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my dear ji yeon!

Myungsoo's POV:

-She said she didn't love me anymore, she said she had new boyfriend, i don't believe it, i don't, she loves me so much, why, why, did i do something wrong?

What have i done?

What am i going to do now?

 Ji Yeonie, please tell me, what am i going to do, my heart, it's broken because of you, Ji Yeon, I love you.

Ji Yeon's POV:

- Myungsoo, it's 5 days already, you haven't called me, it's good, but...why, my heart is painful.

I'll love you forever. And, please don't forgive me for hurting you.

____<3<3<3<3____

It't bedtime...so, goodnight to all my readers, thjs fic is going to end soon, about 2 more chapters, so sad it's short, boring and lame :D

, but i have new fanfic, it's better than this one: My stubborn slave-JiSeob couple.

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Lucybabie #1
Chapter 7: Your story is super cute <3 i luv it <3~~~~~
dream_keeper88 #2
Chapter 7: Hi. It's Monday, time for project spread the love!

Tbqh, the lack of proper punctuation marks (ex. "quotation marks" to mark dialogues) and paragraphs make it really difficult for me to read your story. But at least you tried ^-^ and you finished it. Don't worry, this can be improved.

My advice is for you to type or transfer all the chappies in MS Word. Turn on the spell and grammar check. Then get a book and look at the format. How to write dialogues, use of spacing, paragraphing...etc. The plot may be a bit cliche but with proper execution and flow, your story would be much better.

Good day!
poweroftwo #3
keep writing!! ill love it
yesungjiyeon #4
Chapter 7: nice story :)
MrGoldfishEyes #5
UPDATE!!
xuxu_kut3_99 #6
Please update soon<br />
myungyeon #7
update soon :)
myungji_luv #8
i'll edit and put pjx later^.^<br />
@usmytaz: thks for commenting.
usmyiaz #9
wahhh!! update soon,... >_<
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