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topleasedusty
#1
*le cries* this is finally the end, isn't it? T______T Well, I enjoyed this story very much ^^ I'll be waiting for the sequel dear :) indeed, this story was Awkward ^^ I'll remember this one for sure :P
omo904 #2
/sobbing/ this was perfect and beautiful and everything in between. now that there's a sequel, i love you even more than i did already!
(omg will there be kaisoo? please tell me there will be kaisoo. omfg.)
barbieocaralho
#3
I am so very happy you've made it, you've wrote it and I might have read every chapter even more than once. I loved everything about it and I guess I've commented that alread. I love how it begins, how it goes on, how it ends and It took quite a time, but I think all the waiting paid off for us readers and you deserve all this positive feedback. I'm looking foward to the sequel and to kaisoo's fiction update as well. ♥
TanXueLei #4
*cries*
I didn't want this to end, but I knew it had to end ; ~ ;

And then facking Kaisoo popped out of nowhere, NOW I WANT A SEQUEL BASED ON KAISOO GULLLLL. WHAT HAVE YOU DONE?! (屮゚Д゚)屮⌒┻━┻

P.S. I love you.
P.S.S. this was one of my favourite baekyeol fics, just so you know :"D
siahna
#5
sigh. I enjoyed reading this SO much. It was just so delightfully awkward. I know I probably don't comment nearly as much as I should (because I really do love your writing), but I'm really looking forward to your future stories :)
Vampyreunnie
#6
Well... I wasn't going to comment until you mentioned my lack thereof, just cuz I'm evil like that as I'm sure you know, but since you mentioned me even before the chapter starts, how could I do that to you? And then you mentioned me AGAIN, rightly so since I am awesome and deserve all the praise in the world *pats self on back* thus I had to give you a reward by giving my thoughts on this blasphemous excuse for a final chapter so here goes:

Even though I practically begged for , I actually think this ending is perfect. It's typical of these two weirdos , with just the right amount of hot iness but not enough to overshadow what the fic is really about: two friends falling in love/realizing they're in love and beginning their journey. There'll be many more ty times in the future and at least we got to see their first time, which was the most important, so I'm happy with it. Besides, it's true that the is often a lot hotter/more interesting than the itself because let's be honest, when they really get down to business, unless you take the unrealistic tantric route, it doesn't last that long whereas can go on foreverrrrrrrrrrr.
ultimateSHINeelove
#7
I can honestly say, this IS the best fanfic I have ever read. T.T out of all the millions of fanfics I've read, this is the best. Your writing is amazing asfghd. T.T I'm so glad there is going to be a sequal even if it is short, I will be happy because I love this story so much. T.T thank you so much for bringing this story into my life. Thank you thank you thank you.
dibidibidis
#8
THE ENDING WAS AWKWARD AND COMPLETELY PERFECT!
plus the hinted kaisoo was really adorbs.~
keaitao
#9
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa this was so sweet and everything about this was amazingly perf in an awkward sense that just makes it sooooooooo charming. just copious amounts of lovely is in this fic!!!!!
I really loved this, I really do. You must continue on in writing, must!! Too much talent to waste ;m;
CuriosityShapeMaker #10
OH MY GOSH THE END THE END THE END THE EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEND.
MY FEELINGS FOR THIS STORY OH MY GOSH I WANT TO HUG EVERYONE INVOLVE IN THIS. YOU AND CHANYEOL AND BAEKHYUN AND EVERYBODY. ;u;
FishyHaeFishy #11
; ~ ; such a sweet ending!!! I usually bawl my eyes out when a great fic I love comes to an end, but the ending was very good!!! Lovedddd it ^_^ Baekyeol together, and everytime baekhyun pointed out Chanyeol's quirks and why he loved them, my heart melted, that was so freaking romantic Omooo your writing always affects my feels lol!!! And xD ending :D!!!! Derpy Chanyeol admitting he was a god xD no wait... The best part that literally made me spit out the orange juice I was drinking xD When Chanyeol pulled up Baekhyins shirt and it got stuck!!!! LOLOLOLOLOL !!!!! And Baekhyun was like 'of course (>-_-)> XDDDD I imagined his hair sticking up and I face palmed myself xD <3
WOOT!
OMG WHAAA A SEQUEL?!?!?!
YESSSSS (bounces around on bed like crazy!!!) I'll be waiting ^_____^ (*hugs*)
Forever your Fan ^^
~Fishy
blossomkisses
#12
Omg. It's over ;A; *looks around* What do I do now? O.O

