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MsMonster
#1
Well that was some of the most awkwardest yet somehow really y I have ever read. In conclusion, I absolutely love it
PikaPikaYewww
#2
That was so awesome!!! He said ily ~ baek i command to forget jonghyun
biigbanng #3
I loved it! And it definitely was awkward, the perfect amount of awkwardness though!
Please update soon. I want my surprise :P
hyunaigoo #4
omg i was cringing the whole time pinching my cheeks hahahah um it was quite awkward lol. im kinda confused rn with this situation tbh gdksgfkagsk baekhyun im so gonna hate you if you break chanyeol's heart again sobs.

anticipating the next chapter! :)
Nanukiss #5
This was ..woooow I love it, really akward but good!!

Cant wait for the next chapter!! Jonghyun should never comback XD
reebeegee
#6
bgdsv cjsbkjfdsv xjk vsdkvkgj gka That's right Baekhyunnie! You love your Chanyeol! And it should stay that way forever and you should never look at Jonghyun again! EVER.
Exolove #7
Boyfriends are temporary.. He wants to keep Chanyeol forever.. <3 That just hit me.
darkrose123 #8
As the comments before me said. You were trying to make it awkward, which worked in this case because their relationship is kinda awkward right now. I liked how you incorporated baekhyun showing his true feelings and confused thoughts on chanyeol. Hopefully there will be less awkward moments and more baekyeol moments.
woaide
#9
MY HEART. this chapter was beautiful, stop being so hard on yourself!
Dotachin #10
Actually I liked it '-'
You wrote the true and that's cool! The first time is so... poor(?), is nothing really much, as you wrote!
Don't stop writing Awkward ;_; it's my favorite Baekyeol fic! ):
LucyIncredible
#11
It was awkward!! lol and that GIF killed...OMG myy Yeol is all grown up!!
yunglean
#12
Lolol I felt awkward when I was reading this. omfg.
But anyway Baekhyun needs to forget about Jonghyun!
_caramelsundae
#13
OMFG I cannot with this fic alright?? can you just update every freaking hour? JUST KIDDING.

"Because boyfriends are temporary and Baekhyun wants to keep Chanyeol forever."

no matter how much i love jonghyun, i just want him to disappear from this fic omg but thanks to him baekyeol ends up having :"> lol ahhhh update please update!!!!!!

ily
kkamsae
#14
aksjdgndkjgntkgjdfnkgrjkt please let baekyeol be together!! ;A;
//dying!! freakin fast updates!!! hands you smexy baekyeol in a box with golden ribbons OTL OTL OTL
MyNameIsJazzyy
#15
Oh god.. Runs away. U really know how to make this story go so awkward!! But i want chanyeollie n bacon to have sweet passionate love together. Its tooo ial, je ne sais quoi?! Ahh i dont know how to explain it!! But thank you for keeping ur promise and updating!!!!
Mulkogi
#16
You were trying to make this awkward right? Because OMG I cringed so much, but in a good way, if that's at all possible. I mean, everyone's first time is awkward as so this just makes it all the more realistic. I really want to know what happens next. I hope they are able to have un-awkward y time in the future :P
ultimateSHINeelove
#17
That was amazing! :D this story is just amazing. <3
Happy_Limbless
#18
It wasn't bull at all. Bull is fake, and word vomit is what's real. This chapter, it was realistic, and that's why I love it. It felt like this would really happen. I honestly wouldn't have liked it as much if their first time was an amazing mind blowing experience because that's not how it works in real. It's strange, it's AWKWARD, and you're being attacked from all the new senses and feelings. I may not know what I'm talking about, but this is how I feel and you don't need to worry about me unsubscribing.
luckycricket91
#19
Lol awww I love you too ^^

I think the word Bacon is searching for is 'lover' XD
khjbro #20
Because boyfriends are temporary and Baekhyun wants to keep Chanyeol forever.
CRYINGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG OMFG THIS SENTENCE
This was the most awkwardly adorable thing I have ever read. Ugh their "moments" (literally) together were so real and so TRUE; I loved this chapter! (Well, I love the rest of this story too.) Totally not word vomit. Don't sell yourself short.

