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enajalil
#1
Chapter 19: So beautifully ing awkward. Yes, I really like this story a lot, and like, the ending was absolutely perfect and it was so worth the whole night of not sleeping, like, YUS, this was worth it(>^o^)> <(^o^)><(^o^<) <<<idk why three emojis.....anyway this was fabulous and thank you so much for writing and sharing, and I reallh enjoyed the story AND your author notes. (Sometimes it feels like a chore to read the author notes, but I loved reading yours) excuse me while I go investigate the rest of your stories and most like subscribe to 90% of them and make comments LIEK this on all of them byebye~♡
minakwon38 #2
Chapter 19: I would date Chanyeol tho. The weird, painfully awkward (handsome) giant. Shiet i just discovered this ff oh god thanks for the talent. You jjang!!!
DangerousHeart384
#3
Oh and by the way, what book is it based off of?!?!?! I REALLY want to know!!!!
DangerousHeart384
#4
Chapter 19: OH MY GOSH THE FLUFF IS INCREDIBLE!!! I WANT TO TAKE THIS FIC AND CUDDLE WITH KISS IT AND JUST AAAAAAAAAAHHHHH I CAMT EVEN EXPRESS DA FEELZ RIGHT NOW!!!!!!!! THIS IS AMAZING!!!! I luv you author-nim <3
rmrchanyeol #5
The first ever fanfic that I read.
BubbleTeaAddict #6
Chapter 10: I was up all night yesterday reading this. The Baekyeol feels were so strong that I had to cover my mouth with my pillow before I woke everyone up. xD This is one of the best fanfics I have ever read. Really. Love you so much for this. :D <3

P.S I blame you for my 'Oh my god, who is that creature' dark circles. xD
yuminons
#7
Chapter 19: I AM SPAZZING HERE, TOO MUCH CHANBAEK FEELS FJFJDJFJFUSUFIHRITUGUURUDUFIFUF
Fefotter #8
Chapter 19: Chapter: The End
NOOOOOOOOOO~ You ended it right when it was getting good xD Aw man! Oh well, I can always go back to the other chapter -eyebrow eyebrow- Let me just say, this was a AMAZING fanfiction! YES! It was. It was. There was more angst than I thought there would be, from the beginning. You just cut to the Jonghyun, and then a little uh, history here and there. Baekhyun and his previous boyfriends, clueless, mary Baekhyun and cheerful puppy Chanyeol. First thoughts: Oh, oh I know already! Baekhyun is going to go out with Jongie, then he will realize Chanyeol's everlasting love for Baekhyun. Bam, babies. NOOOPE. One thing led to another, hour led to another hour, and the whole fanfiction was done. But not before I cried tearrrrs, ugh! So much angst! I thought it was going to be fluffy! Oh my god, it's perfect! The way you wrote the chapters so perfectly, I never thought it could last for nearly twenty chapters, it just sounded like a two shot fanfiction- and then you revealed that it was originally going to be just that. The only thing I wish for, is for more character development to Jonghyun, his buds from Shinee, and Baekhyun's friends(I guess they were also Chanyeol's friends too, but ???). Like, I don't know if they've (as in Shinee, Jonghyun, and Baek's friends)stopped ignoring him, or are they friends now??? I know Jonghyun is cool with everything, Kibum is still on his period, and Kai is just like "Yeah, I knew it." but everyone else was kicked in the dust. We need a prologue ASP xD Just kidding, just my curiosity that's all. Lastly, I wish you a good life >:0 Yeah, and I also wish you.. Good fortune, err and yeah good health(ohshtcantthinkofanythingelse). I'm glad you have 507 votes, 161670 views, 1903 comments! You deserve them, you made me go on a unexpected roller coaster ride of emotions, also making me puke in the middle (Kibum the jealous gf). Thank you so much! THARANGHAE(sehunlisp)!
-Fef
minseoku
#9
Chapter 19: I'm probably late to the party but god . . . I don't think I can even thank you enough for writing this. Baekyeol isn't even my top ship either but, just, wow? I had the feeling I get reading amazing stories about my most adored ship, which is really honestly rare (since I'm so Taoris biased).

This was just so adorably cute, and the way you wrote them, just felt so real? I'm not a writer but I'm working on a story because, well, I'm desperate (LOL) and this makes me want to improve so much. Gah, it's such a lovely piece, thank you.

P.S I'm one of those people that prefer little /fluffiness over actual as well and the amount of everything you had in this story was just right. Perfect. Thank you. ~
Totothepig #10
Chapter 12: Chapter11: authornim!!!! Why are you torturing me so!!?!? This is so great!!!!

