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my dear ji yeon!

Day xxx, month yyy

Dear diary, i decide to leave him, i can't lie to him anymore, if he know what happened to my eyes, what will he thjnk? I will do it, support me diary. - I'll always remember the day he confessed to me, it was the best day of my life_ ji yeon thinks.

_flash back_

-ji...ji...yeon ah.

-what's wrong, myung soo?

-can you meet me in the school garden after school? .....

RINGGG

ji yeon went to the school garden, she couldn't find myung soo. Suddendly, she felt somebody hugged her from behind. It was him, hjs smell, hjs breath, she would never forget that moment, never.

- JI YEON AH, I LOVE YOU, WILL YOU BE MY GIRLFRIEND?

her eyes were widen O.O, just like that. She stunned, dumbfounded, she couldn't believe someone would love her. Especially, myung soo-the dream boy of all girls. She cried and hugged myung soo.

-Thank you, for loving me <3 _end flash back_ The second chapter is up. So, what do you thjnk? Please comment, btw, sorry for the short chap, i'll try to make it longer^o^.

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Lucybabie #1
Chapter 7: Your story is super cute <3 i luv it <3~~~~~
dream_keeper88 #2
Chapter 7: Hi. It's Monday, time for project spread the love!

Tbqh, the lack of proper punctuation marks (ex. "quotation marks" to mark dialogues) and paragraphs make it really difficult for me to read your story. But at least you tried ^-^ and you finished it. Don't worry, this can be improved.

My advice is for you to type or transfer all the chappies in MS Word. Turn on the spell and grammar check. Then get a book and look at the format. How to write dialogues, use of spacing, paragraphing...etc. The plot may be a bit cliche but with proper execution and flow, your story would be much better.

Good day!
poweroftwo #3
keep writing!! ill love it
yesungjiyeon #4
Chapter 7: nice story :)
MrGoldfishEyes #5
UPDATE!!
xuxu_kut3_99 #6
Please update soon<br />
myungyeon #7
update soon :)
myungji_luv #8
i'll edit and put pjx later^.^<br />
@usmytaz: thks for commenting.
usmyiaz #9
wahhh!! update soon,... >_<
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