〈 applicants 〉

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USERNAME • GROUP • FACE CLAIM • LOVE INTEREST • PENDING

review will go here :DDD the person that will be reviewing your app is going to be either me, hyunbae or autumn. most of the time it'll be autumn but me and hyunbae will still take part cuncuncun -minori

 
 
 

DELUSIONALEXOTIC • THE FEARED • YOSHIDA HARU • UNDECIDED APPLICANT • ACCEPTED

autumn here ; hello raven, thank you for being our first ever applicant. let's get to your app shall we? oh my god haru <3 anyway, akihiko seems like a person that would totally fit the feared which is what we like to see. i really found how akihiko became part of the feared really interesting and heck should i say it, amusing even. the best friend turned enemy part is extremely cliche but i'm fine with it. i can't really say much about your app except that i find some parts cliche yet some parts truly interesting. your character overall really is certainly amusing. ill be honest, hyunbae and i really like your app but minori still thinks that maybe if you added a bit more to the personality part and made it a little less cliche, it'd be near perfect. now it's up to you if you'd like to change it , she - we, don't mind if you don't. with no major mistakes, you are accepted! thanks for applying :))

 
 
 

KUMA-ING • THE FEARED • SEO YUZUKI • FUKAZAWA KEIJI (JIKI) • ACCEPTED

autumn here ; hi there kuma and thanks for applying! can i just start off with the fact that hyunbae begged me to review your app because his "bae" was your face claim. well too bad for him aha, anyway, your character is for sure a total opposite of a mary sue which i like. really like. despite its length (lol what am i saying i don't even care about the length), i found myself very and i mean very engaged in reading your app. the personality, 10/10 holy i started laughing sometimes too. her past story is perfect and you actually managed to transition her non cliche past to the present perfectly. love interest part is so adorable uwu. though i've seen the "opposite love" thing a lot, i really liked how you portrayed the interaction of the two and keiji's personality. i cant say much except that you're accepted. thanks for applying :))

 
 
 

_HAEKYUNG • THE JOCKS • CHITANDA ERU • OKAZAKI KOUTAROU (OREKI HOUTAROU) • ACCEPTED

autumn here ; hello dani and thanks for applying. before we start off, oreki houtarou is baeee. anyway, your character is a badminton player? i should have let minori review this app instead aha. well your character lives in naha right? just make sure you indicate somewhere on your app that your character lives in yokohama currently because yokohama and naha are really really really far from each other. besides that, i didn't really expect to see a character like that when it came to applying as one of the jocks but damn, i really like it. about your love interest part, i honestly don't know how we'll be able to get koutarou to fall in love with ueda but if you do get chosen, we will manage to figure something out. there really isn't much i can say except to add somewhere that your character is living in yokohama. i personally really like your character :3333 although you are accepted, it'd be good if you added that your character lives in yokohama somewhere. thanks for applying!!

 
 
 

MONDEGREEN • THE JOCKS • SHANA • N/A  • ACCEPTED

autumn here ; oh my god i'm like the worst at finding good gifs. anyway, shanda looks so adorable -3- welp, hi lili, and thanks for applying! your app was sure quite descriptive. anyway, your character can for sure relate to some people in my school coughcough hyunbae and minori coughcough. well i actually like that kind of personality. it's like she's arrogant and a typical jock but the overbearing part really makes her a different kind and makes her stand out a bit kinda. her past and everything seems interesting, considering the fact that she was actually raised in london as well. the high school part whoa, praise saku for wanting to prove everyone wrong. i liked the high school part really. i actually like your whole app overall. well since there aren't much to say about your app to be honest. well, erm, you're accepted :DD thanks for applying!!

 
 
 
 

RUSTIC • THE JOCKS • YATO • UNDECIDED APPLICANT • ACCEPTED

autumn here ; hello lani thanks for applying! i don't think minori (since she's been here the longest and everything) has ever seen someone use a boy face claim for a girl but dAMN THAT IS SUPER ORIGINAL. AND HOLY , YATO, PLEASE TELL ME IF I MADE ANY MISTAKES OR TYPOS BECAUSE HYUNBAE IS LITERALLY PUSHING ME TO REVIEW THIS APP. anyway, your character is truly truly truly amazing. so amazing that it actually terrifies me wtf. im just kidding but seriously, your character seems like a character that we're slowly but are, warming up to and that's really good meaning that by the time we get super super obsessed with your character, your character might get chosen instantly, idk. although your past is a bit cliche (but that 'the parents never appearing again' was a total plot twist holy ), i really liked her relationship with her siblings and friends. everything else is all okay so you're accepted! thanks for applying :)))

 
 
 
 

PANDACRAZY • THE NERDS • NAGAMIYA SACHI • UNDECIDED APPLICANT • ACCEPTED

autumn here ; hello rina and thanks for applying! let's get started with your app shall we? ahhh someone who finally applied as a nerd. anyway, although your app isn't that detailed, i really did like her personality. it kinda reminds me of myself in middle school aha so the personality part is all okay! everything is also fine and again, there doesn't seem to be a lot of detail on the past and present but it's a acceptable amount. when it came to your love interest part, i'm totally fine with having another applicant being your love interest but i would actually like you to put some effort when it comes to the conclusion so if you can do that please then i'll be able to accept your app. until you add some more detail to your conclusion part, i'll leave your app as pending. thanks for applying :))) EDIT ; thanks for fixing!!

  
 
 
 

USERNAME • GROUP • FACE CLAIM • LOVE INTEREST • PENDING

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PandaCrazy
#1
Chapter 3: I fixed it ouo
I'm sorry for not having a lot of detail in my app but thanks for letting that slide :)
Good luck
kanqwu
#2
Chapter 2: ohhohhohoh god punch me in the face?!?!?!
this is a really slick fic like whoa. i'm defs applying.
but just one question: are you guys okay with homoual relationships or do you want it to be heteroual?
i'm fine with either, but it'll impact the kind of character i make.
_haekyung
#3
Chapter 3: ps.
my name dani n n n not hana ;v;
_haekyung
#4
Chapter 3: shiiet that's the thing i forgot. orz
i realized that a little afterwards tbh -- I WENT AROUND SEARCHING FOR PLACES TOO. JESUS WHEEZES. ahksmak blurb. also, tbh. koutarou and kanae don't have to get together in the end. im totally fine with that - sprry for making it unclear. i'll fix it ip right awaaay.

thanks for the review, though! and for doing it so quickly too. (':
stravinsky
#5
Chapter 3: thank you so much for reviewing saku! <3 i really appreciate it c:
and the other applicants have such amazing characters omg i.
kishibe
#6
i have aaaaaaaaaaaaa queSTION


DOES THE FACECLAIMS HAVE TO BE FROM ANIMES (like gifs and shet)

because i wanted to use a character from a manga that appeared only a bit in an anime.
-minori
#7
eVERYONE THE EXAMPLE APP IS UP K BYE -minori

/gotta post this in the comments because pfft, who really notices or reads the story feed--