Yixing

Strange Man
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He was out there again. This time he started watching early and saw his painful approach as he limped down the sidewalk and finally dropped onto the park bench with evident relief.

                He had twitched the curtain aside just tiniest bit so that he didn’t have to hold it as he peered out, because he didn’t want him to know he was spying on him.

                And now, watching him, seeing the way he stared at his house as if nothing else on the street existed, made him feel like a creep himself. Was he losing his marbles or something? His house was locked. He had a shotgun upstairs, a hand-me-down from his father, which he could load with birdshot in no time at all. If the guy tried anything, he wouldn’t be able to get away with it. With birdshot he wouldn’t even need a good aim to plaster him painfully enough that he could escape.

                So what was wrong with him? Why couldn’t he just ignore it? What if it had been someone local, someone he knew by sight, doing the same thing? He wouldn’t be at all worried.

                But he wasn’t local, and that made him nervous.

                Okay, he told himself, try being rational. The guy obviously had suffered some kind of injury, which made him less than threatening to begin with. Maybe the injury had also affected his neck and he was having trouble turning his head.

                Possible, yeah. That stare might be nothing but a stiff neck.

                Maybe he just needed to cool it and stop acting and thinking like someone on the edge.

                Of course he did, but the realization didn’t help. At some level something was niggling at him and wouldn’t give up.

                He saw a police car pull up near the bench. The man didn’t move, so apparently he wasn’t disturbed by the approach of the police. Then Kai climbed out after training his spotlight on the man, who made no attempt to shield his face from the light.

                Man, he thought, Kai was working a long day. And all because of him. But his concern warmed him. He wasn’t treating his nervousness as if he thought he was simply a ditzy bachelor with too much time on his hands.

                He watched as Kai walked over to the bench. Apparently he said something, because the man pulled out his wallet from his hip pocket and passed something to Kai. Kai took it, spoke for a minute, then returned to his patrol car.

                No doubt running the guy’s ID. Finally Lu Han allowed relief to trump over his nerves. Kai would sort it out, and the stranger was on notice that he had been seen. Good.

                The man had the bench so that he was looking directly at the inspector’s car and away from him. So maybe he did find it difficult to turn his head.

                All right, he should just go to bed and forget it. Kai would let him know if anything should concern him.

                Except that he remained rooted. A sign, he decided, of having had too much time on his hands. He wasn’t the type to stand at his window and watch the goings-on outside, unlike some of his nosier neighbours.

                After a few minutes Kai climbed out of his car again, approached the man and handed him something – probably his ID or driver’s license. They chatted for a moment and then Kai got back in the car and drove off.

                Okay, so there was no immediate evidence that the guy was a threat. He glanced over at the digital clock on his DVD player and realized there were only minutes before the guy moved on again, assuming he followed his usual, almost compulsive, schedule.

                Driven by some impulse, maybe the need to put the matter to rest now, he hurried into his kitchen, poured two mugs of the coffee he’d made a couple of hours ago, still hot and rich-smelling. Then he slipped on his jacket and went out the front door with the two mugs.

                As he approached him, the man on the bench appeared startled in a way he hadn’t when Kai had stopped to speak with him. He guessed he hadn’t expected a homeowner to come out at this hour.

                Reaching him, he could finally make out his features. Nicely chiseled, fair and handsome. . What am I thinking? But he couldn’t tell the color of his eyes and could see only that his hair was dark and short. The rest of him, seated as he was,

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dodychan #1
Chapter 15: This is the probably the forth time I'm reading this fic it's amazing and idk but I'd love to read a sequel ike what happenes in their life authornim
vickymatters #2
Good ing job. Amazing story.The dialouges, incorporating methaphysic, philosophy of mind, quantum mechanic, neurobiology and even multiverse theory was very very impressive. Really great deep characters, especially Lay; love the relationship development, the longing for something more than just physical. Good job i'm a philosophy licenciate and i talk exactly like that with everyone haha. Good job :D I was deeply satisfied intellectually, which doesn't happen often with ff.
PinkMarygoldDreams
#3
Chapter 15: Part 2 of my comment holy I ramble a lot O.O;;

The simple title of this fic really doesnt do it justice in my opinion, I feel like you could have gone with a much more syrrealistic, poetry-wannabe one instead and could have gotten away with it.
All in all, I do not regret wasting my time reading this at all and would recommend it to others.
Okay I'll shut up now.

Love u both♡♡♡
PinkMarygoldDreams
#4
Chapter 15: Holy. .
Man was this a read.
I rarely leave comments so you betta feel priviledged okay
This fic took me way longer than I initially planned to get through, I put it on the side for a while when I was almost halfway through (so long in fact that I totally forgot that I know one of the writers whoops SO THESE ARE MY COMPLETELY UNBIASED FEELINGS lol).
A part of the reason I took a break in the middle was because I wasnt really feeling the fic at the beginning. It had a kind of slow build and all this pseudo science mumbo jumbo plus coupled with 'i need to tell him the truth BUT HE CANT KNOW THE TRUTH OH NOES' didnt really grab me. I didnt really see where the fic was going, Im more of a 'just gimme the and we're good to go' kind of girl orz
BUT!
Im so ing glad I came back ;3;
After the mid-way point the fic really picked up and it was easy to immerse yourself in it and get hooked. The actual plot was pretty ing cool. Even though the psychic trope has been overused by now, this story still felt new. And I actually totally didnt see the plot twist with the clock coming at all lol
I like that in the end Luhan wasnt just a damsel in distress but actually proved himself to be badass.
For the romance part, I did feel that it came on kind of suddenly and felt out of place and unexplained at times. But that could also just be my pessimistic true-love-is-dead heart speaking ^^;;
NOW THE THO.
GURL. GUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUURL.
Which one of you wrote it? Im really curious.
The only word I can possibly describe the scene is ing ~☆MAGICAL☆~!! holy , it deserves some kind of award on its own. Hell, with how much I read daily I'll give you an award myself - ~☆°♡MOST MAGICAL SCENE. LIKE EVER♡°☆~
Gimme your adresses, I'll send you a ty drawing of a medal with a on it ;)
yixings24
#5
Chapter 15: This was so beautiful! It had suspense (my heart beat so fast when the man enter Luhan's house), romance and everything was so good written. I loved how smooth the story went like everything was explained in the perfect moment... uh and if doesn't really bothers you asking you this but what make you come with such great plot? (I have this visions too (yeah, I'm weird, I'm sorry u.u) but not as good as Yixing's, mine are simple and useless because I just get a familiar feeling in the moment and that's it.)

So eh, happy new year! (Really late)
yixings24
#6
Chapter 6: Holy crap, I can feel Luhan's fear :B
1fanfic #7
Chapter 15: Wonderfully written, the mystery, the tension, it played like a movie in my head! And I loved all the science and technical stuff, yum :D I thoroughly enjoyed this story. Thank you!!! :)))
dodychan #8
Chapter 15: The tension and the romance was absolutely perfect i loved the way it's written it's just awesome
parvitasari #9
Chapter 15: Wonderful and well written story.. even i'm not science person (that's made my brain hurts hehe..) but i still keep reading it.. and the happy ending always make this story wonderful more..
Can't wait for another layhan story of yours, fihhting!!