Aboard The Hogwarts Express

omgeeeeee..~gee gee gee gee baby baby~ whoops..sorry..got carried away..sigh...Any who...wrote this chapter before re-reading the book.....Just realized that they both are called Aboard the Hogwarts Express.creeppy.....made up a name for this chapter before looking at the book.....well after some research I came up with this..by the way is anyone here thinking

[ KEY , GET YOUR HANDS OFF TAEMIN'S !!!!!!] I am....kekeke...enjoy...comment...subscribe!!!!

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Ahhh....The first of September....Tamaki Dae strolled through the wall onto platform 9 and 3/4. It was more crowded than ususal. Anxiously she scanned the platform and brightenned when she saw her good friends Hermoine , and Ron. ''Hermoine!Ron! It's so good to see you!'' she yelled hugging the two. ''Where's Harry?'' Hermoine nodded off at a corner where Mr.Weasley and Harry seemed to be in deep discution.

Suddenly Tamaki was engulfed by a hug and empowering poure flower perfum. ''TAMAKI DEAR! You haven't changed a bit!'' Mrs.Weasley cried squashing poor Tamaki in her arms. ''Mum...'' Ron murmured , turning a deep shade of red. To Ron and Tamaki's relief Mrs.Weasley released Tama from her death grip. Mrs.Weasley patted her head affectionatley. ''Best be going dear , train leaves any moment.''

Tamki smiled and heaved her trunk onto the train. Sitting in the last isolated compartement she glanced out the window. Hermoine was yelling urgently into a phone. Tamaki sighed and checked her watch. The numbers on the clock swithched to 10:58. Somebody is missing. she thought with a frown.

Where are my SHINee Oppas?

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''OH MY ...... AISH!!!'' Key yelled , when he saw the clock. He rolled on Onew's bed , over Onew and then over Minho. ''GET UP!'' he screamed. Onew rolled over. ''Be a little more quiet ''he mumbled. Key grabbed Minho's long hair. ''We're gonna be LATE!''. he cried tugging the long brown strands. Minho slapped him.

Note:super duper sorry..wasn't thinking straight..should've been 10:11 or somethin like that cause train leaves at 11am.

Rubbing his cheek Key went to Jonghyun's bed. As usual it was empty. ''JONGHYUN!!!'' Key yelled. The smell of chicken wafted in the air. Onew bolted up. ''CHICKEN!'' he said heading to the kitchen. Jonghyun walked into the room smiling smudgly. Key stabbed a finger in his chest. ''WHY ON EARTH DIDN'T YOU WAKE ME!'' Key bellowed. Jonghyun whacked Key with his spatula. ''I was making chicken.''Jonghyun huffed glaring at Key.Then he threw a jogging suit at Minho. ''LETS GO DREAM TEAM!'' Jonghyun yelled blowing a whistle. Minho grabbed the clothes and headed outside. '' We've got 15 minutes to get to Kings Cross!'' Key cried.''And I still haven't packed Taminnie's trunk yet!''

Jonghyun took out his wand. ''Accio'' he said. Soon five trunks flew out the door into the hall. ''All done.'' Jonghyun replied. Onew poked his head in the doorway. ''Speaking of Taemin , how do we wake him.'' Key stared epectantly at Jonghyun.

Jonghyun slapped his head , ''I FORGOT TO BUY BANNANA MILK!'' he yelled.

Onew turned away , ''You better wake him. Train leaves in ten minutes.''

'' TAEMIN!'' Jonghyun and Key yelled.

In his desperation Key jumped onto Taemin's back. ''Wake up!!!!'' he yelled. Minho walked in awake from his morning jog. For the second time that day he slapped Key. ''GET YOUR HANDS OFF TAEMIN'S .'' he growled.

Onew stuck his head in the doorway. ''Hermoine's calling.'' he said placing the phone on Taemin's ear. ''WAKE UP TAEMIN!'' THE TRAIN'S GONNA LEAVE ANY MINUTE!''

