Chapter 3

Green Rose
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[CONTENTID1] GREEN ROSE [/CONTENTID1]

[CONTENTID2]The amount of random things Myungsoo sees here is shocking. He might think he's a brainiac but he's missing out on something all the readers have copped onto: this creepy ship could possibly be haunted. Oh Myungsoo, you're in for some supernatural shocks~
 

I've 'planned' a total of 6 chapters for this fic. I really can't push that number since I'm going on holidays in like 3 days lol. For those 3 days I'll be in a mad rush hoping to complete this fic so it won't be waiting for me when I get back a month later. OMG.

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“Let’s check out the cinema,” Hongbin suggested. Still half asleep he managed to trip over his legs, which are not as long as he thinks, and complained about lectures.

 

The movie theatre was booked out, as was the live theatre where a silent show was playing in honor of Charlie Chaplin. Stuck in a rut, we were left to choose between pigging out at the dinning room or go swimming. Swimming won by a land slide with all three votes.

 

 “I want to see those choir girls in bikinis. It’s sunny, they might even be sunbathing,” Hongbin his lips.

 

“ert,” I elbowed, grinning myself.

 

“You’re the one who was salivating in church,” he nudged back.

 

Leo had begun to sulk, grumbling under his breath most likely reminded of our church antics.

 

“What’s his problem?” I sniffed, offended he'd lured us.

 

“You’re welcome to join our session,” Hongbin invited almost skipping in happiness at the prospect of picking up girls. I must admit, although I was technically taken I wouldn’t mind seeing some hot girls. A guy can look right?

 

I opened my mouth to oppose Leo’s entry to our rendezvous when someone rammed through our clique screaming, “I’m not fat!”

 

Too shocked to say anything even Hongbin didn’t comment on a rather stubby female wearing a towel. We did exchange glances to say, ‘what just happened?’ But were not too bothered by other people’s insecurities.

 

What had happened was something we’d discover once we heard the gathering of debaters hurling offensive comments to one another, some even going as far as throwing drinks.

 

“Fat chicks shouldn’t show skin.”

 

“What gives you the right to tell people how to dress?”

 

“Aye, no one wants to see all that flab flapping around.”

 

Leo outright growled, with dark leer before stalking off like a black cloud.

 

“The ?” Hongbin muttered.

 

“I didn’t even notice.” I scratched my head, perplexed, hoping to see that girl from earlier who’d rescued me.

 

It wasn’t really customary to pretend one was enjoying themselves with a group of arguing men and women deciding if being fat was ‘okay’ or not. We avoided stray gazes in case we got wrapped into this dispute. Flirting was now out of the question.

 

“Do you actually care? Because I don’t,” Hongbin murmured into my ear.

 

Bewildered, I shot my own question. “Are we meant to care?”

 

Before we knew it, the whole thing turned into a ping-pong battle debate about ‘feminism.’ It wasn’t really much to do about women empowerment as it was about men being ‘egocentric chauvinists.’ And while arguments could be true, the presentation of it became vulgar when hands were raised and security ended up having to grapple.

 

The whole thing made us cringe, and by ‘us’ I mean ‘me.’ My left eye twitched judgingly questioning the intellectual ability of the human brain while Hongbin resisted the urge to do some serious eye rolling. Or at least that’s what I thought he was thinking until he said, “Aww, man! I wanted to see some y es,” letting me safely conclude that he was indeed a hormonal guy who didn’t come with a ‘situation filter.’

 

Someone smacked him across the head with frightening speed before I had a chance to. It was that woman from before, the glass-crunching lunatic. Hongbin held his head, seething at her as if trying to frighten a wild beast. She gurgled some gibberish at him, hissing and spitting, leading me to cognize that she mightn’t be as crazy as we thought her to be. I held back my snickering at his expense, attempting to be a decent friend.

 

“I’ll be at the arcade,” Hongbin declared stomping his foot in a threatening manner at the wildebeest. I really did like the guy, so I prayed she wouldn’t claw his eyes out while my eyes roamed to find that mystery girl.

 

If I was honest I wanted not just her name but also the luxury of staring at her a little longer. She was gorgeous in a way that left her image lingering in your thoughts.

 

Speaking of thoughts—

 

“Yah, where did you get money for the arcade?” I bellowed.

 

“Your wallet,” he called twirling to pose with ‘V’ signs.