...The end of this latest chapter was kind of part of my prediction...nyaaaa ;3 And now I have yet to see if the rest of my prediction is right
xxjenjaexx #21
no no, you seriously made this chapter awkward cuz it was sooo in painful to read!! I had to stop every few lines, bang my head against my desk and continue reading. I was going OMG OMG OMG urgh!!!!!!

I swear a super awkward chanyeol is real cute! I want to keep him in m pocket now well at least Bacon bits knows how he feels :3
sorairo #22
OMG!! I really exciting!!fast updates please xD
yellewardzkhael #23
so excited for the next chapter! :)
please update... ♥
panzym
#24
I'M SO EXCITED. But also super depressed because Baekhyun didn't tell him WHY he wants to sleep with his BFF. Now Chanyeol probably thinks he wants to be buddies or something, which he would totally take cuz he's desperate for any attention from Baek...
Also I didn't expect their first time to be super y anyway, I'm expecting awkward yet passionate (I mean Chanyeol loves Bacon, so). I still don't know why Baek thinks that sleeping with someone once will make him good in bed, and why that even matters in a relationship ~_~
LucyIncredible
#25
OMG~! Update when?
ShaZam #26
No Baekhyun!
You dumbo!
You should lose it to Chanyeol when you finally realize you like him!
Not because you want to lose your ity!!!
abi333 #27
............I kinda flipped out on this chapter. I was like gaurdedly reading the part leading up to Baekhyun asking him...then he just blurts it out. I kinda freaked and hid my face screaming in my head "No stupid, that's so akward, he's gonna think your weird and be offended and hurt!! Stupid!" Then I realized I had to scroll down and finish reading so I could see Chanyeol's reaction. I feel so bad for him!!! But I can't wait for the next chapter, I need to know what happens!!
jidrey
#28
I know I like never comment but now I'm going to :D
I already talked to you and said this, but Imma go ahead and say it anyways.
I FREAKING LOVE THIS STORY!!! ♥ ♥ ♥
UPDATE SOON!
For some reason I think that this whole thing is a set up ._. cause like maybe Jonghyun and his friends knew Chanyeol's problem and maybe that's why Taemin was snickering behind his hand when he told Baekhyun and that's why Kibum had this look on his face when he was talking to him. After their love making session, Baekhyun will realize Chanyeol is perfect for him.. or is it too cheesy?
But I swear if Baekhyun feels NOTHING I will seriously smack him.
xrobotics
#29
nooooo, I'm going somewhere and I dont know if there's wifi in the hotel :(( this is going to be funny I swear to god :))))
zeeexoblueicy1 #30
holy , i am so so excited for the next chapter, it's insane. i feel so bad for Chanyeol. again. poor baby. Baekhyun better fix up soon :D
viktoretka #31
sharing the same thoughts as @cupcakemini5 xD i love this story tho <3333
cupcakemini5
#32
crying because chanyeol is being used ;-; i'm honestly really excited to read some cringe worthy , filled with awkwardness and, "do i put it in now, or..?" fingers crossed baek realizes how stupid this whole thing is, though. i mean. go on, up your best friend, but the whole using him as a guinea pig thing is just wrong. this can either take a turn for the better, or go completely down hill all the way to freaking mordor.
SoftCoyote
#33
Can I just say I'm angry at Baekhyun and I feel sorry for Chanyeol? OMG this story is pure genius for writing this omg!!!
MomoShines #34
After this chapter i litterally shouted, "whoohoooo!" and did a little dance in my living room. I'm so freakin excited for the awkward !!!!! >.< can't wait for the next chapter!
airia81 #35
hahaha i died laughing at chanyeol's way of handling it! its so funny~ I just hope that baek will figure out his feelings for chanyeol before Jonghyun comes back~ i dont want chanyeol sad and crying to kai~
CharmingBeast
#36
o my god i love this. this chapter...i dunno why but it made me laugh. chanyeol's reaction way too...whow!
i just have a feeling that chanyeol will gonna get hurt...and i don't like it...
great work you do here. ^^
Mulkogi
#37
AHHH! I love this! Update :[ I feel bad or asking for an update, because you update ALL THE TIME, you're so awesome. Just...I'm excited for when an update will come :] This story has me squealing oddly with every chapter :P
AbsolutelyAwesome
#38
Oh pleaaaase oh please.
I can't get enough of this.
You know I love you for writing this, right? You know that, right?
I really wanna squish you right noooow!! XD

