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sorairo #1
I miss you so much!
Baekhyun is very confused! But I knows he loves Chanyeol
And is so sweet Chanyeol! I know that was what I wanted to talk to Baekhyun!
Kahlem
#2
I missed youu! And I missed this fic!! Awww! They're so cute and awkward am I'm so happy Baek realised it right after having with Yeollie, instead of breaking his heart by going to Jonghyun. Bacon will probably break Yeol's heart anyway but I hope they'll realise soon they both LUB eachother!
Shinee_World_Bunny
#3
OMFG. LOL. I decided there so much many mistake on my first comment. HAHAHAHA ^^" That was just my spazz attack moment. :3 I'm sure you can understand me author-nim. Ehee.
I'M STILL SPAZZING THE FACT THAT BACON LOVES EGGYEOL!
I'M A HAPPY BUNNY!
Shinee_World_Bunny
#4
OMFGOMFGOMFGOMFGOMFGOM!!! AHHHHH! THEY ARE IN LIVE WITH EACH OTHERR!! BACKGROUNDN,FINALLY YOUU REALIZE! BUT OMG. THEY DON'T KNOW THIS!!! AH T!! MY BREAKFAST COUPLE! MY SHIPPING HEART CAN'T TAKE THIS! KSNSKSNXNNXNXNXKDNDKSOWWORIORRP! I HAD TO STOP EATING MY RUCE CAUSE I HOT EXCITED! BSJSHSJSKSOSLS! /going to continue spazzing
I'm so sorry about the caps lock. :3
Ehee!
Bacon and Eggyeol is the perfect match. <3
Asdfghjjl! Thank youu for updating! Can't wait for the next chapter! KYAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!
NoonaAyu
#5
That's it. ing awesomely awkward. In these situations awkwardness is uhm... cute. And Chanyeol's lack of stamina yay :D
Can't wait for another chapter <3
barbieocaralho
#6
OMGOMGOMGOMGOMG baekhyun is sooooooo wrong and chanyeol sooo love him back but chanyeol can't say it because baekhyun won't let him and also he doesn't know what baekhyun's thinking and... You make a mess of me, okay? I'm holding back my tears here \para and i hate you for not updating before. LIE, I love you for bringing this T_T
kyuwookissme
#7
im gwangasm on tumblr (which i know you've prolly forgotten haha)
and lemme tell u the present is awesomeeeee!!!!
ily ily ily!!!

BH likes CY, CY likes BH :'))
one of them needs to be a man and confess!!!
i hope its chanyeol, but baekhyun is good too.
no, at this point, idc!!
this update is awesome and have i told how i love you?
nigirimeshi #8
OMFG! This chpater is just.. plain awesome! I was so waiting for stupid, lovely Baekhyun to discover his feelings! This is the reality I want! xD
You totally made my day! Did I tell you that I love your story? Because I really do and my freakin mind cant stop rotating around this story @_@
Seriously, thanks a lot for updating and I cant wait for the next chapter! :D
FFaith1708
#9
Was totally not expecting this to be updated because you haven't done so in an age and a half so this was a lovely surprise!
I feel like despairing right now after reading that though.
GAAAHHHHH BAEKHYUN LOVES CHANYEOL. He just needs to stop being a coward and actually tell him properly.
This was my favourite line. Like totally. 'He clings to Chanyeol even harder. Because he knows without a doubt he’s just ruined their friendship forever.' That was so beautiful, I can't even describe my love for it.
ALSO, SUPER MEGA LOOKING FORWARD TO KAISOO AND THE NEXT CHAPTER~ You don't have to worry about updating 36287 times everyday if you're busy! :L
Thanks for this update~
panzym
#10
omg scenarios, DO IT.
I'm in the last 2 weeks of my junior year at university, so I feel you haha.
BUT OMG THE FIC. OMG BAEKHYUN YOU IDIOT, JUST TELL CHANYEOL YOU LOVE HIM!! Gah the uality is nothing without emotion, and the crazy chemistry between these two is amazing! I'm glad Baekhyun finally realized his immense feelings for his best friend, but he's gotta realize sometime that the feelings are pretty reciprocated!
zeeexoblueicy1 #11
oh dear. I wasn't prepared to wake up and find this gem updated. now I am just squealing about the place <3 asdfghj i don't know if I've said it enough, but I LOVEEE this fic, and your writing, and EVERYTHING~
megamize #12
Ugh wow, this story is absolutely amazing. I can't wait for the next chapter.
sheeria #13
omg,what are you gonna do now, Baekhyun...

