Chapter 19: Now that i dare to register to asianfanfic I can finally say you thank you for writing. This is one of my favorite since the begining. It's such a shame that I was too shy to logout and put comment for cheering you with the other. I really like how you wrote Baekhyun sentiments, and I was feeling as down as Chanyeol too, that was really well writing. Thank you again to take the time and post your marvelous story. >u<
Chapter 19: Whoa..... I read all of this in one day and you had me on the edge on my seat lady!:D I loved how it was so akwardly sad but then fluffy sometimes. But really you did anamazing job cause I was like when I found it, "Yeah this will pass the time," but then I was like, -cantstopreading- and it was just... you just.../ blow my mind
I'm sorry for this poor exscuse of a comment but knowing that your also making a sequel makes ME F****ING LOVE YOU!!!!!~
So thank you for writing this akwardly perfect story!!!!;)
Thank you, for writing this fanfiction.
You're really amazing and I'm going to stalk you from now 8DD
I mean THIS is friggin amazing. You have no idea, how I respect you.
If I could I'd hug you tightly and never let go. >.<♥
Damn, I feel like a fangirl now :DD
Anw - I love you and you should know that. It'd be awesome to get you know better. Good luck at writing in the future! :33
Chapter 19: This fic is just awesome~ the chapter where yeol was sobbing and baek being a flustered idiot did make me cry, idk, maybe bcoz baekyeol is my numero otp. Oh god thank god for making jongin a good buddy here~ haha
I really enjoyed reading this fic... so much~ i'll read your kaisoo fic later, hahaha xoxo
Chapter 19: Haha an odd ending but was still good :)
loved the story, so I'm gonna be checking for the sequel ^^
plus i enjoyied all of your A/N too. XP
and those gifs... :)
don't let go of that great high spirit mk? ;P
OMG!!!I LURVE U AND THIS STORY!!! Thks so much for writing this story. I just finished my exams so this is like the best gift!!!! This is one of the vry rare stories that makes me feel so warm inside. Not to mention that my two most ultimate bias are main characters!!! This just makes me love chanyeol more! *fangurling*
Chapter 19: this was an amazing story!!!! :)
tbh, my friend told me to read it a few months or so before, but I couldn't find it so I couldn't. But one day it was on the front page so I will like WHOA ITS FEATURED!! So good job on the story. I loved the slight bits of humor you added in the middle just to keep the readers laughing, and the little Kaisoo moments you added for us shippers 8D
Chapter 19: Omg. I just stayed up like all night to read this. It's three in the morning and I just have to say that this was so utterly amazing and great and that even though I'm super tired, your story kept me up. I just couldn't stop reading until I was finished. Please Please Please write a sequel, I will love you forever! This story was just asdfghjkl and BaekYeol... omg they're just giving me cavities with how cute they are. You did a wonderful job. I can't wait to read more of your stuff.
~Lady Faine
Chapter 13: Can I just like slap Baekhyun. Oh, not even a friendly slap, a legit hard smack against his head. Or maybe a punch to the gut. Hey, a kick to the shin doesn't sound too bad either. Sorry, I'm just really mad at that child <.<
Chapter 4: When Minho Kibum Taemin and Onew were making fun of Chanyeol and when Baekhyun yell at them to not make fun of him I was like that's right Baekhyun protect your man
Here's how my reading experience went:
1) Saw the feature and thought "Another EXO fic? Really?? Well... this one doesn't seem that bad.... ... I don't even read . Or EXO."
2) You know, that feature fic didn't look so bad. Let's give it a try.
3) SEVERAL HOURS LATER (because I don't have a life) and much mental abuse to Baekhyun for his stupidity and abandonment of poor Channie... WOW I REALLY LIKED THAT FIC.
I don't shop Baekyeol though. I don't ship anything or anyone. My friends get influenced after reading good fics though, I honestly don't get it but to each, their own. Great characterization of Baekhyun throughout. I wanted to run him over with a truck and shoot him with a gun loaded with 2 by 4's but underneath all the rage (from his aforementioned neglect of Yeol) I *understood* him. At least, I think I did. I should hope so or my literature teacher would be very displeased. He's a teenager, albeit a more-than-average stupid one, but a brash teenager no less. You know, great characterization of everyone. It's 2AM right now (but my internet is half-heartedly shining through so who knows when the comment will actually be posted) and this comment would be longer and more in-depth if not for my inconvenient need for sleep. I'd like to end this seemingly already long enough comment by saying: good job. (If that means much coming from a rather inexperienced and awkward teenage girl)
So, I read this in two days. And OMFG this really heightened my Baekyeol feels (because I do not ship any EXO pairing. Maybe I will now). This is really so good. I do not regret stopping and taking time to read. GQHFWHJFGWHJFHW!! Thank you for a wonderful and funny story. I laughed a lot :) Author-nim is so good ^^
Chapter 15: Wow! Chanyeol acted so so...!