Anyway, Update sooooon~
asdfghjkl;)
-shano #39
I had to stop reading like... three times. To catch my breath you know, the awkwardness.
I'm really loving how the story is going. Yeah, i feel really bad for Chanyeol here, but i gess this is how it works. I mean, if the story developes to quickly, it will be... meh.

Anyways~ thanks so much for updating ;u; ♥. People without a life are very grateful.
tolerance #40
-sigh-

Chanyeol why did you say yes >.< !
Your going to get hurt ;A;

Kai stopped this :o!!
Baekhyun I shall kill you.

Jdbsneidnslsurnd.

~Update Soon~
shikapham
#41
Ash , Baekkie why did you ask Yeollie to have with you >.< ? He will extremely sad if he finds out your reasons is because of Jjong ! Baek , realise your feelings for Yeol quickly !!
hyunaigoo #42
did baekhyun not plan on telling chanyeol the reason he's asking them to sleep together. does chanyeol really think that...oh my god. no. he's not that gullible right....... ;_______;

ps i didnt subscribe for the tbh lol i just really liked the storyline ; u ;
shinees_principessa #43
-.-
and now we have to wait again? To you like doing that to us?

Why did Baek have to ask him... Poor Chanyeol got his hopes up just to get his heart broken ;(
meekshwang
#44
i hate you ari omg
biigbanng #45
Omg noooo why did I find this story RIGHT now? Couldn't I wait for like 2 more chaps or something? Gaaaah update soon
ultimateSHINeelove
#46
I nearly jumped in the air when I saw that you updated. asdfghjkld I'm so excited!
craisin
#47
You should totally look at me. Smile stretched wider than my own face. Know what that means???
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE I. CAN'T. YEOL YOU ASDFGHJKL
RoseyNads
#48
OMGGGGG I cant wait for them to have !!! <333
nigirimeshi #49
Oh my, what is going to happpen?? I really hope Baekhyun will disover his locked feelings for Chanyeol and everything will work out! Oh gosh, I cant take my little Chanyeols heartbreak! You really are turning my head into a mess @_@ I cant wait for tonight! Please, i need to know!
Happy_Limbless
#50
e_e That smile that Chanyeol gave when he agreed makes me think he was planning something, and his reaction to Baekhyun choosing a date so near in the future really convinces me that he WAS going to try to woo Baekhyun. Hm, curious to see how he'll pull it off now that's its happening tomorrow.
ExoKiss
#51
Amazing fic love the story but I feel sad and i'm wooried that Chanyeol's feelings be hurt because of their little session later ! hope Baekhyun realizes soon that he likes Channie more than a friend
reebeegee
#52
Oh god.... I'm going to punch Baekhyun and myself in the face if this all ends horribly! Jonghyun needed to be dumped before they even started speaking lol.