Taemin robotically ran out the door. Key dragged him back into the room. ''We can't run there Taeminnie pabo.'' Key sighed shoving the maknae into the fireplace. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ In a flash of green fire the five SHINee boys disappeared. ''Wait!'' Onew stumbled out of the pit and grabbed the bucket of chicken. ''Better'' he sighed taking a bite. ''Diagon Alley!......No wait!...'' Onew disappeared, heading to the wrong place.

''TAEA

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lanternofhair #1 Dec 15, 2012 20:28:41

shineeeeee
snsd too

FairyNHK #2 Mar 4, 2012 08:10:08

Hahaha...Daebak!!

prom15e_to13lieve #3 Nov 17, 2011 08:08:56

@eunhaelove I read the first chapter, and I find it understandable, the font pleasant enough. I don't re-read my work, I just type and get over and done with the chapter. I may not be perfect myself, but I have standards when criticising people's work. I have seen even worse stories, with colors that are hurting to the eye, full of grammatical error and what not. 
Your sentence structure ain't that good either. Who cares if anyone knew the HP world, I wouldn't mind another view of Hogwarts. If you want a kpop-version of the REAL Harry Potter, you might as well just use tape and tape away the character names and substitute them for kpop names. That way, you won't get sued for plagiarism.

quexiyun #4 Jul 7, 2011 21:48:08

@EunhaeLove....Chill... Don't just cut someone down like that. Who said they had to mix perfectly? x_____x" i think it's a pretty good story. Don't be such a grammar stickler, or whatever they're called these days.

EunhaeLove #5 Jul 6, 2011 20:28:21

one**

EunhaeLove #6 Jul 6, 2011 16:39:53

-c- 
 
Prefects are only allowed in the Prefect's restrooms. I'm sure Dumbledore wouldn't appoint a couple of hooligans to be Prefects unless they charmed the pants off a student and had the student tell them the password to the bathrooms. Even so, you decided to use pictures instead of describing the whole scenery. Wizards wouldn't know what a water-gun if they aren't Muggle-born or if they weren't taking Muggle studies. 
I seriously think you need to reread your chapters. Hagrid said in the first book, that Muggles --yes, Kpop idols are Muggles-- are not allowed to know about magic or wizardry because they might try to solve all of their problems using magic. 
 
I would go through every single chapter and say something something about it because each chapter is like I'm scratching my eyes with nails. You know nothing about the Harry Potter World. I bet you don't even edit or reread your work to see if any of the sh*t your wrote made any sense. I'm surprised you have comments or subscribers at all, but then again, you are basically reminding your readers to subscribe and comment after every chapter. 
 
So you get my message, yeah? Later~

EunhaeLove #7 Jul 6, 2011 16:38:52

I can't believe this. It's not a good thing either. You're basically ruining the Harry Potter Series with your brightly colored font, poor grammar, and -ish storyline. There's so many things missing from this story, things doesn't make sense, and well, it's not "cool" , "awesome" or worthy of an "update soon" in my eyes. Snape is a teacher. He wouldn't be running around after some kids limping when he could just cast a spell on his leg, and mutter a quick counter spell for his hair. True, no? Are you on of those so-called "die-hard" Harry Potter fans that never even touched the books? It seems so because the way everything is portrayed is absolutely, positively unbelievable. 
Students at Hogwarts are deducted points for that kind of behavior. They wouldn't do something like that to a teacher, or professor, because it's also, disrespectful. Am I wrong? I have never read a single Harry Potter book that had a student hexing a teacher simply for a prank. For example, take Harry and Snape. Harry never, in his years at Hogwarts, tried to curse or hex Snape. Yes, I know, Hermione did set Snape's robes on fire in the first book, but it wasn't for a prank. 
Sadly, you're even misspelling words and forgetting your punctuation, too. 
 
-c-

XxilovkpopxX #8 Dec 31, 2010 13:45:29

please update soon!!

XxilovkpopxX #9 Dec 8, 2010 17:00:26

please update soon!!! i hope you find the book soon!!!!