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mivelambas #1
Chapter 19: I CANT EVEN EXPLAIN WHAT IM FEELING WHEB I READ THIS AGAIN JDOWOWKDBJFIEOWLDLDKNWNDIEICIEIIQPWKCL THIS IS FULLULL OF FLUFFY TY GOODNESS!!! IF YOURE WONDERING IF SOMETHING LIKE THAT EVEN EXISTS WELL THIS STORY IS A GREAT ING EXAMPLE GJOWLSMWKDJIRKWOXNWIKWNSJD I CANT EVEN CONTAIN MY FEELS RIGHT NOW
falafalafel #2
This story makes me so angry???? I feel like punching Baek most of the time. But then i would always crack up at the way the author writes and describes things. Funny and a complete perfection!!! <3<3
FrozenBreeze
#3
Chapter 19: I'm so in love with this story, one day randomly I google "awkward exo asianfanfic" and this came out <3 I wanted to read something based on that "awkward" MTV show but then destiny gave me this and oh my god I really love (and I really love how awkwardly you wrote the most awkward I've ever read and it was A FREAKING MASTERPIECE lol) the only thing I didn't like was that you kept telling in most of the A/Ns that you were a loser and you were not being able to write good stuff and now I'm telling you, I'M FREAKING PICKY!!! and the way you narrate is really good and the plot is so twisted (yeah, I hate the fact that you took at least 5 chapter to get the plot naturally flowing but it was well written anyways lol) and and and I think that was all I have to say (my first language isn't english so sorry for my broken english u_u).
"Once the final bell rings, Baekhyun busts out the door in true High School Musical style." OH MY GOD that was freaking hilarious XDDDD you got me a good amount of time busting my guts out laughing lol, you should write a comedy (if you have please tell me I'd love to read it!)
And... yeah. That's it <3
I don't know why but I love you author-nim <3 I'm subscribing to you right now ^^
guten Nacht <3
Athena1
#4
congrats on being featured
singinmyblues #5
Chapter 19: AMG I FREAKING LOVED THIS STORY AND IT WAS SO CUTE AND FUNNY BUT ALSO SAD AND I FELT SO SORRY FOR CHANYEOL AND OMG THE FEEELSSSS!! Thank you for writing this wonderfully amazing story although I kinda hate you for it as well because I almost fell asleep in school all the time today because I stayed up til way after midnnight last night because I just couldn't stop reading T_T (haha jk jk luv ya sweetheart^^) and omg now I'm gonna have to check out all your other fics as well because AMGILOVEYOUSOMUCH!! <333
Gimmickgame #6
Chapter 6: I started it a few hours ago and I just couldn't help myself but I finished it in one sit. It made me laugh, it made me cry, it gave me so many feelings! Thank you so much for this amazing story :) you're amazing <3
yoonyulk
#7
dear author,
This story was simply amazing.
I loved it, i want to read it again (maybe i will lol)
thanks for an amazing fanfic!! :D
thexiahtic10 #8
Chapter 19: amazing story authornim~
byunbebek #9
Chapter 18: nice story...authornim.....
i read it last month....but cant comment that time.....and i can still feel it....daebak....
Ismera #10
Chapter 19: OMG!! this was all kinds of amazing, this is the first exo fic that I have totally fallen in love with and I have been searching for something like this for ages :) thank you much for writing something so amazing :) I loved loved loved this!!