Wait for the sequel! ♥

Thank you for writing this! I enjoyed every part of it!
alynie #13
Wah, it's over TAT
I love you so much <3
keep writing 4ever, yes please? *A*
lori_senpai
#14
It's over TT_TT God, I'm going to miss this ;_;
But heeey we have a sequel coming soon c:
I loved every minute of this fic! Thank you, you're truly amazing ♥
ELFLuver
#15
Yay sequel ^_^ i liked this
Shinee_World_Bunny
#16
OMFG. Did I just hear it right? Like seriously?! A sequel? Seriou? OMFG. Can I cry and puke rainbows please? I don't know how this fic can be so cute and y at the se time no kid. Thanks for this wonderful story and we all love youu too author shii. LEAVE ME WHILE I SPAZZ. IM HONNA WAIT FOR THAT SEQUEL! KABJSKSNSSKKSKSBSKSNSIWJSBSJABVSIQOEUEUGEJDDMJBSISN*#+*##+-#?@?&#8#+;##;JJSKSNDKDJAIIEURODNDBXDJLSNDIF! /creys
monaharmony
#17
Ohmygawd. This was amazing!! I loved it so much!! <3 the mix of awkwardness and hotness was great!! Lol xD you're a great author, can't wait to read more of your stories :)
Baboye
#18
OMG MAKE A KAISOO SEQUEL. ;U;
emo_bear
#19
omg it's over ;A; i donno whether to cry in happiness or sadness ;~~~; gosh you have no idea how much this fanfic managed to keep my baekyeol feels from dying (coz kaisoo is my ultimate otp) omg i see my name :D lol awww you deserve all the love and support~ :)
MomoShines #20
Normally, if I were reading a magnificent fic such as this one and it was the last chapter, I'd be suuuuuper sad and close to bawling right now because it would be over. But right now all I can feel is asdfjllabalxhalsjfjald because this was an amazing last chapter and ur A/N made me all fuzzy inside and there's going to be a sequel and I'm just so excited!!!!!!!! >.< thank you for such a gloriously awkward story!!!
MINAkpop #21
omo !!! THIS STORY IS THE BEST EVER !!
yaaaaaaaaaaa ! sequal !!
can't wait !!
LT_Kyungsoo
#22
OMG IT'S FINISHED?! BUT THE INCOMPLETE --- ARGH AJDKSHAKJDFH.

I love you so much.

but then sequel akjsdhajkdfh.