and yes, i'm totally happy when you update this.thank u so much ^^
jagi-yah #14
UGH. BAEKHYUN YOU MOTHERTRUCKER. It's hard enough just to ship you with my bias and now you go do this shiet! xD

Lovelovelove the fic tho! <3
jessgo #15
Oh you were on vacations???? Ah no wonder. Kept checking back frantically for updates. Welcome back! Hope you had a good time. And yay for new chapter. Almost shed a tear when i saw you updated ㅠㅠ yay for awkward baekyeol ❤
DemonPox #16
What the Chanyeol? Is he even going to say something or?
Probably he thinks like a hundred things... maybe he thinks Baekhyun was thinking about Jonghyun and now happy virus is feeling like , insecure and totally lonely.

Funny parts:
LOL at Chanyeol, did he really came in his mouth juts like that? OMFG
I don't want to talk so surprise !!!
Chanyeol cursing! WHAT WAS HE THINKING? I WANT TO KNOW, PLEASE. *Sobs*

"Half of him just wants to run out the door screaming, but then that idea quickly falls flat because whenever he runs away, it’s always Chanyeol he runs to" poor little thing. *Cries everywhere*

"He clings to Chanyeol even harder. Because he knows without a doubt he’s just ruined their friendship forever." Yes, thank you for breaking my heart here, I was thinking the same. Now he is going to feel like ship and Chanyeol is going to feel like and I'm going to feel like .

It's okay if you don't update for a while, my feelings on the other hand are pissed :D

I'm starting the ty part of the semester too so I know exactly how it feels, when you want to freak out just sit and breath ;) Good Luck!!!
13aholic #17
Chanyeol can u just please spill it out at Baek's face that you freaking LOVE him so much that it hurts every time Baek goes out with Jonghyun?
Drawingfishies
#18
Omg omg omg omg!!!!! Let me love you!!!! This
fic is amazing!
I was so happy to see you updated! And it was such an awesome chapter TT
Can't wait for the next update!
RavenRage #19
BAEKHYUN. YOU RETARDED PIECE OF . Aaah...but it makes it so good...
I'd like to see this particular scene, as weird as it sounds...if they made a drama out of this...omg asdfgh...
shinees_principessa #20
Chanyeol should really tell him... like... NOW!
I mean... Baekhyun already told him, he loves him... so where's the big deal? XD
letsfly01 #21
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THE UPDATE! I have been waiting for this fic to pop up on my updated subscriptions list <3
I love this so much. Thank you so much for this chapter, I am soooo glad that Baekhyun has realized his feelings <3 ahhh, this was too perfect.
Thank you, thank you, thank you! <333
khjbro #22
BAEKHYUN NOOOOOOOOOOO YOU IMBECILE TALK ABOUT YOUR FEELINGS THINGS AREN'T WHAT YOU THINK
Gurl, you're pulling on my heart strings! Great chapter. Seriously!
biigbanng #23
*flips a table* ( I'm on my phone so I can't wrote essays like the rest lol) hopefully this is enough for now.
LucyIncredible
#24
Yessssssss!! Yes ye yes yessss ye yesssss!!!!!!!! Baekhyun knows he wants to have chanyeols adopted baby now!!! Woooo.....author unnie is so cool!^^