I just ... I guess I wasn't expecting him to react that way at all. But even so, I really like his attitude! *o*
Chapter 19: this is really good stuff. the storyline was realistic and fluffy at the same time. i didnt really care much for the chapters cos its not really my thing but the flow of this story was very smooth and i could see how you tried to bring out the awkwardness in the different situations, plus the interludes brought better understanding to the story. i really felt for the characters. a brilliant read. you write really well and i'm looking forward to reading your other works!
Chapter 19: I was doubtful in reading this fic at first, because I always thought that featured fics are filled with cliche/boring plots. But then I took a chance(because I was bored) and read this fic(because I absolutely love Chanyeol as well) and guess what? I was blown away.
The story is good, the characters are good, the writing is good and even the is good. (okay change all the 'good' to 'superb' or 'excellent' cause I think that 'good' is an understatement)
I really like the fic, and for once, I think that this is one of the fics that actually deserve to be featured.
Continue writing good(I mean awesome) fics! :)
Chapter 19: I just finished this ;___; oh my gosh this was lovely ;___; my heart is all fluttery AH probably the perfect romance in my opinion~ I've always wanted a love like this haha :x thank you so much for writing such a wonderful story ^___^
Chapter 19: I've always enjoyed baekyeol fanfics. Really love your story. I felt bad for Chanyeol throughout the story with his feeling; I'm glad he got the love he deserved in the end. I commented out loud so many times while reading this because of baekhyun's actions. Really I really love this story. Thank you!
Chapter 19: Hello!!! I'm a new reader ;)
OMG THIS WAS SUCH AN AWESOME FIC!!!!!!!!!!!!
I love uuuuuuuuu, for u r gonna make a sequel<3
You r a really great writing and the story was also REALLY, REALLY good! :D
Chapter 19: OMG! THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR WRITING SUCH AN AMAZING STORY! I LOVED IT! I love the fact that it will have a sequel! Thank you so much! You are an amazing writer and I totally like what you do!
Chapter 19: i finished this and DEAR GOD IT'S GOOD YOU KNOW I STARTED SHIPPING BAEKYEOL BC OF YOUR FIC OMG THIS IS THE BEST I LOVE IT SO MUCH OMGGGG JABZJSBSMSJSJZ
Chapter 19: OMFG~ Author-nim you're a ____ing genious! really omg, the plot is so beautiful/entertaining/dramatic yet so simple hfbfhjdb i really loved this omg~ let's get married please xD
Chapter 18: Im puking rainbows and fangirling my eyes out i love you so- so- /sob much! ; o ; I can explain how much i loved this fic!!! ILU! ; o ; ROFL im such a creep~
-runs away- x v x
Chapter 19: Best awkward story I ever read. I'm glad you were the one who wrote this amazing piece of lovely work . I cried a bit but I laughed in almost all the chapters. Thanks for this story! <3 <3 <3
Chapter 19: I'm not a person who writes long comments so I'll just put it like this: I love this story! It made me laugh, whine and fangirl and that is what a good story makes you do ♥
Chapter 19: OMG I LOVE THIS FIC SOOO MUCH SERIOUSLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Im sorry, i kinda got carried awaz there....kmh let me compose myself.
So yeah i really, loved this story thought you probably already worked that out from my earlier out burst. Though i really wanted like a kaixkyungsoo line somewhere near the end ...or i dont know if anybody else was like that i could really see a kai streak there....maybe not with kyungsoo, maybe with sehun but im sure you see where i am coming from. I absolutely loved the sassy wingman(sort of) character you gave Kai his lines were legendary i couldnt help cracking up about the twilight part XD. In conclusion most sweetest story EVER and i think i fell in love with the style of your writing....Much love <3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3
Chapter 19: Okay....I don't know from where to start.I am in love with this so much.
