07. The end

my dear ji yeon!
Ji Yeon just stood there, she didn't know what to do then. She stuttered " How...how much do you know?". " I know all Ji Yeon ah, about your eyes, i will make your eyes shine again, just beileive me "-he smiled and took her hand. Her eyes was now watery, he knews all but he still loves her? Her heart was beating faster than before when Myungsoo's face was closer and closer, untill their lips touch. It was soft and sweet, her first kiss, so gentle. " I love you" " Me too"<3<3<3<3<3<3<3 Five months later, Myungsoo was in the waiting room at the hospital. He has been waited for 1 hours, the door opened, he ran into the doctor to ask about Ji Yeon's eyes. He smiled brightly and said her eyes were better then. Myungsoo came, he saw jiyeon lying on the bed, she smiled and kissed his lips, quick but it could make his heart beat faster. " Thank you Myungsoo ah, because of you, now i can see everything clear, saranghae<3" " Nadoo"~~~~The end. It's end. Please check out my 2 fics : it's better than this ones because my sister helps me with it too :). " my stubborn slave" and " you're my ert boyfriend"
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Lucybabie
#1
Chapter 7: Your story is super cute <3 i luv it <3~~~~~
dream_keeper88
#2
Chapter 7: Hi. It's Monday, time for project spread the love!

Tbqh, the lack of proper punctuation marks (ex. "quotation marks" to mark dialogues) and paragraphs make it really difficult for me to read your story. But at least you tried ^-^ and you finished it. Don't worry, this can be improved.

My advice is for you to type or transfer all the chappies in MS Word. Turn on the spell and grammar check. Then get a book and look at the format. How to write dialogues, use of spacing, paragraphing...etc. The plot may be a bit cliche but with proper execution and flow, your story would be much better.

Good day!
poweroftwo #3
keep writing!! ill love it
yesungjiyeon #4
Chapter 7: nice story :)
MrGoldfishEyes
#5
UPDATE!!
xuxu_kut3_99 #6
Please update soon<br />
myungyeon #7
update soon :)
myungji_luv #8
i'll edit and put pjx later^.^<br />
@usmytaz: thks for commenting.
usmyiaz #9
wahhh!! update soon,... >_<