On Repeat

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Description

Irene was stuck reliving the same day, and everyday it ended with her boyfriend being killed by a mysterious stranger.

 

 

Foreword

Again, today repeats…

Irene widened her eyes as she saw Suho got stabbed.

 

The ending is always the same…

Blood spilled out from the wound on his chest and he fell to the ground.

 

Suho-oppa…

"No…"

 

Reviewed by B2tyful-Elf from Kaisoo Advisory Reviews

Your description was well-written. The whole plot was just great. The flow was good. From the beginning, you already had me at suspense, the ending was totally unexpected. Well done! Most of your weak points have to do with grammatical errors. Make sure you pick a title that would grab your reader’s attention! It’s got the romance, got the mystery, got the suspense, and got the twist. Overall, though it had a few grammatical mistakes, this was definitely a must-read!

 

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nghiacaocoi96 #1
Chapter 2: Amazing story!!!!!!!! I'm speechless now. OMG!!!! Good job authornim ^^
qintazshk #2
I really enjoy this story, you really make all the things in this story unexpected ><
I cant even stand surene moment here huhuu the moment when Irene ask for having a ... its just, how Suho supposed to react?
This story reallyrecommended for all surene shipper hahaa
Keep wroting yaa ♥♥♥
TheYooniverse #3
Chapter 2: OHHH GOSHHHHHHHH
_noonim #4
Chapter 2: first time reading irene-suho and i really liked it! wow you are such a genius to plan all the twist! I feel the sadness from irene's side, but then, also her creepiness by the actual phone conversation (and when she mentioned -- pls how's suho supposed to react >.<) I also feel the tense by the sentence from suho's child that he waited for her to say the lines

think about it, it's just the matter of who's first; the egg or the chicken but you make it soooo great and complicated! it's just aweeesssomme and more people should read this! KUDOS!!
Surong223 #5
Chapter 2: wah!!! i enjoy reading this story
plsss update
B2utyful-Elf #6
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preciousbaeklu #7
Chapter 2: Awesome. I didn't see that coming. Nice one.
jessbian9 #8
Chapter 2: The twist at the end is awesome!!! :D great job :p j really enjoyed this story :)
Red_lantern #9
Hello, this is a great fic.
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