Totally random.... On the gif, is that a tatoo above Chanyeol's *ahem*?
BaekYeolInLove66 #11
Chapter 19: I really loved your fanfic omg *0*
(and i love you AN) Uhm...I LOVE YOU FANFIC AND YOU ARE SO ADORABLE NAWW *0*
kojakwookiee #12
Love, love, love!
hallyulover #13
Chapter 19: Well It was cute at the end >_< i wanted Yeo to give Baek a lesson before he forgets him but! I think he was sooo ing in love with Baek in this story that he couldn't xD It's ok though~
Good job!! I enjoyed it <3
Thatawkwardday
#14
Chapter 19: A;LKSDJFAL;KDJSF cuuuuute omg i wanted to punch baek in the face so hard and i am 110% surprised that chanyeol or kai hasn't done so yet. omfg at least they're okay nowwwwwwwww
kojakwookiee #15
Chapter 18: The ending was so cute!
hallyulover #16
Chapter 9: You made my almighty cutie pie Key the evil of the story!! whyyy?!! xD well but it goes well with the plot hehehe
hallyulover #17
Chapter 7: Go and spread Baekyeol feelings to the world ^_^ at least that can be true in our 'innocent' minds xD HAHAHAHAHAHAHA Good job!!
hallyulover #18
Chapter 6: I start to get emotional with this chapter T_T good good good!! You do justice to Chanyeol personality ^_^
hallyulover #19
Chapter 4: Good job!! I like the fact that this looks like a real book story ^^ I like to imagine the conversations and stuff so it's interesting! I don't mind if there isn't interaction at first 'cause it make you even more curious :-)
uthiana #20
Chapter 19: Baekhyun pea
DelusionalA #21
Chapter 19: Ok i totally ddnt sleep the whole night 2 read this amazing piece of perfection... Definitely not (yes)
altho in the beginning it ws a bit slow to my liking but u changed my mind... i really loved the course of events - the confusion, the anger, the fluffiness... just everything! Thankyou authornim :)
RogueStrudel #22
Chapter 1: I've just started reading and I already love it!
aestaetics #23
Chapter 18: gdi why am i crying so hard
this story-
i cAnt handle anything right now ok
i dont think i can live to push the next button
aestaetics #24
Chapter 16: im so ing glad chanyeol said no tbh
duckyhorse_love
#25
Chapter 19: .....SPEECHLESS.....I WAS THIS CLOSE TO WRINGING BAEKHYUN'S NECK IN SOME OF THE CHAPTERS, THEN IN THE CHAPTERS THAT BAEKHYUN FIGURED OUT THAT HE WAS IN LOVE WITH CHANYEOL I WAS LIKE...I DON'T KNOW WHAT TO DO WITH YOU ANYMORE. AND THEN WHEN HE STEPPED ON THAT GOLDFISH I ACTUALLY STARTED CRYING BECAUSE OMG...HOW IS BAEKHYUN ANY LESS AWKWARD THAN CHANYEOL...HE IS SUCH A FAILURE IN LIFE....I SWEAR....
Author-nim, this fanfic has completely swept me into a hurricane of emotions, I cried, got angry, laughed and spazzed in this fanfic...this is just so amazing
TheInescapableTao #26
Chapter 19: Why do I even LIFE. CUTE. THEN AWKWARD. THEN AWESOME. THEN HILARIOUS. THEN PAINFUL. THEN HOT. THEN NOSTALGIC. THEN LIFE DESTROYING. THEN REALISATION. THEN TEARS. MUCH TEARS. THEN JOY. THEN LOVE. THEN ERMAHGERD.
(sowreh X3) This was actually amazing. Like wow. I've read many a fanfic, but you REALLY pulled this off. As the bull English mark schemes say, you "manipulated the reader's feelings"- so ING much. It never felt stagnant, or seemed to be typical, waffly or predictable, I was just sort of sat helplessly as little parts ended up clawing my soul every which way like I was being quickly but slowly mauled by some psycho murderer farmer with a flaming pitchfork. Such simile. Bravo, sir. HAO KAIn I beJIN to EXOplain thRIS. ChanLOL, JungLOOK at all those TAOrrible BaekhPUNS D.Oe.
dyorena
#27
Chapter 19: Omahgaaadd why did u end the story there ㅠ.ㅠ
I really love it loooove it~ m rated but not that -y (omo did i say that lmao)there are fluffy romance feel to ㅠ.ㅠ this is so cute dont u know i was giggling all the time and 'aa baekhyunah why are u doing it to chan huhu'

