Squeeze It

Strange Man
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Where was Yangshim? Lu Han wondered as he eased the louvered closet door closed, lifting as best as he could with fingertips in the slats, to muffle the sound as its rollers slid in their tracks. There was hardly any sound to muffle. Good home maintenance paid off, he realised with a moment of black humour. He had vacuumed and sprinkled silicone lubricant in the tracks only last week. Or was that another example of Yixing’s theory of precognition.

                There was no time to ponder metaphysics. The closet was not deep enough for him to stand with the shotgun at his shoulder. Instead, he dropped to one knee and braced the against the inside of his foot, left hand aiming the barrel up toward the door, right hand upside down on the stock, right thumb on the trigger. It was hardly the classic shooting position, but it would have to do.

                It also had the advantage of making him a smaller target if the killer did fire through the door. He hoped he would make the mistake of firing at chest level, on the mistaken assumption he was standing. If so, the bullet would pass well over his head. The birdshot, by contrast, would take a nasty chunk out of his midsection.

                But only if he was near the door. He could not depress the barrel far enough to hit him if he was more than a few feet back. If he stood across the room and peppered the door with rounds, sooner or later one would hit him. And there wouldn’t be a damn thing he could do about it.

                For that entirely sane reason, he dismissed the thought as soon as it entered his mind. There was nothing to be gained by enumerating the hopeless possibilities. He had to focus on what he could do and let the rest take care of itself.

                He heard the bedroom door open and eased the safety switch off. Come on in, you bastard. Come on in.

 

                Yixing almost tripped over the two bodies on the lawn. They must be, he realised, Kai’s friends from Chuncheon. He squatted for a moment and pressed his fingertips to their throats. To his surprise, both were alive, despite the bloody mess at the center of their faces. They hadn’t been shot, he realised. Instead, the killer had crushed their noses with punches, kicks or the end of a pistol. The taller one let out a low moan, and Yixing put a fingertip to his lips.

                Yixing lowered his face to his ear and more breathed than whispered, “I’m Zhang Yixing. Lu Han’s friend. He’s in the house, isn’t he?”

                The man nodded. “S-sorry.”

                “Don’t be,” Yixing whispered. “I need your gun.”

                He nodded again, though his hand seemed to wander vaguely over a belt holster that wasn’t there. He was too disoriented to help, Yixing realised. And as an undercover he’d have been wearing a shoulder rig.

                “I’m sorry,” he said as he reached inside his jacket, fumbling across his chest for the pistol.

                “Ssss’ okay,” he murmured. “S-snap.”

                His fingertips found the retaining snap as the man said the word, and he flicked it open and slid the pistol out. It was heavier than he expected. And he’d never fired a gun in his life.

                “Thumb s-safety,” he stammered weakly, looking at him. “Point. S-squeeze. T-two sh-shots. C-center mass.”

                It wasn’t much of a gun-safety course, but it was all he was going to get. He nodded and rose, entering the house, moving toward Lu Han’s bedroom as lightly as he could.

                It wasn’t light at all. And he knew it.

 

 

Yixing! Lu Han recognised him from his very first step. Part of his heart leaped at the realisation that he was here. And part of his heart cringed. If he could hear him, so could the killer.

                The killer who was, even at that moment, standing near the end of his bed. His empty bed. The wheels would be turning, he realised. Had he gone out for the night? Had he made some mistake, and he had slipped out of the house? Did he have the wrong address?

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dodychan #1
Chapter 15: This is the probably the forth time I'm reading this fic it's amazing and idk but I'd love to read a sequel ike what happenes in their life authornim
vickymatters #2
Good ing job. Amazing story.The dialouges, incorporating methaphysic, philosophy of mind, quantum mechanic, neurobiology and even multiverse theory was very very impressive. Really great deep characters, especially Lay; love the relationship development, the longing for something more than just physical. Good job i'm a philosophy licenciate and i talk exactly like that with everyone haha. Good job :D I was deeply satisfied intellectually, which doesn't happen often with ff.
PinkMarygoldDreams
#3
Chapter 15: Part 2 of my comment holy I ramble a lot O.O;;

The simple title of this fic really doesnt do it justice in my opinion, I feel like you could have gone with a much more syrrealistic, poetry-wannabe one instead and could have gotten away with it.
All in all, I do not regret wasting my time reading this at all and would recommend it to others.
Okay I'll shut up now.

Love u both♡♡♡
PinkMarygoldDreams
#4
Chapter 15: Holy. .
Man was this a read.
I rarely leave comments so you betta feel priviledged okay
This fic took me way longer than I initially planned to get through, I put it on the side for a while when I was almost halfway through (so long in fact that I totally forgot that I know one of the writers whoops SO THESE ARE MY COMPLETELY UNBIASED FEELINGS lol).
A part of the reason I took a break in the middle was because I wasnt really feeling the fic at the beginning. It had a kind of slow build and all this pseudo science mumbo jumbo plus coupled with 'i need to tell him the truth BUT HE CANT KNOW THE TRUTH OH NOES' didnt really grab me. I didnt really see where the fic was going, Im more of a 'just gimme the and we're good to go' kind of girl orz
BUT!
Im so ing glad I came back ;3;
After the mid-way point the fic really picked up and it was easy to immerse yourself in it and get hooked. The actual plot was pretty ing cool. Even though the psychic trope has been overused by now, this story still felt new. And I actually totally didnt see the plot twist with the clock coming at all lol
I like that in the end Luhan wasnt just a damsel in distress but actually proved himself to be badass.
For the romance part, I did feel that it came on kind of suddenly and felt out of place and unexplained at times. But that could also just be my pessimistic true-love-is-dead heart speaking ^^;;
NOW THE THO.
GURL. GUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUURL.
Which one of you wrote it? Im really curious.
The only word I can possibly describe the scene is ing ~☆MAGICAL☆~!! holy , it deserves some kind of award on its own. Hell, with how much I read daily I'll give you an award myself - ~☆°♡MOST MAGICAL SCENE. LIKE EVER♡°☆~
Gimme your adresses, I'll send you a ty drawing of a medal with a on it ;)
yixings24
#5
Chapter 15: This was so beautiful! It had suspense (my heart beat so fast when the man enter Luhan's house), romance and everything was so good written. I loved how smooth the story went like everything was explained in the perfect moment... uh and if doesn't really bothers you asking you this but what make you come with such great plot? (I have this visions too (yeah, I'm weird, I'm sorry u.u) but not as good as Yixing's, mine are simple and useless because I just get a familiar feeling in the moment and that's it.)

So eh, happy new year! (Really late)
yixings24
#6
Chapter 6: Holy crap, I can feel Luhan's fear :B
1fanfic #7
Chapter 15: Wonderfully written, the mystery, the tension, it played like a movie in my head! And I loved all the science and technical stuff, yum :D I thoroughly enjoyed this story. Thank you!!! :)))
dodychan #8
Chapter 15: The tension and the romance was absolutely perfect i loved the way it's written it's just awesome
parvitasari #9
Chapter 15: Wonderful and well written story.. even i'm not science person (that's made my brain hurts hehe..) but i still keep reading it.. and the happy ending always make this story wonderful more..
Can't wait for another layhan story of yours, fihhting!!