Notice

Immortals

[Nearly identical to notice posted on Novocaine]

 

Happy (belated) New Year, everyone!

 

So, those of you subscribed to this story’s prequel, Novocaine, will probably have noticed that I’ve been...absent for a while. After being sick for a month, I had planned to write a lot during this semester at college, but then I ended up having the busiest (and worst) semester of school I’ve ever had. Of course.

 

On the bright side, I did have time during and between lectures to work on rewriting both Immortals and Novocaine to make it easier for me to continue writing the latter, as well as changing a few things that had been bugging me for a while. Much of the content is still the same in the rewrite, but with a few key differences:

 

  1. Both stories are now in present tense. While writing other stories outside of the Immortals!verse, I realized that this makes things 1000x easier to write, and the story flows better overall.

  2. Immortals has been tweaked plotwise in multiple places. None of the changes are major enough to have a huge effect on the story overall (or affect the prequel), but it’s definitely improved overall.

 

So, feel free to reread the edited version(s) or not, but I wanted to at least give everyone a warning/explanation for the chapter update. As of the time of this notice being posted, I’m replacing all chapters of Immortals and Novocaine, as well as adding a new chapter (what a miracle, right?) of Novocaine.

 

And, of course, thank you to everyone who has continued to subscribe/upvote/comment! I appreciate every single one of you. :)

 

-nh8343


(p.s. - since I’m finally alive & on winter break, I will do my absolute best to get caught up on stories I’ve been meaning to read - if you think this is directed at you, it definitely is!)

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iam_me00
#1
Chapter 12: The members' reaction is like their real reaction when he joined them as SJ's new member specially Leeteuk's except the absence of Bummie and Geng.

I wonder why people's number one coping mechanism to something tragic that happened to them is to themselves out.

Drones' halt is very very right on time!

Question: Why would you let Hangeng be alive while Kibum isn't?
iam_me00
#2
Chapter 2: Who is the Mayor Park? Is Leeteuk related to him? Grandfather, Father, Uncle, Brother or a Cousin, maybe???
vandarkrose
#3
Chapter 14: Okay, so this story is so beautifully written and it made me cry so many times. The characters are beautifully constructed and the things they go through make the readers' hearts break for them. Also, I was looking for Hanchul stories when I found this one and when I read that Hangeng was dead, I was devastated. But then the last chapter... It was so heartwarming. And I also really love endings like this, happy, but not perfect endings. Because life is not perfect. No matter how much we wish it to be.
homeformyheart #4
Chapter 14: Glad you're feeling better~ And as the trusty editor of this story (therefore completely unbiased......or something), while it was amazing before, Immortals is even better now! CHEERS
cc_kouga #5
Chapter 12: Oooh, I finally finished reading this fic. It was awesome. I love your characters, especially the snarky kyuhyun. His internal monologues are priceless.
Personally, the highlight of this story for me is when they were trapped inside the warehouse and had ran out of ammo. I literally cried at the part where Hyukjae and Dinghae had their foreheads pressed together and they looked at each other. It was beautiful and heartbreaking at the same time. To face the end together, knowing that your loved one will be the last thing you'll see.
Hyukjae's proposal was awesome although I felt a bid sad that the capital citizen weren't really accepting of them. But i'm glad Chullie gets to be reunited with Han Geng. He deserves it. I still have few things to say, but I don't want to bore you, so i'll stop here.
I'll be waiting for Novocaine. ^^
cc_kouga #6
Chapter 10: Gosh! Lucky i'm a late reader, otherwise i'd go ballistic over that cliffhanger. *smugly clicking the next button*
cc_kouga #7
Chapter 3: Oh this is a great story. So far i'm totally loving it. Your version of Kyu is my favourite so far. All that snark and hilarious internal monologues just crack me up every time.

I'm off to read the next chapter. And if it was possible to vote more than once, I would definitely abuse the upvote button >.<
Monkeyfishylove
#8
Chapter 13: this was so adorable. omg.
great work<3. ;;