And yes, I agree with you Baekhyun, Chanyeol is hot. owo
nigirimeshi #23
OMG!! Seriously, I was crying when I saw "Complete" behind the titel and I was like: "OK, just breath, this is gonna be awesome, you need to enjoy it and dont cry about its end. Be positive, you can do that!"
And I read the last chapter and its just perfect, just THE absolute perfect last chapter for this story and while I was jumping back and forth between sorrow and bliss (because, I love their relationship!) I started to read your A/N.
O_O
I love you. I seriously ing damn love you so very much I just want to scream it from the rooftops! You are the best, you are my hero! I swear if you ever have the misfortune to meet me I will hug/squeese/kiss/swing the living daylights out of you! (Yes, love can be scary sometimes, but I really do not have the ability to hold back rn! And i cant get over you mentioning me T_T)I am so thankfull to you, I know you really did want to end it here, I aceppted your decition, I even supported it. And now you anounce that you will do a sequal just for us T_T I am so touched, did I say I love you allready? Well of course I did, but I cant say it enought! Im am sorry if Im rembling now but thouse are all my feelings for this story. Seriously, this might be my most favorite Exo story and OK I WILL STOP NOW, THIS IS GETTING TO LONG (sorry) -.- But really, thank you and I love you! (You gorgeous/beautiful/awesome/wonderful/ person!)<3
shinees_principessa #24
Sequel? great news!
And I loved this chap! It was a little awkward... well... that's why I loved it! It was supposed to be awkward, wenn baekyeol are together xD
LucyIncredible
#25
OMO!! THE KAISOO!!!! LO<3 YOU SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH! You put the Kaisoo in there!! I ship them so hard!! I know I already left a comment but, somethings can't go un-said! You wrote one of the best BaekYeol fics EVER! Maybe the best IDK XD lol. Okay so I'm going to re-read the story till the sequal or The dark side is updated ;D lol
LucyIncredible
#26
This is it guys. Omg I'm so touched my name is in your AN :) *Wipes tear* This story was the GREAT! & You being the best author ever you are giving us a SEQUAL!!! YAY!! But one thing... I lo<3 how you write & I also love your other story The Dark Side! Omg you are so cool I just realized that. WAIT the story is over lol! Omg no more updates! Now I'm just talking. Okay so Bye dear author-nim please update your other story. For I will support it as I did this one :D
dongbangexofan
#27
omg then end ;__; weird cuz i finished my 1st fic a few hours before you posted this xD thank you ari for this amazing story <3
-mxmnts
#28
*^* Please hurry up with the sequel.
I can't find it in me to regret reading this at the moment. (It's 7 a.m)
Oh my god. I almost cried when it ended Orz
milktao
#29
Aww~ it ended :<
Nvm xD
Shall go re read the whole thing again till the sequel comes out :,D
peangpong
#30
waaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh!!!!!! this story is very awesome! i love ittt! i especially love that gif of sandeullie! yes i love sandeullie very much! hehehe ! anyways! great story! keep writing~~~ please please make a sequel because i will be too sad if you end it here TT TT"
colourlessrain #31
And okay maybe I'm just as awkwar as chanyeol because I just exceed comment lint. :x

THANK YOU AUTHORNIM. <3. :)
-sends a pretty smiley baekhyun your way. And confetti. Lots of confetti... Magical confetti. :)
colourlessrain #32
Awe man. Don't end it...: all my erse feels. Okay I am.

LEMME JUST SAY HOW MUCH I DIED WHEN BAEKYEOL FOUGHT. Ugh my heart cannot take pain and angst... And yet it's so ing beautiful.

Like kaisoo beautiful. WHICH ACTUALLY IS JUST A BUNDLE OF AWKWARD. Or am I just the only one reading into that ship?

Andddd jongkey, even though I like onkey better. Yeah nvm. LOL.

Back to the story. I kinda somewhat wished all the missing links were tied up? Like the whole university thing and the whole be was suspended but wait they're back at school? :/

I really love the way they're so awkward. It's actually quite beautiful how you've written them. Long comment is long.

Honestly, this is such a good story. It's really inspiring really. Thank you.

AND THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR WRITING IT. Like honestly, it's so amazing. No words can describe my feels. And oh gosh I really don't hope baekhyun is THAT dumb in real life. Okay I'm fine with the emotions.... Because they happen. (I'm not speaking from experience Psh w.e... Kind of)

ANYWAYS. But the whole apology thing just is freakig jokes. You do not apologize that way xD I think the sky was right for raining on you. Cuz that's the only thing I had for it. NOT SAYING IT WASN'T CUTE and all and I'd be really touched if someone did remotely something like that. /rambles. WHAT I WAS TRYING TO SAY THAT. I don't even know anymore. It's not fun to get soaked. :/

Happy BAEKYEOL. Like happy in the end happy is good to read about. I really loves chanyeol's pitiful self :( It kind of makes baekhyun's wrong just so much worse... Like starting even from a kid. *sigh I dot even know what I'm sayin now. /RLAB.

