ ;
I love how you write it, it feels so natural and real and I can really feel what the characters are feeling like srsly this is one of the most beautiful baekyeol fic I ever read ; wwww ;
This fic gives me so many feels and I even creep your fic for like everyinghour just to know whether you've updated or not lolol. I love how you develop their relationship ; w ;
I hate bacon for kept denying his feeling but den he realized his feeling and why didn't chanyeor said he loves him back daheckkkk and bacon needa stop thinking about that jonghyun like srsly dewd can't he realize if this is his story with yeolo not with jonghyun asfhkjgkhhjl ლ(ಥ益ಥლ) /dumps jonghyun into the ocean
and adding on,
THAT GIF ON CHAPT. 13
UGH ITS JUST SO BEAUTIFUL I MEAN THE WAY THEY SMILE WHEN THEY TALK TO EACHOTHER AND JUST LET ME HUG THEM OH GOD MY BIASES.
ohohoho. hope I'm not bothering you~ but you said you liked spazzing comments. and I spaz whenever my precious bacon does ANYTHING. wae so cute~~
this fic. oh gawd. IT'S SO BEAUTIFUL.
theriously. (I'm seriously going to hell for making fun of thehun's lisp but its so cute ; A ;)
THE FACT THAT BAEKYEOL BOTH LOVE EACHOTHER AND THEY DONT KNOW IT.
GAH. I JUST WANT TO SQUISH THEM.
update soon~ tharanghae~(brb going to the depths of fangirl hell for this but YORO.)
I just found this fan fic and..... I have tears in my eyes...it's just so overwhelming...I mean I read baekyeol ALL the time.but this fic....I Donno.... It just gives me such a deep impact and I just finished this at like 5:30 am and I just feel so gaaaaahhhhh ;A; and I felt this really overwhelming emotion when I read the part where they first tried it.i mean...especially when they laughed becoz of yeollie's boxers and then they laid facing each other....GAAAAAAAHHHHHHH I just wish bacon wasn't so densed -_____-" seriously baekhyun-ah....you're just making things more complicated and harder for the both of you.I just hope Kai butts in soon to salvage the situation or something.or baekhyun insisting on another round and yeol screams out his love for baek during his or something.seriously,reading this fic weakens my heart...in a good way,that is^^ hehe I hope you'll update soon :]
Well dammit. ;~~~; So many feelings in my heart i just dunno how to convey them.. Just prolly wanna knock Baekhyun's on the head and put some sense into him. OTL Forget Jonghyun, will yah Baek? U're with Chanyeol now! ToT
Gah ok now I'll anticipate ur next update, but no pressure though! ^^
So I should be sleeping so I don't fail my finals tomorrow, but I read ALL of it from chapter one to the most recent update and can I just say, I LOVE THIS SO MUCH. Thank you for existing, dear author. I'm not kidding in the sligtest btw. This is seriously one of the best fics I've ever read. I cried along with Baekhyun. That's how you know you're a FREAKING AMAZING writer; when people feel emotions other than "OMFG SECKSY TYMES OH YEAH!". Sooo, yeah. I really love this <3
;~~~~~; I'M SOOOOO FREAKING GLAD THAT BAEKHYUN REALIZED WHAT KIND OF LOVE HE FEELS FOR OUR HAPPY VIRUS, IT MAKES ME TEAR UP! But on the other side, now Baekhyun thinks that he's in deep because he's so freaking dense that he doesn't even realize that Chanyeol is in love with him and that makes me tear up even more.... Then there's Chanyeol with his apologies even though he doesn't even have to...that guy UGH
And that one paragraph with Chanyeol cursing and his hand placement, I don't really know why but I loved it..actually read it twice before continuing (is that weird? ^^;;)
Ah~ this was another great chapter and I can't wait to see how it's going to continue. :D
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