Chapter Three

War of Hormones
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A/N: Here's chapter three~~~ Thanks to all who has subscribed and commented, and I hope you all enjoy this chapter like the rest! :)

 

 

Chapter Three

 

 

“You got in trouble again,” Naeun said as she saw Hayoung walking towards her in the school corridor. She knew that Hayoung would ignore her, so she stopped and stood in the younger girl’s way. Just as she expected, Hayoung could only stop before her obediently. “Did you smoke again?”

 

Hayoung smiled and took out a pack of gum, unwrapping one she chucked it into and started to chew, “No.” It wasn’t exactly her intention to piss of every person she meets, but Hayoung found it hard to resist.

 

“Don’t lie to me,” Naeun demanded. “Snap out of it Oh Hayoung, everyone around you is worried. You’re parents and even Namjoo.”

 

Hayoung snapped at the name Naeun mentioned, “You know what? You might’ve got me until you said Namjoo. She’s the last person to care” she knew that was exaggerated but it wasn’t too far off reality. Now, everything was ruined. Hayoung didn’t feel like entertaining Naeun anymore, “I’m not in the mood for your pep talk, so may I excuse myself?”

 

“No you may not.”

 

Hayoung stepped back and gave a chuckle, “Well, aren’t you stubborn today.”

 

“Why are you like this now?” Naeun asked, sincerely curious. She didn’t expect an answer, knowing Hayoung and her closed nature. “Is it fun smoking, and getting into stupid fights for fun? Does it make you happy?”

 

“I don't think this is a problem of being happy or not” Hayoung said as calm as usual. “I don’t think it’s fun either.”

 

This is the first time Hayoung has given an answer that seemed even just a little genuine. “Then, why?” Naeun didn’t want this opportunity to slip away from her.

 

Hayoung shrugged, “I just feel better afterwards. Let’s just say I relieve stress this way.”

 

“Hayoung-ah, there’s better ways to relieve stress. Why do you choose this?” Naeun said as she approached the younger girl cautiously. Hayoung’s a sensitive girl and Naeun knew that. Hayoung, being the only child, was born into the pressure of taking over her father’s position. “You’re grades are still good, you can go back,” Naeun tried her best to get Hayoung to see her options.

 

Hayoung stayed mum. She didn’t want to say anything, but Naeun wanted a response. “I don’t think that’s going to work. People don’t just change when you tell them to, unfortunately…”

 

Naeun nodded, “Right. I agree but you weren’t originally like this. Something happened in the past year and you changed for the worst.”

 

“I know” Hayoung admitted.

 

The confession took Naeun by surprise. She never expected in a hundred years that the girl before her would ever agree with anything the people around her would say. “Does it have anything to do with Namjoo?” she asked, not backing off. She’s already gotten so deep, why back out?

 

“I’m going,” Hayoung said, avoiding the question. She squeezed passed Naeun as the two brushed shoulders. It really annoyed her when people just confront her like that. It was none of their business, why do they bother? Hayoung understood where they were coming from. They were worried. Concerned. But, she didn’t like it. She wanted to be left alone. 

 

“I don’t think it’s too late to sort things out between Namjoo” Naeun persisted. “It’s obvious that you two still care so why act otherwise?”

 

Hayoung turned with a smile, “You make me laugh. We still care?” she was finding Naeun’s words so amusing at the moment, she wanted to burst out laughing but controlled herself. “You obviously don’t have eyes. We hate each other’s guts.”

 

“I don’t have eyes? Maybe you’re the one who doesn’t” Naeun retorted. “You can lie to everyone but yourself, Hayoung-ah.”

 

 

~

 

 

Namjoo looked down at the paper, as she zoned out for a while. She was awfully tired today for some odd reason and couldn’t keep her attention span longer than a few seconds. Luckily, it wasn’t affecting her work much and she still managed to operate enough to seem normal to the people around her. “I think it’s a good idea,” she approved of the even suggestion. “We can invite out brother school.”

 

A talent show was the idea. No problem was spotted in the planning and organization. Everything was already sorted, from venue to catering. It’s not the first time holding a talent show so Namjoo was used to the process as well as what to look out for during the application. “It’ll take a while to process with the principal, so I think we can only officially announce it next month” Namjoo explained to the kind girl who suggested the idea. She put the form into the ‘approved’ pile and smiled, “I’ll pass it on this afternoon. Thank you.”

 

The girl dismissed herself with a bow and let another person in instead. “What’s wrong with Hayoung?”

 

Namjoo looked up to see who was asking such a direct question in such a comfortable manner, and as expected, it was someone familiar. Son Naeun. “Unnie, what are you doing here?”