my fav line: "boyfriends who kiss and stuff" hahahahahaha
iloveyoualways
#11
Chapter 19: Im so happy I came across this story ♥ I was looking for a really good fanfic to read and I ADORE this one. I love LOVE chanyeol's personality! Ahh I'd do anything for a friend like him ♥ good job on the story ♥♥♥♥♥
lixpark
#12
Chapter 19: I loved this story I just read it And I already want to read it again.
origamifoxes #13
Chapter 19: This story was so frustrating and fluffy and WONDERFUL! MY FEELS ARE EXPLODING~
Every single chapter was so captivating and awkward - I loved every single one!
You developed each of the character's personality so well, especially awkward (and of course y~) Chanyeol, making the story perfect and absolutely addicting!
... Wow, I think I'll stop now, I sound kinda creepy >.<
I hope you write a fluffy sequel! :D
CatherineMather
#14
Chapter 19: Can I just spaz over this fic please? I love it so much! Like omfg it was so amazing and realistic and I love Baekyeol fics as it is, but this one was fabulous. It's so hard for me to find a fanfic that I REALLY like and I REALLY liked this one. Like I really wanted there to be a sequel, but it's okay because this fic was so awesome it made up for it. Like ABJDJDBSNAMS thank you for gracing us with such an amazing fic... That sounded kinda weird... Well whatever. I just wanted you to know that it was fabulous. I love how Jonghyun and the rest of SHINee were in this and how much of a diva Key was. Plus I was laughing A LOT at all the awkwardness of Chanyeol and Baekhyun, especially because I do similar things like them. Well, minus the thing... I meant in their personality, like how awkward and dorky Chanyeol is. Lol I loved this so much, good job! ^_^
MinAlly #15
Chapter 19: I really love this story. I felt really engrossed as I read on and I felt like I was in the story. I felt like I was feeling what everything Baekhyun was feeling and it was PAINful to feel the angst. ESPECIALLY for freaking lovely Chanyeol who sacrificed so much. I really felt the feeling of sacrifice with him and what he did for Baekhyun. And Chanyeol matches really well being awkward and y, that's him. Thank you to KAI omg what would this fic be without you. I also really loved the hint of Kaisoo at the end. I feel really grateful for you, author-nim because after my heart was FREAKING CRYING from the angst, you helped heal us by your comedy at the end. I like how Baekhyun and Chanyeol still kept their "best-friend" treatment to each other and loved each other at the same time. AND YES I AGREE with you that the ....really cute and fluffy is better than the actual thing. THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS AUTHOR-NIM. I LOVE BAEKYEOL SO MUCH. BEAKYEOL FEELS TO THE EXTREME. I will surely read more from you! <3 LOVE YOU.
OhJiYun
#16
Chapter 19: Omg. Haha! Its so awkward. Nice story!
rhian1006
#17
Chapter 19: And can you please.. i need a fluffy sequel.. i want more feels. :) pleeeeeeease.
rhian1006
#18
Chapter 19: Can I say this?

At first I was ing board and i dont know why. But its good that i continue reading it because chanyeol is a god in front baekhyun and i'm fcking dying here.

You're awesome! suuuuper!
Shawols_Unite #19
Chapter 19: I love this fic so much omg I've only just found like a day or two ago and I've finally finished reading it and iT'S ING AMAZING OK.(and oh-so-awkward but the awkwardness just makes the story better :3) I have to say when you wrote that Chanyeol was wearing spongebob boxers, I couldn't stop laughing because in EXO's Showtime, Kris gave Chanyeol spongebob boxers for his birthday XD So there's proof that Kris read your fanfic XDD
Anyway,I love you so much for writing this; it's definitely one of my favourite BaekYeol fanfics <3
sassbaek #20
Chapter 19: LOL this was really awkward haha...but very enjoyable ! Good job :) :)
seoulsilver #21
Chapter 1: First of all, I've read this fic like a hundred times and made an account just to let you know how much I love it. Second of all, I was just watching the latest EXO's Showtime episode where everyone's shopping for gifts for Chanyeol, and KRIS BOUGHT HIM SPONGEBOB BOXERS. I'm dying. I'm actually dying. THIS IS EVIDENCE THAT KRIS HAS READ THIS FIC.
Sleepless #22
Chapter 12: When you start to read chapter 12 please go to yourepeat.com, search for "Nell- Coin seller",and thank me later
Lydabaekkie
#23
Chapter 19: Cute absolutely cute ..:D
happyeollie
#24
Chapter 19: So sweeeeet omfg so greasy and cheesy and mushy and everything ahaha MY FEELSSSS XDD This story really made my mood swing, one time I was squealing and the other time I was sad AND IT WAS SO ING ADORABLE THAT PARK ING CHANYEOL OMF I NEED OXYGEN ahaha XD One of my favourite BaekYeol fics, congrats~ :D
passionburn19
#25
Chapter 19: ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥
Abhieghail
#26
Chapter 19: This is really a cute story.!! <3 love it.
SimpleLuciferSHM #27
Chapter 18: I totally love it when Baek made up the plan to get Yeollie back. And... the weather spoils everything...!!! It's so cute!!! Very good story!!!
Shiny_sushi
#28
Chapter 19: Woauh..seriously I wonder why I didn't comment the first time I read this story! It's a great story! Honestly, it's the story in itself which attracted me and not the pairing since I'm not a Baekyeol shipper! But this story tickled my feelings! I laughed and felt sad and nearly cried (I don't cry I'm tough girl...nah just joking...)! I also never read story or chapters but you managed to make it great, I mean it wasn't like meaningless rough scenes but something...well, sweet?! You're a writing genius if you managed to make me read ! XD
Anyway, I really enjoyed reading this fanfic! ^-^ <3
okidohkie
#29
Chapter 19: I just read this in one go and what can I say? Well, it's...awkward haha cwidt? But it's incredibly sweet and cute and perfect. I would have loved a sequel but I know the work it takes to write so I'm not complaining XD I wanted to punch Baek in the face _-_ I mean really Baekhyun!? OTL anyway, great job! :D
Chanyeolsgurl #30
Chapter 19: SO I JUST READ THIS WHOLE THING IN LIEK LESS THAN AN HOUR AND IT WAS SO ING ADORABLE I FORGOT HOW TO PERSON OMFG
margaloopsy #31
Chapter 6: "Because it’s pouring now. And Baekhyun’s caught without his 182 cm. umbrella. "