So im going to read another story of yours now~
Ari authornim jjang! ^^
baddestpanda #28
Chapter 19: I love it!!!! Thank you for writing this. <3
sebooty365 #29
Chapter 19: Kyaahahhhhh!!!! this was so. fricking. amazingggggg <3 mah feeels omgawdd im fangirling so hard right now wowww :''D I cant believe I just finished this work of art so quickly, literally couldnt stop reading :)
Well done author-nim ^.^
sebooty365 #30
Chapter 1: Just subscribed, might end up finishing this whole fic by today ahaha ;) I cant stop laughing at baeks reaction to channies hideous glasses in chap 1 :''D
tokyotaehyung #31
Chapter 19: This was so cute and fluffy, god I loved this so muchhhhh.
YEOLLIEZEL
#32
Chapter 19: wow. just wow. baekhyun being so oblivious all those years. omg. hahaha. anyway, i like the label between the two of them. bestfriend that kiss and stuff. This is so cute and very nice. keep it up! ;')
KpopMasterShipper
#33
Chapter 19: I loved this!!!! >.< I didn't stop reading!!
StarlitRaindrop #34
Chapter 19: You should make a sequel for Kai and Kyungsoo
blehmeh
#35
Chapter 19: perfect <3
blehmeh
#36
Chapter 18: ahaah this is so cute <3
blehmeh
#37
Chapter 17: i want bulgogi omg ;;
blehmeh
#38
Chapter 15: osh my gosh like jonghyunnie hasn't even done anything and i just cant at this omg ;;
blehmeh
#39
Chapter 12: so awkward i had like phases of second hand embarrassment omg >///<
blehmeh
#40
Chapter 11: BAAHAHAHAHAAH IDEK WHATS GONNA HAPPEN BUT CHAN IS SO CUTE AND OMG I CNA'T EVEN WHY YOU CHOOSE A FLIRT OVER A CUTIE I WOULD NEVER UNDERSTAND AND HOPEFULLY BAEK WILL SEE THE SAME
blehmeh
#41
Chapter 9: OMG WHY IS KIBUM SO EVIL AHAHAHAAHAHAH I SEE HIM AS A SWEETY PIE THO AND I CAN'T WITH THOSE EVIL HAHAHA
blehmeh
#42
Chapter 7: omg kai my bby i just wanna hug you and tell you everything will be fine because baekkie already likes chan he's just too stubborn and stupid to admit it and omg by far my fave chap so far <3
blehmeh
#43
Chapter 6: BUAHAHAHAA that suho gif tho X3
like i don't understand why baek's friends are giving him the cold shoulder? like baek is really not that bad a person in my opinion, just that he tends to take chanyeol's friendship for granted ... ... ._.
blehmeh
#44
Chapter 4: chanyeolchanyeolchanyeolchanyeolchanyeolchanyeolchanyeolchanyeol c:
blehmeh
#45
Chapter 3: i will try to comment on every chap from now on and i hope you dont mind but yeah this fic is pretty cute so far ^^ (i'm a hardcore baekyeol shipper and yet i can't help but ship jonghyun and baekhyun omg Dx)
mypuppyeyeliner_0506
#46
Chapter 12: THAT WAS REALLY AWKWARD.

