Sneak Peak in the Dorm Life; Music

A Kpop Hogwarts

okay hello my little adorable lovable readers...as you can see I haven't updated in the LONGEST time but that's cause school started and I can't find my third harry potter book so please be patient....anyways...kinda like the extra story i did in the beginning I'll kinda do a MBLAQ side story...there are five parts...five members of mblaq..so here's how it goes...

 

The whole side story thing is called ''Sneak Peak in the Dorm Life'' and there are five parts

-Music which focuses on G.O and Mir a bit

-Boys , Live , Absolute , Quality are the other side-stories which will involve the members.yup.okay well gotta go ..peace love me...love yáll...please comment

xoxoxo

OH MIR! WHAT A DUMB CUTIE!!!(SQUEAL)

NO offense to Mir-lovers...it's just he's so innocent in real life and yeah , but in music videos he's like WHOA..WHAT HAPPENED TO YOU?!...kekkeke

 

Too much makeup here....reminds me slightly of 2PM'S I'll be back......khun you're still a cutie...Let's begin

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'' AHH! SO COOL!!!!!!!!!''

Mir ran down the street squealing in delight. Rain rolled his eyes and grabbed the hood of  Mir's hoodie.

''Don't get lost.'' he said firmly.

' 'YAH LOOK! '' Seungho shouted. He stuck his face against a window.

''WOWWWW...'' Lee Joon and G.O ran towards Seungho. The three stood gwaking at a gorgeous golden  ash broomstick.             Beside them a group of boys murmured , ''That be the Firebolt that is......Fastest broom in the world...heard the irish ordered twelve..''

''OMO..OWWWWWW!''

Everyone turned around to find Mir with his hand stuck in a Venemous Tentacula.

'' help...'' he choked.

'' Diffindo! '' Rain pointed his wand at the plant and soon Mir was free.

''Pabo don't go sticking your hand in weird plants'' Lee Joon snickered smacking the mackdongie's head.

 

 

I'm such a fan of Joonie..what a hottest...mblaq and 2pm are so cute but SHINee are still my boys

 

G.O turned and stopped to read a sign that said '' KNOCKTURN ALLEY '' He peered around the sign to find a dimly lit , dodgy looking place. A smile crept up his lips. Making sure Rain was still scolding Mir , and the others were preoccupied , G.O set foot into the darkness.

'' Oi THERE!'' A large hand grabbed his shoulder pulling him back.

 '' What you be doing lad?!'' G.O turned around to find a large giant of a man glaring at him. He visibly trembled in his shoes.

''N-N-nn-nothing'' he stuttered looking up.

'' OMO....PRESIDENT RAIN!!!!!...LOOK!..A GIANT MAN!'' Mir yelled pointing at them.

Rain sighed and steered the four boys towards G.O.

'' Hello Hagrid...I suppose you're here on Hogwarts buisness?'' he sighed.

The giant man called Hagrid nodded , patting the large pocket of his coat.

''It's going to be a tough year. Suppose Dumbledore hasn't told you yet.''

Rain shook his head and waved the words away , ''I'll find out later. Got enough on my hands with these boys.''

Mir grabbed his hyungs and smiled cheekily.

'' WE'RE RAIN'S NEW BOY-GROUP MBLAQ!''

Please note that Mir kinda has a little lack of clothing on his chest and I would NEVER EVER let him go to Diagon Alley dressed like that. Or to Hogwarts for that matter. Can't have the girls all over him...grrrrrr..kekeke just kidding....or not

Hagrid nodded vaguely. '' Best be going now.'' he said looking at a peculiar looking watch.

He gave G.O a good slap on the back almost sending him into a cart of owl pellets.

'' YOU BOY KEEP OUT OF KNOCKTURN ALLEY!'' He thundered.

All five boys cowered away.

Rain turned towards G.O.

'' KNOCKTURN WHAT!''

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lanternofhair #1
shineeeeee
snsd too
FairyNHK #2
Hahaha...Daebak!!
prom15e_to13lieve
#3
@eunhaelove I read the first chapter, and I find it understandable, the font pleasant enough. I don't re-read my work, I just type and get over and done with the chapter. I may not be perfect myself, but I have standards when criticising people's work. I have seen even worse stories, with colors that are hurting to the eye, full of grammatical error and what not. <br />
Your sentence structure ain't that good either. Who cares if anyone knew the HP world, I wouldn't mind another view of Hogwarts. If you want a kpop-version of the REAL Harry Potter, you might as well just use tape and tape away the character names and substitute them for kpop names. That way, you won't get sued for plagiarism.
quexiyun #4
@EunhaeLove....Chill... Don't just cut someone down like that. Who said they had to mix perfectly? x_____x" i think it's a pretty good story. Don't be such a grammar stickler, or whatever they're called these days.
EunhaeLove #5
one**
EunhaeLove #6
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Prefects are only allowed in the Prefect's restrooms. I'm sure Dumbledore wouldn't appoint a couple of hooligans to be Prefects unless they charmed the pants off a student and had the student tell them the password to the bathrooms. Even so, you decided to use pictures instead of describing the whole scenery. Wizards wouldn't know what a water-gun if they aren't Muggle-born or if they weren't taking Muggle studies. <br />
I seriously think you need to reread your chapters. Hagrid said in the first book, that Muggles --yes, Kpop idols are Muggles-- are not allowed to know about magic or wizardry because they might try to solve all of their problems using magic. <br />
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I would go through every single chapter and say something something about it because each chapter is like I'm scratching my eyes with nails. You know nothing about the Harry Potter World. I bet you don't even edit or reread your work to see if any of the sh*t your wrote made any sense. I'm surprised you have comments or subscribers at all, but then again, you are basically reminding your readers to subscribe and comment after every chapter. <br />
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So you get my message, yeah? Later~
EunhaeLove #7
I can't believe this. It's not a good thing either. You're basically ruining the Harry Potter Series with your brightly colored font, poor grammar, and -ish storyline. There's so many things missing from this story, things doesn't make sense, and well, it's not "cool" , "awesome" or worthy of an "update soon" in my eyes. Snape is a teacher. He wouldn't be running around after some kids limping when he could just cast a spell on his leg, and mutter a quick counter spell for his hair. True, no? Are you on of those so-called "die-hard" Harry Potter fans that never even touched the books? It seems so because the way everything is portrayed is absolutely, positively unbelievable. <br />
Students at Hogwarts are deducted points for that kind of behavior. They wouldn't do something like that to a teacher, or professor, because it's also, disrespectful. Am I wrong? I have never read a single Harry Potter book that had a student hexing a teacher simply for a prank. For example, take Harry and Snape. Harry never, in his years at Hogwarts, tried to curse or hex Snape. Yes, I know, Hermione did set Snape's robes on fire in the first book, but it wasn't for a prank. <br />
Sadly, you're even misspelling words and forgetting your punctuation, too. <br />
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-c-
XxilovkpopxX
#8
please update soon!!
XxilovkpopxX
#9
please update soon!!! i hope you find the book soon!!!!