Even though it was awkward(hehehe)with SHINee here because I love them more than all artists in the world combined.But they weren't bad and Key is sorta like that anyway,yay JongKey!Okay to the point this is one great fic.The angst,fluff,humor and everything else was perfect.I didn't really expect their first time being like that,but it was really interesting.Oh and KAI is just awesome!!AND KAISOO almost killed me.I love them so so so much.Both Chanbaek and Kaisoo.And You awesome author.I read this in one go and I have lots to say but I really can't explain in words.Its just AMAZING!!!!I cannot wait for the sequel!!!I'll go subscribe now.Thanks so much for this wonderful fic.❤❤❤
Chapter 18: What. Did. I. Just. Read? You made me start liking a pairing I have never heard of, let alone thought about and then you ruined it... *Sigh* I guess that's the way things were supposed to be, but I am really... Woah o.O But yeah, you're still a decent writer. Although, I am a little confused now.
Chapter 9: Sgssuehwiw. THIS CHAPTER HAS ME MINDBLOWN, SO I'M SORRY FOR ANNOYING YOU WITH ANOTHER COMMENT. XD
The story really IS getting amazing! Even more so than before! :'D Even though Key is kind of like the "bad guy," i still love him to pieces here, and I'm so eager to find out what his evil plan is. XD
sbeikw. I loved this. So freaking much. Kai as the genius, concerned friend makes me happy because I can vividly see him doing something like that. All of your characters seem so realistic that it astonishes me. If I could ever become a writer half as good as you, I think that that would be good enough. :'3
Chapter 6: omg. Omg. I'M SO HAPPY THAT I CLICKED ON THIS STORY. :'D
I feel like you can't say this about most of AFF's featured stories, but you DEFINITELY deserve this. You have little to no grammar mistakes, your story is realistic, and the emotions and portrayals of your characters are just PERFECT. LIKE, OHMYGOD. :'D
I'm still pretty early in your story, but i couldn't resist commenting now. I'm THAT in love with it. X3
And this might not really count anymore, but I'm definitely interested in writing that Kai/Chanyeol oneshot. I actually think I'm becoming addicted to your writing. X3
Chapter 9: I just can't wait until I have read everything anymore o.o I just have to tell you that this is a very nice stor and oh Arceus, I juts adore this pairing. I also adore all the characters in this story and HSNHFG. I like it so much *Pouts and sighs* Just so happy :D And "Awkward." is a very cute series. I have only watched two or three episodes though, just randomly when my sister was waiting for "Degrassi" season two to start airing on MTV here in Norway XD Oh, and I followed you too ^^
And also... Nonononononononononoooo, don't do that D: Why Key? Why?? I just adore you, but this isn't funny :c Why are you so happy about telling him to ruin Chanyeol like that? And why do you seem so evil sudddenly? Why? D: Do you like Jonghyun? Neuuuu #Panic. I'm a little scared for my babies D:
- Afraid she might go insane,
Strawberry Belle Rockbell
Chapter 19: just finished reading it and omigaaaad stupid me who just stupidly realized that i stupidly in love with this story lmao i love it cant wait for the sequel :))
Chapter 19: THIS WAS A ____ING MIXTURE OF FLUFF, UTTER AWKWARDNESS AND LOVE..AND YEAH WITH BAEKYEOL FEELS OVERLOADING THROUGH EVERY CHAPTERS! XD JUST DROOPING BY TO SAY I LOVE LOVE THIS TO BITS CUZ ITS SO CUTE AND I FEEL LIKE STRANGLING YOU CUZ YOU MAKE ME SQUIRM LIKE A ____ READING THEM HAVING THAT..<-- IM AWKWARD NOW :) AND YEAH IM ABUSING THE CAPS LOCK CUZ I WANT TO WATCH THEM HAVE IT WITH POPCORNS AND MY 3D GLASS CUZ IM WEIRD AND CRAZY LIDDAT! TQ FOR THIS ;P
Chapter 19: I've been so deprived of Baekyeol fics with all these amazing Kaisoo fics that this was just the icing on top of the cake. This was absolutely amazing and I can't stress it enough that this fic is just so unf. Congratulations btw for being featured. I know I'm pretty late in fan fics but I'm glad I read this. This is my favorite kind of story that deals with and it's just so perfect. Thank you for writing this and I can't wait for an update on dark side.
Chapter 19: Holy ____, I can't explain what I feel :O This is just adgckfjdkghdhfkg AMAZING! I almost burst into tears when I read this. Author-nim, JJANG, AMAZING!
Chapter 19: I literally started reading this story 1:30PM today in my culture class with everything that I had to do today I have finally finished reading at 12:40AM (GMT-6) anyways what I'm trying to say is I love the story and it had me hooked the moment I clicked it. Thank you for taking the time to write this, I really and truly love it.