Okay so Omg ahhhhh! I fly like paper get high like planes! What was that? Anyyyyyywayyyyyyyyy, unnie update soon this story is just starting! And Key really did set all this off! ........THANKS OPPA NOW HE KNOWS WHO HE REALLY LOVES WITH ALL HIS BALLS HEARTS!!!!!:) so touching....
monaharmony
#25
Ahhhhhhh!!! Update!!! *runs around frantically* Amazing update too!! I loved it :D So much emotional angst! Baekhyunnie, why can't you see that Chanyeollie loves you toooooo!!! …. :D Can't wait for the next update :)
darkrose123 #26
I've been waiting for your update...FOREVER !!!! XD. I'm glad that you finally updated though :D.
Poor Channie...I want him just to say that he loves Baekie tooo T_T Why must you make them so confused!!!! lkajhdf;lajh;dfa
Anyways, I love your story very much and its one that I check to see if it updates EVERYDAY.
Keep up the awsome Baekyeol XD fav OTP XD XD XD.
abi333 #27
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I've been missing your updates!! Gosh! this is like the best story on here!! I can't even get over how....REAL it is!! It's not the perfectness of most of the story's on here. It's so much more AWKWARD like real life! Lol. Woo for Baekhyun admitting to himself!! I'm so excited for more, and for the Kaisoo story!! Oh, and good luck on finals!!
TanXueLei #28
*THROWS YOU AND BAEKHYUN OUT OF MY 3RD FLOOR WINDOW* (屮ಠ益ಠ)屮
You know, before I read this chapter, I was reading an article about this Japanese guy who cut off his , cooked it and served it to 5 people who paid a load of money for it...and then I got the the part of the fic...
(✖╭╮✖)
/not that I'm saying it's horrible, this chapter was so cute and fluffy lyk omg. Maybe I shouldn't have read that article before it LOL
craisin
#29
SOOOOOOOOOOO AWKWARD IT'S LIKE MY OWN PERSONAL KIND OF FLUFF HEEHEEEEE. AND HE'S FINALLY IN LOVE WITH YEOL YAYYYYYYYY :DDDDDDDDD
reebeegee
#30
So good and so awkward. I love it :D
Vampyreunnie
#31
So like, again it's awkwardly hot and yet, just like last time, I wanna punch Baek. He's using my Channie, even if he's using him without knowing that he's NOT using him. They love each other but he's so frigging spastic! Get a clue already, diva!

I've rec'd this to a bunch of people and they all loved it, though I'm sure it's not as much as I do since I seriously do check every half hour or so, that's how obsessed I am. I've never been this crazy about a fic and I've been reading/shipping couples for YEARS.

Can't wait for the next update. I know there's bound to be conflict once Jonghyun comes back and I know that Kibum was up to something when he made that suggestion but I trust that Baekyeol will come through it together.
Nanukiss #32
this is the best baekyeol fic!!!!!!!!! I lote it, I suffered waiting formar this andy cant wait for the next update. I love how you write them <3 you are amazing
cupcakemini5
#33
?AKLMJAJDNH MakjshkjdhjshskjkfjjkskjsKJDFKKDJSKLDSKLDFS FEELS FEEL FEELS FEEL FEELS FEELS FEELS FEELS FEEEEEELS. okay so firstly? omg. baekhyun. that couldn't have been any more awkward and sweet and /perfect/ secondly, you're the biggest idiot in the world because dammit, chanyeol is so utterly in love with you and HAS been for YEARS and YOU're afraid of REJECTION? ing confess, deer god. just... that breaks my heart ;-; that baek is so oblivious and so crushed by the thought of rejection AND YES HE FINALLY DISCOVERED HIS LOVE SO SOBBING. chanyeol should confess. he has to. he has to NOW. or kai can be that one friend that makes it all happen (again) and jjong, aight. if baek ends up dating him, i will burn all the kittens in the world. i need to end this comment now b/c it's ridiculous and makes no sense, yay c: okay but. FEELS.

also. subbign to that kaisoo b/c it's kaisoo, and otp.
Lala1901
#34
YOU FINALLY UPDATED!!!!
DX
-tear, tear-
I was waiting like forever for you to update!!
and lets just say.... you didn't disappoint. I'm happy that he finally realized his feelings BUT WHY DID HE STOP CHANYEOL FROM SAYING IT.
-SOBBING FOREVER-
....
I want something fluffy... I want them together damn it!!
...but I understand some things have to happen first. . . BUT STILL!!
....Now that I think about it, it kind a cracks me up that Chanyeol was the only one who got any.