I don't want poor Yeol's heart to break. I also fear what will happen to Baekhyun if this goes bad....
Hamtartninja
#53
finally! The ~! ^^
FFaith1708
#54
/excitedexcitedexcitedexcitedexcitedexcitedexcited.
XD
I wasn't really expecting Chanyeol to just bluntly say...yes. ^_^
But, yeah. Cannot wait now! :D
Lala1901
#55
the akwardness is just. . . laughable
and Chanyeol's attitude is understandable... and amusing.
=]
I WANT AN UPDATE!!!
this should be... entertaining.
^^
UPDATE!!!!
proud2bshawol #56
okay this is AMAZING. and i am angry at baekhyun for using chanyeol like that. arrrgggg >:((((( /FIST SHAKING but this is so amazing!!! good job! update soon! ^_^
nigirimeshi #57
Oh my, its really going strait for the now, isnt it? All this tension! I hope Baekhyun will come to his senses soon, but I guess he is on a good way. I really like how this slowly backlashes towads him. *evil grin* But I firmly belive in Baekyeol! And hopefully Baekhyun soon will, too.
And im really looking forward to your Kaido story! :D
13aholic #58
omggggg what's gonna happen nooooooo please don't break my... ah ok Baek's Chanyeol's heart (sounds weird i know trust me but i can't help ;;A;;)

this chappie is so short compared to the others but anyway love it like always XD thanks for updating sooooo fast <3
FFaith1708
#59
Holy crapsicles. Baekhyun's gonna go for it. I mean..the whole point of this fic is that it's meant to be awkward... and now.. I just want them together! XDDD
Looking forward to see how Chanyeol's gonna react because... how do you in that situation?!
Thanks for the update!
a_song_4_yoo_rin
#60
Haha..love Kaido! Baekhyun is really going to do it?
cupcakemini5
#61
oh lord, story of my life. one wrong click and suddenly you become a pro in gay . the interwebs; most education place ever. i regret nothing. baek. still so much hate but you're doing an okay job at making up with yeol this might screw all of that over, though ._. and i'm convinced that if this all happens, and kai finds out, baek will spend the rest of his life in the bottom of the han river, courtesy of kai.
MsMonster
#62
asdhgkajlhsfkshadkf I can't wait for Chanyeols reaction. I was doing homework and then I checked and saw you updated and I threw the book off the bed like 'this can wait, must read story now' I just love it so so so much.
shinees_principessa #63
LOL really? he's really going to do it? that will break poor yeollie...
well... or baekhyun will notice that chanyeol really likes him xD
can't wait for the next chapter!
PikaPikaYewww
#64
Imma sleep now lol. Finish this tomorrow lol. So intresting!!! Listening to 2 moons rite now <3
Insp2uty
#65
Really excited on whats going to happen next!!!!!!!! ><
craisin
#66
omfg I was looking forward to it but now.... I'm worried yeol will get hurt ;/
tolerance #67
....

I swear Im going to slap Baekhyun silly for being clueless, Im known for being clueless but even I wouldve noticed my best friend likes me.

fjdkgadglfgkd.

Baekhyun, you hurt Chanyeol, You'll get it from me.

