GOODBYE and I LIED

Love Planetarium (One Shot Story)

"Let's break up." Minho said.

Your eyes widened in shock. You didn't expect that he will say this.

"W-what are you saying oppa? Is.. is this a kind of joke again?" you jokingly said.

Minho lowered his head."Mianhe ~~~-ah. If we're going to be apart, then i think it's pointless to continue this."

 

You feel your heart turned into pieces. You bit your lips and lowered your eyes. A tears starts to form in your eyes and you closed your eyes.

 

"*This love is over...*" you said in your thought. You slowly looked at him "Is that so...well, I see.. Annyeong.." you fake a smile at him.

"I'm.. really.. sorry..~~~-ah.." he looked away then scratched the back of his head.

"A-anio.. It's ok oppa." you waved both of your hands.

"..It can't be helped! Thank you for the time until now oppa. It was fun! Take care of yourself then.." you bowed at him then starts to run.

 

You run and run until you slowly stopped in a corner where no students are walking by. You touched the part where your heart is located, squeezed it then begin to cry. Then you slapped yourself still crying.

 

"I don't ---...*Why did i lie? We are breaking up, but I want him to say that he like me...." your tears keep on falling.

 

Then a door behind you opened then someone grabbed you inside then closed the door.

 

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END OF THE CHAPTER 01!!! Hope you liked it. Sorry if there's so many wrong grammar... haha... I'll just edit it anyway..

I NEED COMMENTS!! PLEAAASSSEEE!!!

GOMAWO~ Mianhe if it's too short... hahaha... 

np: With All My Heart - TVXQ (TVXQ'S BEST SELECTION 2010)

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Dailycommenter 98 streak #1
I am trying to find an old story on here but I cannot remember the title so I am going through all the story links I found this sounds interesting and has a nice description
foamtwt #2
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magnaeline
#3
ooooo.......Sounds good.. cannot wait to see next chapter
XJbear
#4
ooommoo i love it!Updateee!
ms_yeolliepop
#5
hello~! new reader here~!!!<br />
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i LOVE YOUR STORY!!!!!! <br />
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this story is somehow familiar to me.... i think i just read this story in boxmanga i think...<br />
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oh! i swear !!!! this sory is sooooo familiar!!!<br />
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anyway.... as i just said.... I TOTALLY LOVE IT!!!!!<br />
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hope you update soon~!!! :)))
VivanCassiopeia
#6
Jaejoong has two personalities. I'm addicted Teentop - Supa Luv.
BambiJiBin
#7
Oh my god Jaejooooooooong~ update soon
KSTARlovesKJIYONG #8
the coldness and the warmness of jaejoong is interesting! update soon. it's a pity that your first two chapters are short but i really really really really like it!!!!! update soon. ;))
BambiJiBin
#9
I kinda got confused with the second chapter but i reread it anyway lol update soon :D