Chapter 10: Aigooooo..is there really exsist?a cute gangster like jongsuk hehehehe..eh he isnt a gangster hehehehe..
this is cute story i like their friendship..
gomawo for the story
Chapter 3: This is a great story (so far) but if u don't mind can I suguest that you edit it a little such that when a person is talking u talk abt that person in the sentence? So it'll be less confusing! E.g ' "Here. I went and got this." Woobin went and ...' even though jongsuk is talking it was confusing to me because I thought woobin was talking yknow? Esp when there are a lot of guys involved all the 'he's can get confusing! Good job though and fighting!! :)
Chapter 1: Nooooooo the bad guys....It's hard to imagine Leo doing all the talking lol. But it's not impossible for him so meh. I like the humor in Jongsuk.
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