my dear ji yeon!

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i'm just a blind girl but you're cheerful, funny and cute boy

. I don't have family, but you have one: mom, dad and your older brother.

I'm poor, you're rich. See, we're different. I love you but we have to do it. Myung soo, saranghae~~

Foreword

hey readers, this is my first fanfic so it might be boring or lame. And sorry for the wrong gramma, english is my second language^.^ If you like it, please comment <3

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Lucybabie #1
Chapter 7: Your story is super cute <3 i luv it <3~~~~~
dream_keeper88 #2
Chapter 7: Hi. It's Monday, time for project spread the love!

Tbqh, the lack of proper punctuation marks (ex. "quotation marks" to mark dialogues) and paragraphs make it really difficult for me to read your story. But at least you tried ^-^ and you finished it. Don't worry, this can be improved.

My advice is for you to type or transfer all the chappies in MS Word. Turn on the spell and grammar check. Then get a book and look at the format. How to write dialogues, use of spacing, paragraphing...etc. The plot may be a bit cliche but with proper execution and flow, your story would be much better.

Good day!
poweroftwo #3
keep writing!! ill love it
yesungjiyeon #4
Chapter 7: nice story :)
MrGoldfishEyes #5
UPDATE!!
xuxu_kut3_99 #6
Please update soon<br />
myungyeon #7
update soon :)
myungji_luv #8
i'll edit and put pjx later^.^<br />
@usmytaz: thks for commenting.
usmyiaz #9
wahhh!! update soon,... >_<
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