Chapter 18: ...... Having just lost my pet fish I seriously feel for that poor little goldfish. ._. I had a crown tail betta for a week exactly and he died. His name was Tao. ;-;
Chapter 19: I cant summarize all of the 19 chapters in one comment. I really cant. I just love everything about this story and everything about you too. Tehehe, please dont be scared if someone ended up hugging you all of the sudden when you're walking down the street because that person might be me >;) I love you, what else? xx
Chapter 19: Gahhh i forgot to leave a comment after reading the whole story yesterday!
I'm suppose to be on a vacation now, but..what the heck i need my daily dose of baekyeol!
And this! Your story, i like. Yes.
I love how adorable baekkie is when he was spazzing over jjong,
But then i hate it that he's so freaking dense about how much he's in love with his bestfriend.
And i love how yeol would do anything for baekkie. My poor baby.
He's too adorable when he tried really hard to ignore the love of his life but failed miserably in the end.
I feel sad for jjong but then again i ship jongkey! Heheh so i'd prefer they end up together.
Kai? That guy is such a good friend.
How i would love to see more kaisoo moments. But oh well.
What crap am i saying right now?
/gets shot
Lol okay. I just love this fic thats all.
And i love youu! Heheh
Cant wait for the sequel!
Update soon!
Chapter 19: I have finished reading this in about an hour and a half~
I LOVED IT <3 I usually hate awkwardness but with Chanyeol its ASDFGHJKL eh I ____ at describing my emotions but ~anyways~
I actually found this story-when it was at around 5/6 chapters(?)- and started reading it but then got busy and distracted and only read until maybe the second chapter? D: But now I really regret it because I could have been here from the start and come along for the ride(> - < )
MOVING ON FROM MY SADNESS...CONGRATS!!! You got featured and I shall do a happy dance :P /kkap dance!/
(LE SPAZZES ABOUT TINY KAISOO AT THE END ASDFGHJKL MY OTP BRAH! ;) and can't wait for the sequel <3 )
Chapter 19: Wah this was so awesome! I read it in all of one day. So glad you got featured or i never would have found you awesome writing XD *runs off to browse your other thingies*
Chapter 19: OMFG
I am so glad your story got featured.
Because there woulda been no way that I found it otherwise.
THIS.
WAS.
PERFECTION.
I absolutely loved your writing style, your CHARACTERIZATIONS of Baekyeol was beautiful. Honestly, I don't ship this pairing very much - but this was just amazing. Mind-blowingly amazing.
From the moment I read the plotline I was hooked. And you made it work - somehow you could bring out the angst and the EMOTIONS so nicely.
^w^
Thank you thank you for writing this
I read thru the whole thing in ONE go. Augh I should be doing my hw instead but...
This was just heaven.
Chapter 19: omg! i'm khjbro (from your little list thing in the final chapter; made a different account lol) and i wanted to say CONGRATS ON GETTING FEATURED! YOU REALLY DESERVE IT! ;~~;
Chapter 19: I'm glad that I read this! I'm not really into EXO, but I really enjoyed reading this. I loved all of the awkwardness and drama, and I love the way you wrote it.
Chapter 19: ASDGFHJ;LLKJHGF I'M LITERALLY PUKING RAINBOWS RIGHT NOW!!
This was so freakingly cute I cant even <333
This fic seriously brought back my lost love for Baekyeol ^__^
Congrats on being featured btw ^^
Chapter 19: OH GOD I read this in like two days and this was amazinglys good I love all the awkwardness and yes I consider myself awkward too. Being awkward is the new cool. ^-^ Contemplating if I should go read more of your stories hoping they won't mess with my feels like this one.....(I'm gonna do it anyway...lolz)Anyways lub you and this story now >___<
Chapter 19: OMG I love this story so so so so so much!!! It was perfect. every single bit of it. I love you Ari!! And I followed you on tumblr haha Thank you for writin this! <3 <3 <3
Chapter 19: Wow. Like WOW. Seriously! I had school and I would always sneak into my laptop just to read this!
YOU. ARE. AWESOME. *Thumbs up*
And, SEQUEL!! *Squeals* yay~
Congratz on getting featured! Unexpected huh? Lol, kidding!
Chapter 19: yaaaaaaaaaaaah i hate youuuuuu
how can you leave that like thisssssssssssssssss akxnaskjdsakdjkasdjskadnaskd XD
I want thit finishedddd you are so mean ;_;
XD
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