 

“Answer my question.”

 

“What do you mean?” Namjoo wasn’t sure if she heard Naeun’s question correctly. She wasn’t sure if she understood it correctly but she gave it a shot anyway. “She’s probably just going through the peak of puberty.”

 

The older girl rolled her eyes, “Puberty? Really?”

 

Namjoo sighed, “Things happened okay?”

 

“Yeah, you need to sort those ‘things’ out before she sets the school on fire from her teenage angst, which you’d like to call the peak of puberty.”

 

“She won’t set the school on fire” Namjoo replied, concentrating on the details. It might be due to her need to steer away from the main point.

 

“It’s been a year already, can’t you guys just apologize or at least consult someone?” Naeun really wanted this ‘cold war’ of theirs to be solved. It was difficult when she wanted to go out and had to plan around the two just so that they won’t heads.

 

Namjoo gave a heavy sigh, “Look. I’ve tried and she didn’t listen”

 

“Well, try again.”

 

The confrontation wasn’t progressing like Naeun had hoped and Namjoo ha

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ckaz99
#1
Chapter 14: uwaa rereading this great piece~^^ I'd say a masterpiece! Hahahaha I love this story, it is so well-written in structure and character and balance; How the focus on each character and couple just make sense and there's never a dull moment. It's so good! I love all their characters and individual stories and how they interact and intertwine.

First, the bloom of my chomi/chobom is bliss~ absolutely heart-fluttering even in the pain and confusion. Bomi holding back in the beginning, and up to her confession? Oh myy her confession moment, the pouring emotions in her words, the tension and everything in that shopping scene is the best thing ever - and the notion that Chorong felt worse because she swayed! Ahh how I love this and their storyline!!<3 Sungjae's insight, the comparisons when Chorong's trying to figure it out, and how refreshing it is with how Chorong acts transparent to how she feels in the moment even if she doesn't entirely understand where her love lies. She could say she loves them both, and I love that she cares about it being love rather than the person. I'm warm.

Eunji, Naeun and Taemin is such an elaborate complex line that worked so well. It brought the drama, the pain of exes known to the school -- From the beginning, that note to their rankings being the no.1 sweetheart etc was endearing and adds a fame factor, adds how the school even sees Bomi and Naeun differently as players, god I love these comparisons and these characters voices! I just keep going hahaha. -- So back to that, 2eun's love has gone through a lot but the result makes it all fall back into place. So good~

And of course Hajoo! Really the one that starts the mystery couple, but it all makes sense when the things are revealed. I love the way Naeun became detective with it, and I believe it's the first where she really interacts with Hayoung, Namjoo and Bomi, making it clear that she's still friends with them, talks to them, and not completely outside the friend group. I just really liked seeing how the six of them managed to be connected despite two feuds existing between, and how we can gradually see they're all from the same lunch table once different things patch up. And I've talked too much!! hehehe thank you very much for writing this <3
Panda0619
#2
Chapter 14: I like the plot in this story, especially the way you built tension up and ended it on a great note.. looking forward to other works by you!
PandaPink95 #3
Chapter 14: :3
all_iz #4
Chapter 14: It's so nice how the story progress so well. It stayed interesting and made you want to keep reading despite being relatively lighter compared to other fanfics. I like that no death was needed, no explicit mature content. It was so nice and refreshing and wholesome! Nice job author-nim.
Slice-Lish
#5
Chapter 14: so sad it ended man
mymh_bee #6
Chapter 14: These couples are seriously sweet. Chomi, 2eun, Hajoo are so in love with each other tho
Finally after so much upside down, a happy ending
Gosh Chomi are really the cutest couple
Love this one tho, good job author (:
Taeistae #7
Chapter 10: I like the fact that they all had happy endings in the end but I feel that eunji deserved more....shldnt Naeun have suffered since she hurt Eunji so much :/
Avocado #8
Chapter 14: It ended so happily I'm glad :D this was a really nice story, thanks for writing it! The downs were really worth it when the ups eventually came around~ I'm glad that Hayoung's father finally aceelted her relationship with Namjoo too. LOL at Eunji being a precious, cheesy little thing.
Avocado #9
Chapter 12: The fluff is here thank goodness. So nice of Sungjae to voluntarily break up with Chorong so she and Bomi could be together :') the couples and their interactions are super cute!
Avocado #10
Chapter 9: BOMI WHY DID YOU KISS CHORONG SHE IS YOUR GOOD FRIEND'S GIRLFRIEND WHAT ARE YOU DOING MAN OH MA GAWD. Dat fight tho