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
MsMonster
#35
I am so happy I just might explode *happy dances around my house while people give me strange looks* I have been checking my AFF every freaking day like "did it update yet?" and then my other stories would update, but it just wasn't as exciting. Ad then you updated, and I am so happy, and I want to hug you for making this story and I love all of its awkwardness, and confusion, and everything. And baekhyun has interesting ways of keeping people from talking *ahem* not like I am complaining. Surprise s are always welcome (I honestly don't like that word either XD) But anyways, I am joyous and I can't wait for your next update! and asksl;akd; CHANYEOL SAY SOMETHING :O
MyNameIsJazzyy
#36
omg finally you updated. i was slowly dying in my room cause u werent updating. please oh please update tomorrow. the wait was paiiiinnnfull. just like a getting ed for the first time.. pleaseeee~ I BEG YOU .
SoftCoyote
#37
When I saw this story was the updated story I just about died of happiness omg. ;_; AND THIS CHAPTER WAS SO AMAZING! I still want to punch Baekhyun tbh.
Vampyreunnie
#38
Omg, finallyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy! I literally check every half hour. Now, off to read!
reebeegee
#39
bvscakjhfvakjbekjwn;lkgjlasdgha dda jgkda g You updated! Now I must go read after I am done emptying the dishwasher.
omo904 #40
and to think that i wasn't dying already...but you HAD to put that chanyeol gif in there. OHMAHGAWD. LKJFDLKJSNF.
i love this fic. i'm so upset that i just found it.
ultimateSHINeelove
#41
am I th only one checking my updates everyday for this fic? I will seriously jump up in the air when this story is updated again. xD
DemonPox #42
I LIED A FEW MORE THINGS. Just a few.

Also an standing ovation for Chanyeol's idea of buying condoms and lube. Little Baekhyun wanted to have but he didn't prepare a thing... right... Did he think to do it completely dry? They were both s and still Chanyeol bought condoms for them to be protected and lube for Baekhyun comfort.

LOL at Chanyeol comming a few moments later and that make me love that story even more BECAUSE THAT FACT WAS SOOOO REAL, that is how actually happen, most guys prepare alone (with his hands) to last longer but just a few actually "perform" okay in their "debut day".

ALSO Yeol was totally bold just jerking Baekhyun off, an applause for him too. He totally cares about his friend awww

That's it. It's 11:07pm in my country and I have to study a little.
Good Night and please update soon.
DemonPox #43
Yes, me again...

I hate this kind of plots when the person just want to lose his ity because that is totally absurd to me, but I know it happens... I'm 22 years old, I'm still a and I don't give a single . I have a few boyfriends before and we play a little (if you know what I mean, i have no idea why I write this kind of things in the internet, fml) but we never had because I just didn't feel like, not because I wasn't as hell (what I even writting) just because I looked at them and I was like... "No... I don't going to do it with you" and simply as that we never did it.

You may think I'm waiting for "the one" but I don't think so, I'm just waiting for someone I really trust. I actually have really good luck with the guys I've date, they have been really caring and lovely and cute but I always felt there is something missing, and just when I find that person I will do it, maybe he will be the one and maybe not AND that is why I really love the way you write the "" scene (for me was like fluff all over the place lol) because it was not just hardcore and people ing, it was "the moment", the moment when Baekhyun realized and actually felt his friend for the first time, because he loves him and he knows it, he just needed to watch him in a different light to understand what was inside him

This totally broke my heart: "But the thing that scares him is the fact that he doesn’t know how he loves him. Not like a boyfriend… definitely not. Because boyfriends are temporary and Baekhyun wants to keep Chanyeol forever." I just said "I'm in love with this fic"

Please continue like this and PLEASE give us Yeol's POV of the "proposal time" because I was totally heartbroken because Yeol totally thought Baekhyun was about to tell him that he love him, right? also I want to know Yeol's thoughts that they in school and during y time.