I know I've commented on this after its finished.... But maybe my long comment will compensate, and if it count's for anything... I kind of read everything in one night.. Or early morning. Like 3-5? Am I mean. I really love it. Every part of it. Especially the interludes. :)
Gaenari
#33
I don't know if I should be happy or sad at this moment. This is like, the end of one of the most amazing fics ever and I want to go and cry in a hole and stay there until the sequel comes out ;_; Your writing is so beautiful and addicting and omg!
Thankfully I have cake, so I'm gonna go and eat it while I cry, laugh and all that stuff until someone shoots me. Oh, and one last thing before I go. LET ME LOVE YOU OKAY??!!! ;_; <3
credulity #34
asfkjnasdkjn omfg. wae you ended it? OTL

i gotta comment on fanfics nowadays lolololol.
i love it ;w; nuff' said. otl.
<3333 SEQUEEAAALLLL HOMAGADZ. /shot
bubblyisme #35
The end of the very beautiful Baekyeol fic /sobs/ This is amazing and one of the bests and i just cannot thank you enough for giving this to us.

I'm really looking forward for more good stories from you. Because really, you are good with words and you just have to keep on writing. Good luck! And I'll be waiting for the sequel and kaisoo! i think the 799 others will also be sitting on the edge while waiting for it!
megamize #36
OMG I CANNOT BELIEVE IT'S OVER T_T IT WAS LIKE MY FAVOURITE BAEKYEOL STORY ON AFF *sob* *sob* Ugh, it's so perfect and what do I do with all of these feelings. *cry*

I'm definitely recommending this beauty. Oh, my cries.
Eclaire #37
THIS IS MY FAVOURITE FANFIC EVER!!! It's so effing beautiful! This is only one of fanfics that actualy made cry and laugh and spazz an all... OMG,I LOVE YOU <3 Can't wait for new stories ^3^
LoverBoy59
#38
Awe I love you too!!!! This was seriously an AMAZING story and if there would be a sequel (lord hear my prayer...) I would subscribe without even reading the foreward knowing it's gonna be amazing idk if you have KaiSoo fics but Ima check because you are officially one of my best author list!!!! XD
uchouten
#39
Your an essay made me.wibble omg sequel

I wish I could say more but alas I am on my phone at work

Thank you so much for this story, I really enjoyed reading it omg <3 I don't go on tumblr a lot at all but I'm thinking I'll follow or something when I get home :3
OhItsYing
#40
AWKWARD is over /cries
but it was a very good story :D
see you at your next story ;)
♥ love you lots =]
MyNameIsJazzyy
#41
Oh my god nooooo D: why oh why?!?!?! I wasnt prepared for this.. AWKWARD IS OVER GUISE. *slowly digging grave* i am going down with this fanfic! Silently sobbing at 3.42am because My favorite baekyeol just ended.. Ahuhuhuhuh. But i should be happy since the story was amazing and 800 subscribers totally proved that this was brilliant! And you authornim is freaking talented. Dont you ever stop writing okay?! Ever! Seriously we should be friendseu. Since in your A/N you mention about your mom and college shiet... Guess i'll be calling.. UNNI AHHH SARANGHAE AND I WANT KICK WRITING SKILLS!!!! ^o^
Also you mention me in your author's notee !! Yay ~ Rolling like a buffalo in undying happiness because authornim knoes me ahhh!
Thank you so much for writing such a wonderful fanfic and i truly anticipate on the sequel to Awkward! <3

Jazzyy <3
khjbro #42
AJLHKHASF I DON'T WANT IT TO BE OVER I LOVE THIS FIC SO MUCH I CAAAAAAAAAAAAAN'T
HOORAY FOR AWKWARD CHANYEOL AND AWKWARD BAEKHYUN AND AWKWARD BEST FRIENDS THAT KISS ...AND STUFF AND OMG KJHAK I JUST WAAAAAAAAAAAAH WHY IS IT OVER
I'm so so so so so glad I stumbled over this fic way back when because this has to be one of my most favourite fics ever, so thank you for writing this AND I LOVE YOU FOR WRITING THIS ;A; Congratulations for finishing such an awesome fic and congratulations on being you and being awesome and KAJHSDFAKJHADF WHY IS IT OVER I'M SAD LOL

YOU INCLUDED ME IN THE AUTHOR'S NOTE I CREY ♥♥♥♥♥

also that "boyfriends are temporary and baekhyun wants to keep chanyeol forever" will literally be ingrained in my mind for the rest of my life probably omg