okay i love that line...woohoo gonna read the rest!
Anon3791
#32
Ugh this was soo good! Chanyeol was so cute and sweet and dorky :3 thank you for writing such a great story!
shun-kun
#33
Chapter 19: owwaaa~~~ this story was soooo perfect! Like, I laughed, I wanted to punch people in the face, I was touched by the characters.. just.. wow :)

And Beak is so stupid <3 And Yeol a genious and Tall Akward Touchy Teddy Bear <3 [Drunk Kai.. LOL]

Yeol's side story was just perfect, I wanted to punch Baek in the face so hard for being blind like this... :o

Anyways

Thank youuu~~~ :D
Pabo-sshi #34
Chapter 19: This story is just so cute and...awkward..XD I love it!!!! It's so perfect! ;_;<3333
i wish to see more awesome works like this, fighting, unnie! ^-^
milkysehunnie93 #35
Chapter 19: i love this fic ! i'm sooo gay after read your fic. thanks author-nim. lol <3
purplebluepink #36
Chapter 9: Write kailu plsssssssss. Something interesting like this story :D
daehae
#37
Chapter 19: the ending was just...............awkward.

LMAO
winterseoul
#38
Chapter 12: You can't see it BUT I AM REAAAAAALLY BLUSHING SO HARD RIGHT NOW AND MY EYES ARE TEARING UP BECAUSE I AM SO EMBARRASSED because just as what the title says: THIS IS SOOOOOO AWKWARDS. *tears tears tears*
Sebaekthigh
#39
Chapter 19: Aw no its over !!!!!! :,( it was so good. Jealous baekhyun is sho cute! And this had me laughing at some parts. I reaaally loved how they made up and started dating I just wish there was more chapters of them dating! Still good story !
heart_entice #40
Chapter 19: I really2 love your story, one of the best fic i've ever read!!!
Hyunika #41
i love your story very much!!!!!
tess0214 #42
Chapter 19: and here I am again !!! waaaa loved it !1
_wonwoah #43
I loved it!!!! Really really really loved it!!!! Author-nim you're a genius. *O* Thank you for sharing this fic. <3 Saranghae TvT
tess0214 #44
Chapter 19: totally loved it !!!!
sdjfkasjdlfaskdjñasldalñsdñlsd LOVED IT !!
ZicoLove3 #45
Chapter 19: I really loved this story gosh kmwtpwjpjatxtqjxb good job
justinyo #46
I don't have an account on AFF but when I read this, i just cant let it pass. I mean, I just cant read another one fic without actually saying how great your story was. It was really good that I cant really think of the best word to describe it. Thank you for thiss!

