Stopped Clock

Strange Man
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A little after midnight, Yixing rose and pulled on his shoes and jacket. Just as he had every night before, he stuffed his room key in his pocket, turned out the light and stepped out into the brisk night air.

                His hip had eased up some after the rest, so the walk to Momo’s wasn’t the grinding impossibility it might have become. Indeed, he was surprised when he glanced at his watch. He’d made it in record time. Five minutes early. He took in the scents of the night and the way the town had quieted at this late hour. It was almost as if the world had frozen into suspended animation, to be awakened only by the warmth of the rising sun.

                “Evenin’,” Kyungsoo said, sliding Yixing a bowl of pretzels and his now customary shot of rye, neat.

                “Evenin’ and thanks,” Yixing replied. He sipped his drink, watching nearby seats, waiting to see a man leave. Then he realised that Kyungsoo had not only made him feel like a welcome regular, but seemed to have given him more than a single shot. Yixing put ₩10,000.00 on the table. “It’s perfect.”

                Kyungsoo nodded and grinned as he picked up the bills. “So’s this.”

                “Yup,” Yixing said, forcing himself to make small talk. “I left the counterfeit ones back at the hotel.”

                “Thank God,” Kyungsoo said. “They’ve been getting mixed in with the ones I print up in the back, and that’s killing my quality control standards.”

                “Life is tough.”

                “True that, as my grandma would say.”

                Yixing usually enjoyed their repartee, but tonight was not the night for it. He smiled and nodded in a way that said thanks, I’m done, and sipped his drink again. Kyungsoo returned the nod and moved down the bar. Apparently not much slipped past him. It was a knack shared by most good bartenders. Tonight, Yixing thought, looking down the bar at the empty stool two seats away. He’ll come tonight. He’ll order a drink, a shot of liquid courage, then he’ll glance up at the clock. At ten before one, he’ll leave. And Yixing would follow him and then. . . ?

                Well, that was the big question, wasn’t it?

                And one for which Yixing had no ready answer. He had to follow the guy, just to be sure it wasn’t someone who happened to wander into a café for a nightcap, having not the slightest intention of harming Lu Han. But once he’d done that, and once he was sure. . .what? It’s not as if Yixing was a trained bodyguard or even a former soldier. Even if he had been, he was cripple. And unarmed. And the other guy would be a trained killer, a pro, doubtless carrying a weapon he knew how to use.

                It was, Yixing thought, a recipe for disaster. But it was the only recipe he had. And as he’d learned back in college, sometimes you just take a recipe and riff until something good comes out. E pluribus wing it.

                It struck him, as he glanced at the empty stool again, that there was a lot of truth to Einstein’s quip when asked to explain time being relative: “A two-second kiss is much shorter than two seconds with your hand on a hot stove.” The hours he’d spent with Lu  Han today had flown by. The few minutes he’d spent here at Momo’s tonight were crawling.

                He glanced up at the clock over the bar: 12:50 a.m. Anytime now. The scientist in him could almost track the up-tick in adrenaline. His fingers did not quite quiver, but he realised his palm felt sick against the glass. He knew it was the opening pores, releasing sweat, part of the fight-or-flight response, a cascading of set physiological adjustments crafted by millennia of evolution to optimise physical performance in dire danger. It had happened on the plane in those awful moments after he realised he and his family, and the rest of the passengers, were locked in the death spiral of his vision. Then he had been unable to do anything. But tonight, once he saw the man, he could at least try.

The man should be here now. He should already have walked up and sat down, ordered his drink. It had to be tonight. Yixing could feel it. But where was he? Yixing looked at the empty stool again, and again at the clock over the bar: 12:50 a.m.

                The clock’s second hand wasn’t moving.

               “Oh, God,” Kyungsoo said, apparently having seen Yixing stiffen as he looked from his watch to the clock. “Oh, God. The clock stopped this afternoon. He left before you got here.”