WAH WHY IS IT OVER /CRIES OCEANS AND DROWNS SELF IN THEM
letsfly01 #43
oh my goodness, I was third on that list!!! hehe thank you so much for deciding on a sequel. I will try to wait patiently, but I'm dying to know what you have in store for the lovely best friends who kiss and stuff. :D

and don't worry, I'm also weird, because I think that is a lot better than the actual thing XD I can't wait to hear more! <3
craisin
#44
OHMYGAWWWWD I CAN'T BELIEVE IT'S OVER T.T I LOVED IT SO MUCHHHHH
you know this was one of the very first baekyeol fics I've read. I've been there at the very very beginning. That's a fact. I remember when there was just the foreword and nothing else and at that time I was just starting on AFF. I just wanna say THANK YOU. I LOVE YOU. SARANGHAEYO. for writing such a wonderfully awkward ending to such a wonderfully awkward fic.<3 So, yeah. And YOU MENTIONED ME AT THE A/N YAAAAYYYYYYYY<3 <3 <3
DemonPox #45
I have to admit that I literally danced everytime I noticed you update, I'm so in love with this story, perfect, unique, funny, totally amazing. I have no idea if it was one the the best stories I've ever read but I do know this was one of the stories that make me feel the most. I love the characterization, the progress, every single thing was really well done.

(It's really weird to say this) I felt identified with your Chanyeol... not for the love story or his weird relationship with everyone but for his personality and that was totally fun to read. Also "hickeys in weird places", the kiss near the heart and "hipbones" you were describing my (kinda, it will be better to say: make out life) life... get out of my bed!!!!!

Well.. ignoring my awkward comment let me tell you that I will totally read everything you write in the future. I kind of love you.

(Also sorry for my English, it it not my mother language)
FrozenTears
#46
Awwwwww... the story ended in the best way possible.. Awkwardly. :) CHEERS AND CONFETTI FOR OUR LOVELY AUTHOR-NIM!!!!!!!!!!!! :D *throwing confetti everywhere* RLAB.
Secret_love
#47
HOLY why is it over so soon i remember they argued and now they're jslhflfhfuhdfafnnlfhisdhf
I LOVE YOU AND THIS STORY AND LET ME CRY INTO YOUR LAP.
just everything about this story was ing perfect.
<3
storpelly
#48
The story ends in an "awkward" state (>̯-̮<) just kidding but I was like omg the is exactly cliff hanging..... XD but thank you for considering to make a sequel for this story ;; awkward is one of my fave baekyeol's fic. (Long before I joined ASF,I bookmarked this fic in my browser) sorry if I just commented right now.. Thank you very much for writing this story ;; you did a great job! Keep it up! <3
sorairo #49
I loved the story!
that good ending! that there are good sequel!
ahhhh I'm really happy!
this is one of the most beautiful stories I've read!
the secula will wait anxiously!
Sterek
#50
Aww, I got 3 <3's and I don't even know why. Haha.
Sad Joey is sad that this story is over.
But yay for a sequel! *_*
-Happy dances everywhere-
kpopismywife
#51
AFLGFIGKR Thank you for making a sequel TwT seriously everything you write in this story makes me die inside, but in a good way. Your fic is one of the few that make me scream my feelings and roll around on my bed. I seriously love you *u*
Azy_Nams
#52
I absolutely loved this story!!! Thank you so much for writing it!!! I cannot wait for a sequel!!! It'll be just as good, if not better than Awkward! I'll patiently look forward to it~!!! <3
jessgo #53
aww sad to see this story end here but yay for a sequel. your a/n's are always the cutest. I don't comment a lot but I always read thru them ㅋㅋ
panzym
#54
First it was you with Ari and now it's your friend Ayana (which is what my cousin calls me since it's kind of shortening of my name) lol. I love how you're already anticipating people begging you for more in the sequel--p.s. I'll be one of those beggars trollololol. I guess I get where you're coming from in ending this with no real , I like remembering them as the awkward, cuddly, weirdo couple and not the awkward-yet-somehow-smexy couple. Wait if Baekyeol isn't your main OTP anymore... who?!?! Kaisoo?! I ship both mischievous breakfast couple and awkward capricorn couple so hard omfg. But I hear you on the , I actually have a personal funny anecdote about that, but aaanyway. I'm sad to see Awkward go, since it was so good and graaah... even then... I CAN'T WAIT FOR YOUR KAISOO FIC W00T. And the sequel to this fic, since I love these characters and I love :D Thanks for this story, and thanks for being so nice to all your readers~
nininguyen50 #55
Awww... It's over??? T^T but asjgsaklfj there's gonna be a sequel??!?
sherilyntheeurasian
#56
I loved this story I'll be waiting for the sequel then ^^
myexofeels #57
One of my favorite stories ever with one of the best authors ever. The ending was perfect. Thank you so much for writing this. I can't wait for the sequel if there is going to be one ^-^
Myakyuji07
#58
Okay honestly i was kinda anticipating for more but u know what? I dont even mind for this awesome sorry to end right here at this spot! Its been perfect for the way it is n___n