~Update Soon
LoverBoy59
#68
Wahhh I'm scared how Chanyeol will react>_<
abi333 #69
Lol, this is just.....so amazing.
hyunaigoo #70
deized pmsl. gdjsjsgshdk this is getting exciting ; u ;
panzym
#71
omg your gifs are hilarious, stop making me laugh when 's about to go down!! I mean Baekyeol is gonna be real in a chapter or two!! Depending on whether or not Chanyeol accepts Baekhyun's proposal, I mean. Which he should. He totally should, cuz Bacon just watched and now he's smoky bacon just waiting to be eaten (k maybe that innuendo/metaphor didn't work out well). BUT BAEKHYUN BETTER NOT PLAY WITH CHANYEOL'S EMOTIONS OR IMMA BE SO PISSED. Also hooray for Kaido, also hooray for Baek automatically knowing Chanyeol tops >:D
khjbro #72
BLESS YOU AUTHOR-NIM, BLESS YOU. BAEKHYUN IS WAY TOO SHORT COMPARED TO CHANYEOL TO TOP OMFG THANK YOU LOL
ugh... cliff hangers. i think i have a good idea of where this is going to go (not just with their little discussion but with the whole thing after and when jonghyun comes back) ...but i will have to wait and see.
PLEEEEEASE update tomorrow, i can't get enough of this fic and i'm honestly just going crazy thinking about it all the time! but i can wait, so don't feel pressured c:
Naruto1fan23 #73
OMGEE GEE GEE GEE BABY BABY BABY! WHY AUTHOR WHY! WHY MUST YOU LEAVE ME AT A CLIFFHANGER D: ~sigh You should be honored that I'm procrastinating on my homework for your fanfic. LOL. I just love the way you describe Chanyeol. It's like almost perfect to the real one. xD Can't wait till the next updateu. :3
Dotachin #74
OMG, I'm so curious ~~ what are Baekhyun going to do? They'll do THIS in school? :O
upadat soon pleaseeeeeeee T_T
Nanukiss #75
I want to know Chanyeol's reaction ahhhhh!!!!
Lala1901
#76
akjiweur--just when this was about to get good!
ahhhh, I can't wait to see how things [or Baekyeol] go down.
=p
and the gif, RLAB!
UPDATE!!
and have a great time!
^^
Vampyreunnie
#77
I have to remind myself not to check every hour for an update. Darn! lol
Have a great vacay!
airia81 #78
UGH i want Baekhyun to realize that yeollie isn't just a BF! uhh i hope he realizes it when they...uhm..do it! lol cant wait for the next chapter!
FFaith1708
#79
So. erm. I'm a new reader... erm. hi.
I'm not too sure how I came across your fic but erm yeah. I'm really enjoying it because usually Baekyeol are always undeniably cute in fics and stuff like that so your story's really different and cool!
Erm... What else can I say...except I kinda want Baekhyun to just wake up from his little fantasy where Chanyeol is just his best friend because WE ALL KNOW HE'S NOT.
So. Erm. Yeah. This was awkward. Erm. Update soon^^
I'm usually more obnoxious with my comments but hey-ho.
joline17kujo #80
Kaidooooo
queenbyunbaek
#81
OMFG loved this chapter a lot and it's finally unwinding yayy I'm so happy ^^ Been reading this in my phone for the last couple of days and I can finally subscribe to get the latest update gah!! <3 <3 BTW KaiDo please!! :D
angel_baby_devillove #82
kai and luhan!!!!!!! XD
Btw love this fic!
Update soon!
Nanukiss #83
waa I cant wait for the next chapter !!!!!! Poor Chanyeol T__T

For your next story Kai and D.O
MsMonster
#84
two updates <3 I'm so happy. I feel like I can kind of relate to the story, and I actually enjoy reading it. Why do I feel like Kibum is trying to sabotage Baekhyun. I mean I am ALLL FOR IT. Baekhyun and Chanyeol should have , but it still makes me nervous.
nigirimeshi #85
Oh good dont break my little Chanyeols heart! Omg, this tension! I cannot wait for the next chapter!! You really making me go crazy here..
Regarding your next story, Kaido please :D
Avocadoes #86
Kaisoo/Kaido!! That would be awesome *^*
Noriko1 #87
I like that it's not moving too fast :) Kaihan please (but KaiDO and sekai are great too). Love your story <3
nahhson
#88
KaiD.O yeryer!! +_+
KairiShibahime #89
Lukai please~!

Anyway I love so much your story :)
Update soon!
sorairo #90
KAIDO !!! me love them !!
OMG!!! as he will do that to chanyeol? l! no! if you find that your heart will break
I love your history :D
sasuga #91
I want SEKAAAAAAAAAAAAAI pleaaase 'cause this couple is soooo GREAAT!!! anywayyy

I LOVE your story! ♥
Update soon pleaase ~
CharmingBeast
#92
kaido ftw! lol
i love your story, really :)