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Hahaha...Daebak!!

@eunhaelove I read the first chapter, and I find it understandable, the font pleasant enough. I don't re-read my work, I just type and get over and done with the chapter. I may not be perfect myself, but I have standards when criticising people's work. I have seen even worse stories, with colors that are hurting to the eye, full of grammatical error and what not. <br />
Your sentence structure ain't that good either. Who cares if anyone knew the HP world, I wouldn't mind another view of Hogwarts. If you want a kpop-version of the REAL Harry Potter, you might as well just use tape and tape away the character names and substitute them for kpop names. That way, you won't get sued for plagiarism.

@EunhaeLove....Chill... Don't just cut someone down like that. Who said they had to mix perfectly? x_____x" i think it's a pretty good story. Don't be such a grammar stickler, or whatever they're called these days.

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Prefects are only allowed in the Prefect's restrooms. I'm sure Dumbledore wouldn't appoint a couple of hooligans to be Prefects unless they charmed the pants off a student and had the student tell them the password to the bathrooms. Even so, you decided to use pictures instead of describing the whole scenery. Wizards wouldn't know what a water-gun if they aren't Muggle-born or if they weren't taking Muggle studies. <br />
I seriously think you need to reread your chapters. Hagrid said in the first book, that Muggles --yes, Kpop idols are Muggles-- are not allowed to know about magic or wizardry because they might try to solve all of their problems using magic. <br />
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I would go through every single chapter and say something something about it because each chapter is like I'm scratching my eyes with nails. You know nothing about the Harry Potter World. I bet you don't even edit or reread your work to see if any of the sh*t your wrote made any sense. I'm surprised you have comments or subscribers at all, but then again, you are basically reminding your readers to subscribe and comment after every chapter. <br />
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So you get my message, yeah? Later~

I can't believe this. It's not a good thing either. You're basically ruining the Harry Potter Series with your brightly colored font, poor grammar, and -ish storyline. There's so many things missing from this story, things doesn't make sense, and well, it's not "cool" , "awesome" or worthy of an "update soon" in my eyes. Snape is a teacher. He wouldn't be running around after some kids limping when he could just cast a spell on his leg, and mutter a quick counter spell for his hair. True, no? Are you on of those so-called "die-hard" Harry Potter fans that never even touched the books? It seems so because the way everything is portrayed is absolutely, positively unbelievable. <br />
Students at Hogwarts are deducted points for that kind of behavior. They wouldn't do something like that to a teacher, or professor, because it's also, disrespectful. Am I wrong? I have never read a single Harry Potter book that had a student hexing a teacher simply for a prank. For example, take Harry and Snape. Harry never, in his years at Hogwarts, tried to curse or hex Snape. Yes, I know, Hermione did set Snape's robes on fire in the first book, but it wasn't for a prank. <br />
Sadly, you're even misspelling words and forgetting your punctuation, too. <br />
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please update soon!!

please update soon!!! i hope you find the book soon!!!!