I will stop here, forgive my enormous comment(s) and remember my 1º language is spanish.
DemonPox #44
I found this story like two hours ago and I read every single chapter. I totally love it. I thought you were going to go for a different path but I really enjoy what you did with the idea. I wasn't really into this pairing, I thought they were cute but this weekend I totally fell for them because of your fic and one that broke my heart yesterday.

Well, about this story, I actually think everybody know and that is just suuuuper awkward. Personal story time: I was dating this guy from University and I went to his house for the first time. I never tell my mom when I'm dating or have a crush on someone but that they I arrived to my house and my mom really straightforward asked me if I had with him that they. I did NOT, but was suuuper awkward because she just knew we were dating... end of personal story.

So... I think Kai, Sehun and that other guy know because they weren't there that day during lunch and Yeol *precious human being* was telling them everything and I think Yeol is smart enough to have some sort of plan that of course only he understands. I think Kai is pissed because of the thing.

Also I have a few theories about Jonghyun participation in this story, so please don't judge me:
1. He is into Baekhyun and Key is into Jjong (because I'm a Jongkey shipper) So, Key being the person he is totally noticed Yeol crush and is trying to help Baekhyun to understand his feelings. Also Key wants Jjong for himself of course.

2. My second theory is the most awkward... everybody knows and everybody is trying to help Yeol. I don't even know, everything is really suspicious, but I hadn't read about interactions between both groups of friends so I can't be sure, but just imagine how awkward would be if both groups were trying to make that relationship possible.

I'm going to continue this in another comment because I read all the chapters just now and I have a lot to say also my mother language is spanish so please don't hate in my grammar. :D
Hellli #45
Ooh and I'd really like to know, what Chanyeol said right here: "His mind is still swirling, so it comes as a total surprise to Baekhyun when Chanyeol suddenly crashes their lips together, crying out something that doesn’t make it to Baekhyun’s brain." :) Prettty pleaase? Seeing this from Chanyeol's POV would be frigging awesome. Even a short snippet/flashback or something. :)
Hellli #46
Okay, just read this in one go and I'm going to comment on the last few chapters. First of all, I'm pretty sure that Kai and Key are plotting together (Key's advice was just so...sinister :D), because Key is madly in love with Jjong. Or something. But yeah, they're plotting together, right?
Second, I freaking LOVE how awkward their first time together was. And how Chanyeol just exploded (literally, lol) after hearing the 3 little words from Baekhyun. It shows how deep his love is and how the emotional suprise won over the physical act alltogether. Perfect.
And third, please don't make Chanyeol suffer any (more) longer! (Okay, for the development of this plot he can suffer a bit, but not for TOO long... :( ) He is such a puppy, I just want to hug him and tell him that Baek actually loves him... He just doesn't know it yet. And Baek is such an in the first 11 chapters of the story... I really really felt like crying when Yeol accepted his request because of his love for him. Oh, my shipper heart.
oikimu #47
OK holy crap. This is the best.
I pretty much hated Baekhyun through this whole story until this chapter. It seems to me like he's finally actually seeing Chanyeol.
I really hope Chanyeol doesn't get hurt anymore because I've felt so bad for him! Baekyeol forever!
NoonaAyu
#48
I just, whoa! I couldn't help myself and read all chapters at once lol...
It is indeed awesome story. Great plot... Just awesome and ugh I love it! Update soon I can not wait any longer yay <3
Alipo90 #49
OMG! this is amazing, I love your story :)
sheeria #50
Hi, new reader here ^^
i feel really regret that i found your story just by now..and i spent three freaking amazing hours to read all of the chapters.. and omg..it's really worth it. this is really great!!!
i really like it. like.. a lot.