But at least those words slipped out!
mypuppyeyeliner_0506
#47
Chapter 10: OKAY. THAT WOULD DEFINITELY BE AWKWARD...
mypuppyeyeliner_0506
#48
Chapter 8: AAAAW'Chanyeol!!! <T^T
mypuppyeyeliner_0506
#49
Chapter 4: AAAAAAAAWW'
chokochipp #50
Chapter 13: I just ing read this chap and literally just said : What when ....what the hell..noo...what even!? now I'm just going to take a shower k. I'll be back for the ending. I love dis
acece27
#51
Chapter 19: Loved it i love happy endings :)
Alyania
#52
Chapter 19: It's over? T^T
But seriously...This is one of my favorite fanfics (and I read A LOT (because I es a hardcore Baekyeol shipper XD) of fanfics) and I have to say ohmygoshhhhhh I am recommending this to all my kpop fan friends because this is just /squealing/ SO FRICKIN DAMN CUTE AND IT WAS THE PERFECT COMBINATION OF SLIGHT ANGST AND A HAPPY SAPPY ENDING!!! (I'm a er for happy and fluffy endings) and I think it's about time I stop rambling XD
But seriously though....I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS FANFIC
I can't explain how much I love you right now for writing this...this....awesome-super-duper-would-recommend-any-day fanfic <3
tiannasoo #53
Chapter 19: My favorite fic of all time!!!!!!!!
baekhyuneeeee #54
omg!! why havent I read this story before? its absolutely beautiful. I loved how you portrayed baekyeol's friendship in here. And being boyfriends is overrated anyway. But the best friends who kiss and stuff litetally made my day. thank you for writing this amazing story ,though awkward to read ,still made me explode with feels .
blind_angel #55
Chapter 19: Omg I love this story ._.
I think that's all I can say... I just love this story.
OMG I LOVE ITTTTT!! TTUTT
Ally950414
#56
Chapter 19: It's almost 4 am right now and I finished this entire story in one sitting and all I can say is THANK YOU~
Man you wrote the Baekyeol fic I didn't even know I was craving and man this is just perfect, like in every single frieken way possible and Chanyeol is just so asdfklj in this and little sassy oblivious Baekhyun is just so ugh! and dammit even I knew that Yeolie loves him and I don't really pick up on these kinda things (In real life and in fanfics) and the slight Jongkey made my night and evil Kibum was brilliantly diabolical and oh god, poor Kyungsoo and Kai better behave like an unbipolar person around him from now on and treat him right because Squishy... I don't even know what I'm saying anymore because I need to get up for University in an hour and ... nope not gonna happen just.... this was Perfect, thank you so much and Keep doing what you are doing because this is brilliant. You are brilliant. I just love you okay? Trust me. I love you.
Okay word vomit over now. (-__- )
baekhyun-swife #57
Chapter 19: Hahahahaa best friends that kiss and stuff
I really loved the storyy , gotta ship baekyeol ♡♡
Cant wait to read ur other stories keep it up :* :*
happykitty #58
Chapter 5: I already want to smack Baekhyun into next Tuesday and I have a feeling he's got a whole bunch more stupid to get out of his system.
lunarflowerx #59
Chapter 19: Thank you so much for this lovely story! BaekYeol is my heart & soul and this fic was perfect. The angst & fluff were too lovely for words.
Thanks again! Never stop writing! ^^
Dubu_blinger #60
Chapter 19: Hi! :3 im one of those silent readers but im commenting just to let you know that I love your story and I love how realistic it is \o/ I enjoyed it alot~ never stop writing out your feels <3
SHINeeLover12321
#61
Chapter 19: Nooooooo is over :( Omg like I loved everything about this fanfic. Chanyeol is so freaking cute and sappy, I just fell more in love with this kid. I'm sitting here in my bio class reading this amazing story and I'm squealing so loud and crazily. Forgive me teacher I need to fangirl. I love you and your amazing skills of writing.
KariRedlock
#62
Chapter 19: This was just so cute and perfect and fa;sdlkfalsdkfj <3333 thank you so much for writing this ;u;
KariRedlock
#63
Chapter 18: That poor goldfish omg D: what did it ever do to you, Baek???
KariRedlock
#64
Chapter 16: *continues to beat forehead against desk* UGHHHHH YOU GUYS
KariRedlock
#65
Chapter 15: Is he gonna break his hand or break Jonghyun's nose or both? o: DRAMA! 8D
KariRedlock
#66
Chapter 13: omg this kind of thing gets me every time OTL where two people are so obviously in love (at least to the readers), but one is like THEY CAN'T LOVE ME THIS IS ALL ONE-SIDED WEHHHHHHH *gross sobbing* and I'm sitting here banging my head against a desk because UGH YOU GUYS (really loving this so far btw <3)
KariRedlock
#67
Chapter 12: FEELS INTENSIFIES
KariRedlock
#68
Chapter 11: Sure Baekyeol, not gonna be awkward AT ALL *rolls eyes*
KariRedlock
#69
Chapter 10: I have a feeling this talk isn't going to end well D: Key y u giving Baek these crazy ideas
KariRedlock
#70
Chapter 9: Key is terrifying 8'D
KariRedlock
#71
Chapter 7: Yeollie baby ;o;
KariRedlock
#72
Chapter 6: Way to go Jinki 8'D *slow claps*

