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my dear ji yeon!

-ji yeon ah_ someone called her

. Ji yeon turned back, she felt something warm touch her cheek. She knew, it was him, the one who makes her smile, happy. She tried to hold her tears and left before Myung soo could stop her.

-ji yeon ah, can't you hear me?Myung soo grabbed Ji yeon's hand.

-i'm...fine, i'm just tired, please leave me alone. Ji yeon went away. Actually, ji yeon wasn't blind, her eyes are just weaker than normal people, she can see but not clearly because when she was young, a piece of glasses fell into her eyes. Ji yeon went home, she opened her diary:

Dear diary, Today myungie called me but i ignored him. I can tell he was very sad. His voice was...i don't know...disappointed? What can i do? I love him but... Tok... Tok... Ji yeon was crying. She didn't khow what to do. Leave him or stay with him. She's just a blind girl who doesn't have anything , and him: funny cute, dream boy of all girl, who loves her with all his heart although she was blind or not, rich or poor. What should i do? She kept asking. After thinking for awhile, she had a final decision...leave or not... It's... -------~~~~~----

How is the first chapter, it might be boring, and so sorry for the wrong pramma, i'll try to update everyday^.^ Please comment, love<3

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Lucybabie
#1
Chapter 7: Your story is super cute <3 i luv it <3~~~~~
dream_keeper88
#2
Chapter 7: Hi. It's Monday, time for project spread the love!

Tbqh, the lack of proper punctuation marks (ex. "quotation marks" to mark dialogues) and paragraphs make it really difficult for me to read your story. But at least you tried ^-^ and you finished it. Don't worry, this can be improved.

My advice is for you to type or transfer all the chappies in MS Word. Turn on the spell and grammar check. Then get a book and look at the format. How to write dialogues, use of spacing, paragraphing...etc. The plot may be a bit cliche but with proper execution and flow, your story would be much better.

Good day!
poweroftwo #3
keep writing!! ill love it
yesungjiyeon #4
Chapter 7: nice story :)
MrGoldfishEyes
#5
UPDATE!!
xuxu_kut3_99 #6
Please update soon<br />
myungyeon #7
update soon :)
myungji_luv #8
i'll edit and put pjx later^.^<br />
@usmytaz: thks for commenting.
usmyiaz #9
wahhh!! update soon,... >_<