aah, idk what to say anymore. I love Chanyeol's character here (well, i always love him anyway hehe), and eventho Baekhyun being an idiot super clueless here, but i love him too, no matter what. He wants to keep Chanyeol forever, selfish tho, but soon he will realize his feeling rite?? rite??? or NO? ><
and i.. somehow, kinda scared to Jonghyun and the gangs.. did they planning something bad to Baby Baekhyun?

oh well, too many questions from me, sorry.. ><
keep updating okay? i'm looking forward to your story!! ^^
RavenRage #51
sleep. I wouldn't be even able to, after not reading all chapters.
Because. This. Is. ing. Amazing.
I...ah. Am kind of speechless. I fell in love wih this. *insert great keyboard smash*
Ugh, I think you must be genius - to come up with this idea. Like seriously, I can't even imagine how Chanyeol must fell - knowing Baek didn't really like him like that, but still agreeing because he's too much in love. And since I freaking CAN'T from this kind of fics, where the pairing is forever hiding and denying their love, making it super mega ultra flangsty...can I marry this fic? Pretty please? @-@
I couldn't tear myself of, I swear...
And the last chapter...seriously...I can't...it's so perfect and intense and still in denial and I wanna die. How Channie got of just after minute, damn my stomach...Seriously, I think this was one of the most original I've ever read, and trust me, I've read an insane amount of different fanfics...and overall very very original plot. *sob sob*
A-W-E-S-O-M-E *le crying because of it* <3 <3 <3 <3
kpopalways6 #52
THIS IS AMAZING!!! Like seriously, this is the best fanfic I've ever read. EVER. IT'S JUST SO PERFECT. The awkwardness, the characters, the whole story is just.. I don't have words for it. It's like I don't even want this story to end. It's really THAT good.

Really, I could write whole pages on how amazing and perfect this fanfic is.

