He Loves Me, She Loves Me Not - HIATUS

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Yoon Hee's a girl who is madly in love with her childhood friend.

Onew is the boy who is in love with the girl who's loves her childhood friend.

Yoon Hee is determined to get her long time love to see her as a woman, and not just a friend.

Onew is determined to win the heart of the girl he loves.

Will time slow down for Yoon Hee to see who really loves her, or will she continually follow the same unending path?

How long will Onew spend chasing after the one he loves?

Fate holds all the answers.


 

 

 

Hello there fellow readers! :)

Thank you taking an interest in my first fanfic!

I will apologize in advance if my fanfic stinks like rotten eggs, but I havent written a fanfic for years and this is my first after that long hiatus.

I will also apologize if I do not update (if anyone reads it) as often as you'd like, for such a cliche storyline, and if my storyline drags (cause I have a tendency to do that). ^^

But I do hope that you will stay with me till the end? ^^

Anyways, enjoy! :)

Foreword

Kim Yoon Hee sat at the edge of the creek with her feet dangling into the water. It was hot afternoon and Yoon Hee thought that a visit to the creek would help to clear her mind, and cool her down. Besides, she didn’t want to go home and deal with other messy problems in her life.

Yoon Hee comes from a poor family. Her father’s always on the run from loan sharks, and her mother, her mother left when she was four.

As she sat, she held a flower in one hand, and plucked its petals with the other.

“He loves me,” she asked herself “he loves me not.”

“He loves me,” she plucked another petal “he loves me not.”

“He loves me, she asked again, “he loves me--”

She was down to her last petal. She sighed and threw the petal-less flower into the running water.

“--not.”

Yoon Hee sighed once more and decided to go home. “Of course he wouldn’t love me,” she told herself “he already has someone that he loves.” With a sad face and a broken heart, she left the creek and headed home.

Meanwhile, somewhere further down the creek Lee Jin Ki stood near the flowing stream with a flower of his own. He plucked the flower’s petals, one by one.

“She loves me,” he asked himself “she loves me not.”

“She loves me,” he plucked another petal “she loves me not.”

“She loves--” he plucked off the last petal, and was struck with sudden amazement.

“She loves me?” He asked himself, staring at the petal-less flower that he held in his hand.

He pondered at the possibility that she might love him. He threw the flower into the creek and let out a sarcastic laugh.

“Of course she doesn’t love me, she only thinks of me as a brother.”

Jin Ki, disappointed that the love of his life could never love him back, he left the creek.

In the water, two petal-less flowers intertwined together and floated down the soundless creek.

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mushfu_
#1
SSK is such a here... And Jonghyun is a ert (for looking into her shirt). <br />
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Taemin is so innocent here XDDDDD <br />
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I hope that Yoohee will realise that the angelic voice belongs to Onew! If she ends up thinking it's Jonghyun, you'll see me ranting.<br />
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Good luck for your exams!! It was better than mine, it lasted for 2 weeks ><
mimi10
#2
oh! your WELCOME~! ^ ^<br />
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and theres the two lovely couple > < *sigh* <br />
PMS? no you dino, its called 'i just saw my childhood friend the boy i love! smooch with his gf, so im angry and decided to ram into you" ? LOL sorry that was weird X3<br />
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aish but i really feel for her..i know what that feels like being in that situation X(<br />
WHOLEY SMOKE that mustve been REALLY HARD.. because she flew that far O.O nice Onew lol<br />
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OMO!! she KISSED HIM!!!!!! XDDDDDDD<br />
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update soon when you can please, Hwaiting and Hwaiting on your exams~!! ^ ^ <33
0891214kj #3
@OnTaeSupporter: Thank you! :)
mushfu_
#4
Chapter one's good :DDDD<br />
UPDATE SOON ^_^<br />
AND GOOD LUCK FOR YOUR MIDTERMS :DD
0891214kj #5
Thanks for the support! :) Ill update again soon, after my midterms? ^^<br />
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@TiaraL: I know right? Its sad that all people see Onew as is a chicken obsessed freak xD
mimi10
#6
oh so its jonghyun she loveS!!!<br />
tsk tsk tsk... jonghyun you player!! > <' aish one of these days youre going to have feelings for a girl and shes going to reject you if you keep it up > < dino XDD lol<br />
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awww Onew!!!!!! your love for her is so cute and that flashback how it all started is sweet :DD but sad that she doesnt recognize it yet :(( huuuuuu<br />
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i hope things go well for these two and hope she sees ^ ^<br />
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loveeeeeeeeeeeeee itt!!!! update soon when you can, Hwaiting~! ^ ^ <3
mimi10
#7
wahhhh sounds so good!!!! ^ ^<br />
i really liked foreword part, so sweet and descriptive :33<br />
cant wait for the chapters to come!! :DDD<br />
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update soon when you can, Hwaiting~! ^ ^ <3