I knew Chanyeol will be a -god. Much to Baekhyun's amusement XD I bet this will be the best birthday gift for Chanyeol ever! 8]

Its nice, isnt it? What a big accomplishment u made, an epic story wrote by an epic writer! U definitely deserve those 800 subscribers and tons of comments for this fic. Congratulations to u~! ^___^

I see my name there haha~! Thanks for including me on ur A/N, I feel somewhat very appreciated eventhough i practically am no one lol. <333

Congratulations again n i good luck on that upcoming sequel~! ;) Much love to uuuu <3
HealLaHeal
#59
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omg it has come to an end... omg one of the best BaekYeol fanfic ever. I really love how you make SHINee boys as the elitist (or thats how I see it haha)

This fic is recommended by a friend and it has caught me into various kind of feelings since the first I read it. The angst part is the best! And how they make up to each other got me laughing like mad. I really like this fic <3

Thank you so much~<3 I'll continue to follow should there be any sequels coming up :3
Kpopism
#60
;LKAFJSA;DLFKJSSA;LFKJSDAFL;KJSF BAEKYEOLLLLLLL <33333

great endingggg omggg it left me wanting more ;A;
SweetTaboo
#61
You had me there, lol
(just so you know, I think is always the best part because they get all excited AND THEN THEY'RE ALL LIKE JFC DO ME NOW. and then I get all excited because personally, is the most fun to read)
Oh god I love you and this.
boitoitons
#62
I loved all the drama and awkwardness that happened in this story! I'm so so so happy that you've decided to do a sequel! And honestly, even though my heart broke at times during the sad moments of Chanyeollie and Baekhyunnie, I just love that they are together in the end~ The ending wasn't bad at all though! Even though there was no actual lmao, what did happen made me laugh xD I love this ^^
reughertop #63
ajkfglkdfjlakdfj amazing ok ALL THE AWARDS FOR YOU <3
mirkat
#64
OMG! The ending is perfect! <3
reebeegee
#65
I was nearly flipping tables because of the subtle Kaisoo (god I ship them way too ing much.....)

But KLAGAGLKJALGJLKJGOWIEJTLKAJFLDKAG My feels! *sobs* So sad that it's over, but happy about the sequel! But I'm also really looking forward to that Kaisoo (I assume you are speaking about The Dark Side) because dla;kgalgk adglkag I need another chapter of that like right now do to my endless Kaisoo feels.

I feel like I should try to speak to you on tumblr more (but then I feel like I creep when I reply to something you say.... so maybe I shouldn't lol?)
alicemychen #66
I don't mind not having much ..
SO MUCH FLUFFINESS I CAN'T ;v;
OMG KAISOOO xD
and YAY SEQUEL <3
lovingexoforever
#67
OMG sequel!!! im ssooo happy!!! i am in love with this story and now its over! :( but the is going to be a sequel!!!! YAY!!!!
xxjenjaexx #68
LOL this is definitely in my top five favorite baekyeol stories, it had everything I ever wanted in a story and gurl YOU are amazing for creating this this. There are soooo many things I want to say but I cant even remember more than half of them because of how much I was mind blown. I ship them harder than ever and the ending......I cracked up sooo hard xD
I cant wait to start reading the sequel, WE LOVE YOU♥
yunglean
#69
Oh god. It's over. Can I just... ASDFGHJKLASDFAJLSAH. I CAN'T EVEN. THIS IS LIKE MY ABSOLUTE FAVORITE BAEKYEOL FIC OF ALL TIME. I CRY.