But I won't.
YOU are the one who should be writing now hahaha :P
PLEASE UPDATE SOON.
<3
viktoretka #53
I LOVE THIS STORY OMG it's become my favorite Baekyeol fic ever and asdfyujkjh your writing is so good. thank you for this ;o; <3
uchouten
#54
LOL I feel kind of awkward cuz I manage to read up to the point with the
but
you seem so insecure about it that I HAVE to say something and not put it off until next chapter because you deserve to know its good. I actually could really feel like..idk. I felt the awkward, and I also felt the transition where Baekhyun realizes he's in love with Chanyeol and it's just...so nice. Simple. IDK I have goosebumps lol! so I thought you should know that
anyway
thank you
I dont feel let down by this fic at all :D
hallyterry
#55
The was, well, perfect actually! It was perfectly awkward and amazing and it fit the story perfectly! This story keeps on getting better and better!
talisman #56
Hi omg, I really love this fic! *____* I stayed up late just to finish all 12 marvelous chapters. I hope you update soon, I'll be waiting! 8D
Kahlem
#57
I didn't know could be this cute and awkward! I can really just feel their awkwardness and it's SOOO CUUTE! I loved it! With them both being unexperienced and all it would have been odd if they'd been really awesome at ;D Chanyeol is too cute, too fast! <3
Worlds_Flowerbo
#58
I love this mmm post soon please ill be wating
I love how Baekhyun confessed
Get away jonghyun got to key or something
Let baekyeol be keke
Ilove you
Ps:new reader i mean new comenter haha^^
Anyeong~
whatsshame #59
/tears up/ Omg..you wrote this (the first time scene) so freaking perfect and I just don't really know how to find the right words. I got this really heavy feeling in my chest and ugh the way you describe everything /sobs/ You are a wonderfull writer and I hope you never ever stop writing!
jessgo #60
new reader!!! so like I started reading this fic yesterday and this is like my second time reading an exo fic. I started at like 3am and omg I stayed up all night reading everything. I finally finished at like almost 6am ((would have had finished earlier if I did stop after every paragraph get my feelings together or bawl my eyes out  idek sobs)) I almost cried at the awkward . it was cute and awkward at the same time. so many feels for chanyeol ;A; ((baekhyun biased though sobs)) oh and I know I'm like 10 chapters behind and maybe others have figured it out but is this fic based on mean girls!?!? wow okay longest comment ever. i really love this fic omg. pls update soon ;A; 
jidrey
#61
Baekhyun's 'I love you' was so unexpected.. but I'm glad he feels SOMETHING! towards Chanyeol. The poor guy had to watch his best friend date several guys... T-T
Oh my gosh!! As freaking awkward as this chapter was, it was so freaking cute!! Only Chanyeol would wear bright Spongebob boxers to go to Baekhyun's friend for love making. xD
cileft #62
so i actually just wanna cry right now ;~;
CuriosityShapeMaker #63
WHAT ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT. I just. I don't even like . It scares the crap out of me. But this is amazing. What are you doing.
bitsofcolor
#64
Oh my gosh this is so perfectly awkward I can die happy!! I loved it so much!! It was as awkward and adorable as first times should be and it was just so adlfjksfjdkdjdksks and omg spongebob and I can't even form coherent sentences right now cause im spazzing and dying because it's just so perfect and amazing and awkward and everything in between and I think you just became my favorite author and holy this is all one sentence that's how much I'm spazzing right now!!
abi333 #65
I love it!! It was so perfectly awkward!!! I was totaly reading this through my fingers cause I was embaressed! And I usually don't get embaressed reading this, but it was so cute and I just loved it! I just really hope Baekhyun doesn't forget what he realized by the morning!! Omo, Chanyeol, why you so y? Lol. Can't wait for more!
zeeexoblueicy1 #66
ohhhhh this was amazing! so awkward yet i loved it. <3 <3
queenbyunbaek
#67
ASDFGHJKL!! I can't omfg u are beautiful!! I loved the -ness in this chapter! it's not too much nor too little it's right and it looked awkward really! gahh! i cant..omfg my feels ;-; <3 Thanks,love you made my day :'D<3
airia81 #68
My God baek u love him as a lover not a boyfriend!! How cute that changyeol and baek confessed to each other!!!!
2Y-is-Real #69
Stop saying such things. This chapter is ing awesome! I LOVE IT! I think your fiction is my drug *O* Please update soon :3 Fighting! :D
13aholic #70
okay finally Baek's realised for god's sake jesus i was like waiting for too long just to hear Baek blurting out 'i love u' to Chan first lol <3
CharmingBeast
#71
AWESOME! >_<
Lala1901
#72
Oh no.
This is perfect.
Just the right amount of awkwardness.
And the fact that their first wasn't successful? It's right up their ally. Wouldn't expect it any other way.
LOVED IT!!
I want an update. UPDATE!! ^^
TanXueLei #73
I had to turn away from the chapter every now and then to calm my feels.
Despite its tiness it was all so sweet ; w ;
FFaith1708
#74
OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG HELL TO THE YEAH. HE LOVES HIM. YES. BAEKHYUN LOVES CHANYEOL. AND CHANYEOL LOVES BAEKHYUN.
LET'S GO AND SKIP ABOUT IN A MEADOW OF FLOWE- oh wait.
He did it for Jonghyun. Ffs. You wrote the chapter so well but the whole way through, I could only think that they were doing it for the wrong reasons... Which was what you wanted but noooo~
/starts sobbing... I want them together~
Thanks for the update though!
Aurianna
#75
Seriously, I don't like this chapter because of the , but rather because this chapter is PERFECT ! We get to know Bacon thoughts, you took time to explain!!
"this is just 3585 words of bull and word vomit. the two things i'm best at, apparently" ARE YOU KIDDING ME ???? You did a great job ! Otherwise I would not be here commenting your chapter ^^! So don't underestimate yourself okay ? =)
yellewardzkhael #76
loved it! ♥
it was awkward but sweet...
never imagined anything better than the way you described their "first time".