And in case you're a little confused, yes I'm a guy. Haha! :))) Thank you author-nim. :)
bakayaroKyul
#47
Chapter 19: nice story! liked it a lot ^-^
Mizukiix3
#48
Chapter 19: This is the cutest thing i've ever read omg
estranged_ #49
this is a great story :)
foreverbaby
#50
Chapter 14: I was like omfg r u on crack writing this
cheesecakedae
#51
Chapter 19: This is sooo good! I finished it like in 2 hrs and I must say that it was worth reading it :)
bookishvice
#52
Chapter 19: I finished reading and this happened..
2:43:05 - subscribe to story
2:43:15 - tag it as Favorite
2:43:24 - subscribe to Kaisoo story
2:43:32 - subscribe to author
2:43:40 - add author on tumblr
So yeah idk what happened. This is one of my favorite Baekyeol fics ever and I don't really read that many fics of these two because I prefer other otps. But this story, your writing just me in and I loved every funny, cheesy, and awkward moment of it! I'm not very good at the spazzing thing, but spazzing I am. Herehavesomesparkles (ノ´ヮ´)ノ*:✧
HappinesssDelight #53
Chapter 19: they're soooo sweet! <3 I like how their love story goes...
fallendevil_17
#54
Chapter 19: I found this story of yours from a tumblr acc~ I basically put off my assignment just to finish reading this story but no regrets though~ Really, really worth it~ This story is so awesome~ I love the plot~ Love the characters~ love the lines and the too(?) XDDD Anyway, great one author-nim~ ^^
jodassie
#55
Chapter 19: This story was sooooo good I finished reading it in a day sob :') You had my heart breaking for Chanyeol right to the every end but omg I'm so glad that they ended up happy together hehehe :') Thanks for writing this, I thoroughly enjoyed it (and please write more stories! yayyyyy)
HappinesssDelight #56
Chapter 6: i'm really hurt for chanyeol in this part...
sharmanipol
#57
Chapter 19: finish reading! thanks! i really enjoyed it :))
HappinesssDelight #58
Chapter 4: poor chanyeol :( I know something might happen good for u for the next chapters.... (sigh)
HappinesssDelight #59
Chapter 1: another story to read :) I hope I'll enjoy this...
OctopusKevinKissMe
#60
Chapter 9: kyaaaaaaa >< SeKaiiiiii :DDD
Suzume1096 #61
Chapter 19: Omo I finished it all in one day!! This was the best fanfic I've read ^^ it was so cute :D thank you so much for writing this and I'm about to go read your other stories :3
suhotastic
#62
ITS WEIRD BUT IM GONNA START READING THIS NOW OKAY BYE
morgan47 #63
Chapter 19: Wow. This was epic. I don't think you need a sequel. I think this is perfect just how it is. Thank you for sharing!
kimna-young
110 streak #64
Chapter 19: This is really a good fic ^_^ I love BaekYeol and this story too! <3 Way to go author nim! <3
honey3307 #65
Chapter 1: Words cannot express how much I love this fanfic... like I can't even.... *starts to hyperventilate* I just have so many feels and like this is so wonderful and adorable and I just... *cries and re-reads*
K-Sofi
#66
Chapter 19: I just read this fanfic, and... I'm in love (?) <3 it's so cute omg and god Baekhyun is my bias and Jjong is my SHINee's one lol. I reallly liked imagining then together but BAEKYEOL OKAY. Chanyeol is so derpy and asdfgh I can't <3
xiahticxx
#67
Chapter 19: A good fic indeed. Love you for this. Less more awkward lol
doremi28
#68
Chapter 19: You did really good. I enjoyed it. I laughed, a lot.
ChoAnRa #69
Chapter 19: YOU ARE INCREDIBLY TALENTED OMG RLY YOU AWESOME AMAZING WRITER!!! :] you make my emotions all spinning around I can't describe what is happiness and sadness, theyre the same ok LOL
my baekyeol feels are buzzing rn. my OTP is hunhan but this fic MUST be read by a romancefic lover like me. so um I marathon this, I read this till my eyes red and sore from crying and hands numb because i read this on my phone but well its worth so much.
uh I think I should stop rambling. just know you are one of my faved writer <33333 stay writing~
arwenflame
#70
Chapter 19: I loved this a lot!! Thank you for writing an amazing story ;D
Lafrisee
#71
Chapter 19: /sobs at life
Choclover228
#72
Chapter 16: Lol, the gif XD
Choclover228
#73
Chapter 14: Oh God Chanyeol! Be strong, just a few more chapters till your happy ending.
Choclover228
#74
Chapter 13: Aww, Baek, you didn't ruin it. Chanyeol loves you too.
Choclover228
#75
Chapter 12: Lol, awkward...poor Chanyeol.
Choclover228
#76
Chapter 9: I wonder if Key does agree with this whole thing or is he upset about it...
Choclover228
#77
Chapter 4: Whoa....I ship Baekyeol and JongKey. But Baekhyun's in this crush is so cute :3
NaimaM
#78
Chapter 12: **the not UT
NaimaM
#79
Chapter 11: New reader and subscriber?? I think. Internets being soo slow so I can read all of the fic. You are seriously one of the best authors on aff!! I am laughing so hard at everything even UT notes at the bottom:p
ilovenino #80
Chapter 19: AHMAZING! WOOH BAEKYEOL! : )
DeerLuhanTheXOPlanet
#81
Chapter 19: Awesome BaekYeol fan fic! :D
IamShe
#82
Chapter 19: OK. I came here because I read another one of your stories. I started to read this one. And was like this seems familiar. It hits me. I read this wonderful story before. So I just went ahead and read it again. And guess WHAT? Still WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!
louisa_may #83
Chapter 19: DAXJHANANJWWAKNS AT LASTTT I FINISHED READING THIS FANFIC AND OMG I SOOO LOVE YOU MS. AUTHOR! THIS IS ONE OF THEB EST FANFICS IVE EVER READ OMG <3___<3