I was watching the show Awkward on MTV and comparing and spazzing the whole time, figuring out who Baekhyun and Chanyeol were.

MY BODY IS READY FOR THE SEQUEL.
Westphalian #70
I just wanted you to know that Awkward was one of the best kpop fanfictions I've read. It has a more comfortable feel than those imposing fanfictions like Arbitrage and Absolute Chanyeol. I think you did a great job of portraying the awkwardness of Chanyeol and Baekhyun's relationship in the story. I also think that you ended it really well, not adding was a smart move, it helped add closure and yet it left it open to the option of the sequel that you're going to write. That's all for now, keep writing!
chamomilla
#71
wut. it's over?

lady, I demand a sequel.

Like, now. And there better be KaiSoo in it.
YoungWoo17
#72
awww...OVER ALREADY? and I was sooo late reading this fic, too.
But holding onto your promise for a sequel... YAY!!!
I loved Baekyeol in this. my ULTIMATE OTP.
and kaisoo, too.
Thanks for a great fic!!! :)
Happy_Limbless
#73
AH!!!!! This story connected to me in the beginning in strange ways, but thank GOD it ended better than what happened for me, but it's not like my life is terrible after what happened...Oh! I'm getting off topic. IT ENDED!!!! *wails like a dying cats*
Lala1901
#74
brb: partying!
woah, I am so looking forward to the sequel!!! and there's going to be Kaisoo. . . !
'gull, I can't explain what i feel.'
ajeifvae--but i'm still sad to see this ending. =( and then you didn't even write the entire scene
/sobbing/
but still, I like how everything worked out in the end. ^^
agentkitty
#75
OGNFDSKDJSWOS IT'S FINISHED? D: AAAHHHH I LOVE THE ENDIINGGG. THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THIS AMAZING STORY <3
Female_Onew
#76
I agree with

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ohsehunf
#77
GROSS SOBBING I DON'T WANT THIS TO END SOBSOBSOBS
blossomkisses
#78
That's last update was ♥.

The ending is coming soon?! ;A; *cries*

This is one of my favorite Baekyeol fanfics btw :)
emo_bear
#79
omg it's going to end soon ;~~~~~~~~~~~; b-b-but...I LOVE THIS SO DAMNED MUCH AND OMG NOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!! ;AAAAA; aigooo don't kill me like this!!!! TT^TT lol jk lol i think i'm loving you and this fic a little bit TOO much :/ <333 kekeke~ xD i hope you'll continue to write more awesome fics after this one is finished!~ ^^ <333
Platypusrocks #80
AAAH they're together. OW YEAH

That chapter was really cool, thank you! *-* I really love the awkward Chanyeol, the stupid Baekhyun, and the two of them being together as bestfriends that ... kiss and stuff.

Really love your fanfic!
ja_chan12
#81
I LOVE YOU AND THIS FIC. <3<3<3 OMG! OMG! Too much beauty sinking to my mind because of this. Please, just please, write more! I mean, another rounds of fics. :)) I'll go stalk your tumblr naoooo 'coz you're AWSM! :">
agentkitty
#82
This fic made me cry so much asodlwlqspswoq this is one of my favourite fanfics... ever. I love you. I'm glad I searched up baekyeol fanfics today. LOL. Bestfriends that kiss and stuff is forever going to be in my vocabulary. <3
HealLaHeal
#83
Bestfriends that kiss and stuffs LMFAO tagliiiiiinnnnee
SuhoAngel #84
I Love this <3<3<3
hyunaigoo #85
perfect perfect perfect omg too much love for this
boitoitons
#86
lmfao, "best friends that kiss and stuff" that is just lovely. lol
Baekhyun was thinking about the "stuff" part while Chanyeol just wanted to play games, eat, and bury the goldfish xD Oh, I love these two ^^
I'm pretty sad that this will end already...