i hope baek realizes how much he loves chan...
SunaoTeam #77
please... please Baek, i beg you, don't be idiot and forget Jonghyun TT TT i wouldn't survive it if you broke Chan ;A;

love this fic :3 started reading yesterday and was like "omg CAN'T STOP!!!" and even read at school and stuff. looking forward to new chapter <3
Nomichui #78
this was ... seriously great! you described the awkwardness really perfectly,its like exactly the thing i was expecting after the previous chapter! But still i feel so sorry for Chanyeol, ah the drama ;))
shinees_principessa #79
I swear... that was... just xD I don't know... those two xD I swear... they were sooo awkward... and it was just sooooo cute!
I loved it!
Can't wait for the next chapter!
cupcakemini5
#80
/I CRINGED SO HARD OH MY GOD/ i loved it. every second of it. HE ASKED BAEK'S MOM KLJDNKLNHFJKSH the thing that got me the most was baek's sudden confession and the few lines at the end ;-; you can't really think that dating yeol would end up like every other boyfriend... but that thought of wanting to keep him forever so not wanting to risk it? i cry. i'm expecting more awkwardness when they wake up and realize that they totally just confessed.
nigirimeshi #81
Oh.my. GOD!! I really dont know whats gotten into you, i love this chapter! And he loves him! Perfect! But i see drama approching.. Really, you are turing me into a mess with this story of yours, all i think about is how it will go on! And i did find is awkward, I repeatedly facepalmed, so dont you think you faild!
Xandra #82
HAHAHAHA, DID CHANYEOL EARLY? HOHOHOHOHOHO
So sweet ;_;
mochiiimin
#83
Wow~ Chanyeol really loves Baekhyun!
And judging by the line that says "Because boyfriends are temporary and Baekhyun wants to keep Chanyeol forever" it's so freaking obvious Baekhyun's heart is with Chanyeol but he doesn't know it yet hehe
And the fact his heart was beating into overdrive~
BAEKHYUN FIGURE OUT YOUR FEELINGS AND JUST CONFESS TO CHANYEOL ALREADY AND GO OUT!!
Omg can't wait for the next chapter ♥ :D
RoseyNads
#84
Hahahaha, OMG I adore Chanyeol! He came so early xDD How adorable is he?!
This was awkward in the most iest way possible. SUPER HAWT! I loved the scene so much :3
monaharmony
#85
Awwwww x3 I loved this chapter! It just seemed so sweet to me x) I can't wait for the next chapter :D That's the bad thing about catching up on a story: you have to wait just like everyone else for a new update. But in the end, we get an awesome chapter to read ;) So keep up the good work :)
craisin
#86
awwww this is ing FLAWLESS don't ever think you write cuz you don't!! This is so new and fresh and original I can't even. especially the ending omg. I love you. but spongebob boxers though I laughed so hard x) you're awesome so awesome <3
Vampyreunnie
#87
Was it awkward? Yes. But was it also hot? YES!
I kinda wanted the awkwardness to go on and on. It was y. I wanted more touching, hesitant fumbling, more pumping before Chan's premature ion, which was a MUST naturally. lol
There needs to be a part 2 of this awesome awkwardness! I expect more weirdo later on.

I'm just curious to see if Baek will completely ignore his newly acknowledged feelings for Chan in favor of what he THINKS he wants or if he'll be man enough to give Chan the chance he deserves. And how will Chan react when he finds out that Baek stole his ity just so he could have with another guy.
I can't wait! Enjoy your vacay and come back soon!
panzym
#88
Oh yea, totally didn't surprise me that Chanyeol came early, he loves Baek too much and was waayyy too eager LOL
panzym
#89
OMG IT WAS PERFECT, don't even self-deprecate yourself!! It was exactly what I wanted, awkward Yeol and actually it was a pleasant surprise that Baek realized his feelings for his best friend! And he admitted he loved Yeol too, to his face better yet! that Baek didn't get his amazing release though lol. But I love the last paragraph, it's so perfect omg ;_; AND THERE BETTER BE MORE, now that this can of worms called love has been opened, I need to know what happens next!! What happens when they wake up? Make out? More ? Supreme awkwardness?!