                “Who left?” Yixing asked, looking at his watch – 12:52 a.m.

        

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dodychan #1
Chapter 15: This is the probably the forth time I'm reading this fic it's amazing and idk but I'd love to read a sequel ike what happenes in their life authornim
vickymatters #2
Good ing job. Amazing story.The dialouges, incorporating methaphysic, philosophy of mind, quantum mechanic, neurobiology and even multiverse theory was very very impressive. Really great deep characters, especially Lay; love the relationship development, the longing for something more than just physical. Good job i'm a philosophy licenciate and i talk exactly like that with everyone haha. Good job :D I was deeply satisfied intellectually, which doesn't happen often with ff.
PinkMarygoldDreams
#3
Chapter 15: Part 2 of my comment holy I ramble a lot O.O;;

The simple title of this fic really doesnt do it justice in my opinion, I feel like you could have gone with a much more syrrealistic, poetry-wannabe one instead and could have gotten away with it.
All in all, I do not regret wasting my time reading this at all and would recommend it to others.
Okay I'll shut up now.

Love u both♡♡♡
PinkMarygoldDreams
#4
Chapter 15: Holy. .
Man was this a read.
I rarely leave comments so you betta feel priviledged okay
This fic took me way longer than I initially planned to get through, I put it on the side for a while when I was almost halfway through (so long in fact that I totally forgot that I know one of the writers whoops SO THESE ARE MY COMPLETELY UNBIASED FEELINGS lol).
A part of the reason I took a break in the middle was because I wasnt really feeling the fic at the beginning. It had a kind of slow build and all this pseudo science mumbo jumbo plus coupled with 'i need to tell him the truth BUT HE CANT KNOW THE TRUTH OH NOES' didnt really grab me. I didnt really see where the fic was going, Im more of a 'just gimme the and we're good to go' kind of girl orz
BUT!
Im so ing glad I came back ;3;
After the mid-way point the fic really picked up and it was easy to immerse yourself in it and get hooked. The actual plot was pretty ing cool. Even though the psychic trope has been overused by now, this story still felt new. And I actually totally didnt see the plot twist with the clock coming at all lol
I like that in the end Luhan wasnt just a damsel in distress but actually proved himself to be badass.
For the romance part, I did feel that it came on kind of suddenly and felt out of place and unexplained at times. But that could also just be my pessimistic true-love-is-dead heart speaking ^^;;
NOW THE THO.
GURL. GUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUURL.
Which one of you wrote it? Im really curious.
The only word I can possibly describe the scene is ing ~☆MAGICAL☆~!! holy , it deserves some kind of award on its own. Hell, with how much I read daily I'll give you an award myself - ~☆°♡MOST MAGICAL SCENE. LIKE EVER♡°☆~
Gimme your adresses, I'll send you a ty drawing of a medal with a on it ;)
yixings24
#5
Chapter 15: This was so beautiful! It had suspense (my heart beat so fast when the man enter Luhan's house), romance and everything was so good written. I loved how smooth the story went like everything was explained in the perfect moment... uh and if doesn't really bothers you asking you this but what make you come with such great plot? (I have this visions too (yeah, I'm weird, I'm sorry u.u) but not as good as Yixing's, mine are simple and useless because I just get a familiar feeling in the moment and that's it.)

So eh, happy new year! (Really late)
yixings24
#6
Chapter 6: Holy crap, I can feel Luhan's fear :B
1fanfic #7
Chapter 15: Wonderfully written, the mystery, the tension, it played like a movie in my head! And I loved all the science and technical stuff, yum :D I thoroughly enjoyed this story. Thank you!!! :)))
dodychan #8
Chapter 15: The tension and the romance was absolutely perfect i loved the way it's written it's just awesome
parvitasari #9
Chapter 15: Wonderful and well written story.. even i'm not science person (that's made my brain hurts hehe..) but i still keep reading it.. and the happy ending always make this story wonderful more..
Can't wait for another layhan story of yours, fihhting!!