also OMG THAT GIF OF SUHO CONTROL YOUR FACE PLS
KariRedlock
#73
Chapter 4: Jinkiiii <3 he's so sweet ;u; i was hoping Jonghyun's friends would be the other members of SHINee xD
Baetaeexoshidae
#74
Chapter 19: gahhh so cute
mongguloverxx_
#75
Chapter 18: Omg!! This was so cute <3 i love it so much. i'm def recommending it to my friends. Great job authornim! Never stop writing :)
BlackBrownPearl #76
Chapter 19: I. Love. Your. Story. Damn. I. Am. So. Happy.
I can't even stop smiling ( ´ ▽ ` )ノ
Ammmm and author nim! Why are you so cute ? \( ; A ; \)
ashblue_
#77
Chapter 19: UUHH I REALLY LOVE THIS STORYY ITS TOO GOOD T^T
JonesyKyah
#78
Chapter 19: Awwhhhh I really liked this story. It was like the perfect amount of angst and fluff and lovey dovey..in simpler words I WANTED TO CRY A LOT BUT IN A GOOD WAY. Thank you author-nim~<33
JonesyKyah
#79
Chapter 18: My brain has solidified because of this chapter. Cuuuutttteeeeeeeee instead of make up it's make up bulgogi hahahah literally me.
JonesyKyah
#80
Chapter 16: EveRy pART of MY brAIn IS Liquid riGHT NOW. ////blasting off
JonesyKyah
#81
Chapter 15: I sat gaping at the end up this chapter for like five minutes. ohmahgawh
Babyddd #82
Love chanbeak soooooooo much
RizqaHappyVirus
#83
Chapter 1: I have finish this Chap ~^O^~


Idk i want to give more sentence of my comment but my english are not good enough i think i should learn more... Hohoho ~^O^~
SehunFangirl #84
Chapter 19: *whispers* I think is the best part too.
TT^TT THAT WAS AMAZING. OKAY MORE WORD VOMIT TO COME.
MY FEELS RIGHT NOOOOOOOOWWWWWW ARE GOING TO KILL ME.
OH GOD THAT WAS SO AMAZING. IT WAS JUST
ASDFGHJKL;ITTYFMDGNTHM
I'M GOING TO GO UPVOTE THIS BEAUTY BECAUSE I DUNNO, YOU DESERVE SOMETHING FOR WRITING SOMETHING SO AMAZING. AND HONESTLY, ALL THE "AWKWARD" PARTS WERE JUST DAMN CUTE.
I LOVE YOU SO MUCH.
THANK YOU FOR EXISTING.
I'LL SHUTTUP NOW.
SehunFangirl #85
Chapter 16: STAHP IT. JUST STOP. YOU'RE HURTING ME. WHY IS EVERYONE GETTING EVERY MIXED UP IT'S SO ING-
GAHHHHHHHHHHH!
WHY CAN'T THERE JUST BE PEACE AND BAEKYEOL. JONGHYUN, PLEASE, PLEEASEE, JUST STAY WITH YOUR GROUP. YOU'RE MESSING UP ALL THE BAEKYEOL.
THIS IS KIND OF A RANT. AND WORD VOMIT. SORRY AUTHOR-NIM MY FEELS ARE KINDA ALLMOVER THE PLACE AT THE MOMENT
dauqspredeht #86
Chapter 1: oh and it complete yehet! i really need some baekyeol nowadays bacause of s and everyhting!
dauqspredeht #87
Chapter 1: ok im starting to get freaking excited to read this one! i hope its kinda like the fic Then Came You or Worth It cause those are like my favorites. haha the feels! new subscriber here by the way! ^^ <<<<333333333
Bannana #88
Chapter 19: YaY I finally finished this and I don't regret staying up 2 extra hours leading me to stay up till 1:00 to finish this fanfic
carpesoo
#89
Omg. So I made the mistake of starting this just before going to sleep.. And the "one more chapter" turned into the entire fic and I went to bed past 2am and woke up a zombie.. But I have NO REGRETS.. This was such a cute fic and my Baekyeol feels were just too much..

I really enjoyed it and your writing style.. And I am shocked I hadnt read this sooner..

Thank you so much for writing and sharing such a beautiful fic with us ^^
Mblaq7 #90
Chapter 18: Okay can I just ing punch Baekhyun in the face right now, because after he put Chanyeol through all that Chanyeol's just going to forgive him like that? I really don't like how Baekhyun can seemingly get everything he wants by saying a simple ing sorry after he uses Chanyeol and puts him through so much crap. By this point I'm hoping Chanyeol ends up with Kai.
starflow #91
Chapter 19: haha yesssss baekyeol with adorable dumb baekhyun yessss :)
honeydean
#92
I love this story so much ;-; thank you for creating such great story!
yeheteverybody #93
Chapter 19: *cries a han river* thank you for such an amazing story. Time to check out your other fics *jumps into the fic mobile*
yeheteverybody #94
Chapter 18: ADDACFYABBHJHBBHJBHJHBJHBJBHJBUHU AAAAAA あああああああ