Username 
sweetsonata
Profile link 
http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/795332
Story Title 
The Winter's Remnants

~ Reviewed by monkeyCSaw ~

first impression: 12/15
First thoughts? "This should be interesting." Did not disappoint.

­title: 4/5 
A good title. Nice and dramatic. I docked a point because the way you implemented it was a little awkward. ­

description + foreword 8/10
A very short description. I gave it points because in a short span of words you had me very intrigued. Very nice.

language: 18/20
Can definitely see that you have a good hold of English. ­

sentence structure & grammar: 8/10
There were a couple of sentences that were a little awkward, but nothing major. A little tweaking, a little editing, and they would be just fine! ­

vocab, punctuation, & spelling: 10/10
Vocab could have been a little more advanced but your technics were all perfect as far as I can see!

storyline: 33/35
It's a little difficult to see what the storyline is from the description and foreword and the reader gets the idea pretty early on when reading the actual writing.

­plot & flow: 28/30
Very organized writing. You don't ramble and you get straight to the point, which I appreciate. It flowed really well, es