CHANBAEK ! BAEKYEOL !!!! <3 KYAAAAAAAAAAAAA
OhNiniSoo #84
Chapter 19: This.Was.Amazing.
babybubbles
#85
Chapter 19: Totally love it! Thank you! <3
tonguemaster
#86
Chapter 19: Jesus ive been laughing like crazy oh man this was great
Sammiwammi65 #87
Chapter 9: I have just realized that Key is just doing this so he can be Jonghyun's bf. I'm so stupid. -_-
ChocoLov
#88
Chapter 19: Oh wow.. this was really good. <3 I don't have much to say considering my brain is speechless at the awesomeness I had just read. But! I will be checking out your other work so... yeah! Loved it! <:)
ChocoLov
#89
Chapter 19: Oh wow.. this was really good. <3 I don't have much to say considering my brain is speechless at the awesomeness I had just read. But! I will be checking out your other work so... yeah! Loved it! <:)
ChocoLov
#90
Chapter 15: I don't even know the sound that came out of my mouth. It was a mix between a squeal and scream. But that's okay... BECAUSE CHANYEOL FINALLY STOOD UP! (And Baekhyun's still an idiot). Despite how much i love Jonghyun, I'm glad he got punched xD And I love Kai and Chanyeol's relationship <3 You can really tell the former cares for him :)
ChocoLov
#91
Chapter 13: Omg my wish came true and right in the next chapter! <3 He realized he loves Chanyeol *sobs* <3
ChocoLov
#92
Chapter 12: Omg this is seriously amazing but... you have no idea how much i felt like crying from how awkward I felt while read the "scene". And Chanyeol releasing first, the whole "wilting" of Baekhyun... the second-hand embarrassment I felt (I've always been easily second-hand embarrassed lol) was- oh god i had to take a few moments before going back. I'm not sure if you meant for the scene to be like that but... well I mean the scene was written extremely well but the awkwardness of their first times... i just can't lol. But I'm loving this story and feeling extremely bad for Chanyeol so I hope Baekhyun quickly gets his head out of wherever it is and realize just how awesome, sweet and amazing Chanyeol is. <3
Midnight_fantasy1145
#93
Chapter 19: Awwwww girl. This was really good. I've read A LOT like A LOT LOT of baekyeol fanfiction and this one is..... Different. Both chanyeol and baekhyun aren't perfect but like you said- they're awkward. But that's why ya so lovable !!! ARGHHHH so great job and sorry for being a late fan. Yeesh. I need to browse more. Lol :p also you're a really nice girl and we should chat too!!!! YOU'RE SO ADORBS so good luck and ill get to all your other stories now :D
Krease99
#94
Chapter 19: I can't believe I haven't found this until now. This was so awesome! I almost thought Chanyeol would leave or something since it was only like two chapters left when he was mad but now they're together and I'm so happy! I loved this! :D <3
nestine #95
Chapter 18: I love it damn! it had been my third time reading this :) the fluffiness is killing me. and please please please make a kai and kyungsoo sequel to this :)
flywith-me #96
Chapter 16: Quote Kai cause I agree with him
thechristmaslights #97
Chapter 19: I loved it! I loved it so much! There typos and such but everything was generally good :)