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my dear ji yeon!
The next day: Ji Yeon didn't want to go to school, she scared, she doesn't want to see Myungsoo's face, his warm body, his smile, his laugh, everything was beautiful before, she wishes Myungsoo wasn't love her anymore but...it seems difficult. She sighed, and then she stood up, went to the bathroom, changed the uniform clothes, ate some eggs then finally rode an old bike to school. Unfortunately, the person she didn't want to see the most, now standing in front of her house, his hand was full of flowers and colorful baloons. " Please don't make my heart more painful Myungsoo"- Ji Yeon thought. Her eyes were watery, saw him makes her feel guilty. He ran to Jiyeon make her surprised. " What...what do you want"- She asked coldly. " Ji Yeon, I know the truth, IU told me everything, just give me 2 minutes, no, 1 minutes and then I will leave. I love you ji yeon ah, i don't care if you love me or not, i don't care if you are poor, you don't have parents, i still love you even if you are a or not, my heart for you is forever, it always belongs to you, no matter what. I love you, I love you and always love you forever. From richer and poorer till death do us part, in sickness and health, you will always in my heart, to the day when we old and grey ( A/N: LOL, do anyone know this song?), you are my only love, please ji yeon ah, i love you and i can say that words million times. " Jiyeon stunned, speechless, what would she do now?<3<3<3 ok, it is going tao end, im focus in "you're my ert bf", it's way more more interesting than thjs, this fic is failed to me, haizz, 3 fics and this is the worse fic, sorry if it disappointed you guys >_
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Lucybabie
#1
Chapter 7: Your story is super cute <3 i luv it <3~~~~~
dream_keeper88
#2
Chapter 7: Hi. It's Monday, time for project spread the love!

Tbqh, the lack of proper punctuation marks (ex. "quotation marks" to mark dialogues) and paragraphs make it really difficult for me to read your story. But at least you tried ^-^ and you finished it. Don't worry, this can be improved.

My advice is for you to type or transfer all the chappies in MS Word. Turn on the spell and grammar check. Then get a book and look at the format. How to write dialogues, use of spacing, paragraphing...etc. The plot may be a bit cliche but with proper execution and flow, your story would be much better.

Good day!
poweroftwo #3
keep writing!! ill love it
yesungjiyeon #4
Chapter 7: nice story :)
MrGoldfishEyes
#5
UPDATE!!
xuxu_kut3_99 #6
Please update soon<br />
myungyeon #7
update soon :)
myungji_luv #8
i'll edit and put pjx later^.^<br />
@usmytaz: thks for commenting.
usmyiaz #9
wahhh!! update soon,... >_<