 

I grimaced and searched my jeans hoping I was still in possession of the thing before all the cash from it evaporated.

 

“Kidding! I stole it from my sister.”

 

It was like a slap in the face. Instantly feeling guilty upon retrieving my wallet and finding things to be in order. I wished he’d have taken my money instead of mentioning her. She who I was meant to be here with, and she who I’d forgotten tracing the path of another girl that hovered in my thoughts. Maybe I was just a jerk.

 

I snorted at myself. Was I the messed up one in this relationship? I, who didn’t think it was a big deal to glance at girls in short clothes because I had eyes that could see. Didn’t all guys do that though?

 

I ruffled my hair scuttling towards the terrace. With regret building in the pit of my stomach, I leaned against the railing gulping salty air. Waves gushed against the hull, oscillations lugging the ship through deep waters. The soft foam of the sea kissed the waterline sticking to it, refusing to part.

 

I guess you could say my relationship was like that. The kind where two people stuck together, doing everything to make the other happy, but not really content with ones bounty. It wasn’t forced since we were both willing but it no longer had that charm. Perhaps I’d think differently if she were by my side. I didn’t know. And for that I felt sorry also.

 

My remorseful reverie was fragmented when I saw a coffin being tossed off board. I did a double take and squinted to make sure my eyes

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12/08/15: A short epilogue for Green Rose to make everyone cry lol.

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luckypug
#1
Chapter 7: haunted fairytale. its spine chilling.
starmyst
#2
Chapter 7: Lol this fic was supposed to be horror? Nevertheless I still enjoy it ouo and now I will commence leaving a long comment for the chapters I missed~
5: of course baekhyun would be there at the ball XD and OMG the fact that Hongbin won haha. (Granted he'a such a pretty human being that it makes sense tbh lol) mingook don't cryyyy--wait demon what? The accent of the pirate I had to read out loud to get it lolol. Wu-wu fan? Also wow Henry's punishment was the least brutal. Leo the ghost doe o.o
6: kibum being a kitten OMG XD and wow it went downhill from there. I take back my previous words of this not being a horror fic because I could sort of see it now especially with this chapter. Like poor mingook and poor Myungsoo QAQ the whole thing though was a whirlwind o.o it was mad lol but I liked the story. it was definitely a fun read XD
Epi: so Krystal was the child? O__O I think I'm more confused reading the epilogue than the other way around bahaha xD
I don't know much haunted love stories but ever read the highwayman? It's a poem and it's really beautiful specially when you listen to the song version of it by Loreena Mckennit. It's not AFF unfortunately and not exactly haunted but I think you should check it out. It's one of my favourite poems.
EtherealMuffin
#3
I'm so confused right now I think I'm going crazy! :O So was any of it real?
What's up with Leo and Kris?

The writing was so great and I could literally feel Myungsoo's torment!

But I'm still so mesmerised :O :O Like what happened to Hongbin? And what about the priest? And all the pirates? And was Mingook a ghost? Mingook was his child??! Dx

And Krystal?! why!? WHY?! I just don't understand, I think I'm going crazy!!

I dunno what to say. It was totally unexpected! I feel like all my questions haven't been answered though! Or maybe I missed something? I'm like tempted to read this all over again to see if I missed any sneaky hints cause right now, I'm just totally and utterly flabbergasted!! xD XD Waaah!! XP
EtherealMuffin
#4
Chapter 5: What is going on?! :O :O @O I am like whaaat? :O ok! this is got me like waaat? :L

awesome awesome chapter! It was really well written! It was so unpredictable haha I loved it!
At first the conjoined sisters with the tentacles made lol so hard. And Hongbin was so cool about it like haha.

And what's going on with Mingook? He gave a warning but what happened to him? Is he part of the dead? Or is he alive like Myungsoo?

Kris is finally in the picture! Man, he's so merciless! Poor Kyuhyun haha, he tots didn't deserve that xP and Shindong, it's a pity you're ugly lol. I'm glad that the others managed to get into Kris' good book though, Hongbin is just a natural at making friends, such a goof lol. But L had to do the dirty work and be called names lol, poor guy :'(

OMG the twist at the end has me all nervous now. Taekwoon has been dead all along!!? DAMN!
Omo please don't kill Myungsoo! :'( :'( Taekwoon you meanie!
passibleo #5
Chapter 5: OMG!!!
OMG!!!
I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH :D
and myungstal too. update soooooon authornim ♡♡♡♡