Secret Angel

Description

Secret Angel (previously H.E.A.R.T)

featuring Cho Kyuhyun of Super Junior

 

A one shot story of a certain twist of fate bound to separate two lovers, forever.

Foreword

Consequence of my insomnia.

Please do not bash because this is my first try at an one shot and of angst genre.

This is with reference to the car accident poor kyu had previously. Oh huhuhu. T_T

Constructive criticisms are welcomed.

 

REVIEWS:

From the fantastic Changtastic Review and Recc Services

http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/109624/36/changtastic----eview----ecc-services-open-request-review---yuri

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kagaki #1
This was sad ;___;
mainy7
#2
such a beautiful and touching story:') keep writing awesome fanfics...fighting!!!~
HelloKittyJenJenx3
#3
Are you kidding me? You think I write fics well? I'm your dongsaeng, don't be ridiculous x3 <br />
Yours are wayy better than mine >:O And I was like.. on the verge of crying after reading this q.q It's so heartbreaking, sad, yet ... I want more q.q
xXMaurix #4
>>^^<< Unnie! I'm here always to Supprt you all the way up!!!
xXMaurix #5
Haii Unnie!!!! T.T such a touching story! I love it! Please Continue all your best! ^.< You have a future!
maui_maui #6
o.O This is your first time writing angst?!??!?!??!???? <br />
Are you lying to me?! <br />
I couldn't even . . . you're effing amazing! Don't be modest ma dear. Be very damn proud! <br />
<br />
The last sentence, *whistles* just WOW!!!!
bellee
#7
UNNI! THAT WAS AWESOMEE!<br />
Like seriously, omg. i can't even think of words to describe it!<br />
The first paragraph is like WOAHHH<br />
and all the following paragraphs like WOOAHHHH!<br />
and then by the time i finish im like WOOOAAAAAAHHHHHHHH O.O<br />
Omg idk how much times i've read this/gonna read this<br />
Its so sad )': but so inspirational!<br />
You should write oneshots more often! <br />
You're english is wayy better than mine<br />
Like omg, AWESOME!<br />
So unni, mind telling the secret to your awesome stories? ;)
allyvee
#8
OMG UNNIE!<br />
DAEBAK! Moreeeeeee~ that was . . Wooaah <br />
Like all those adjectives and like . . PWOAAAH SERIOUSLY!<br />
I totally loved the ' Sing; sing with every beat of your heart, with every living molecule in your body just as you know I will be in heaven singing in your harmony. ' <br />
It totally hits me! Like BAM ! I love singing and thats probably why . . <br />
Woaah unnie is seriously Daebak . . <br />
Is this the behind the scenes of his car crash ? <br />
Woaah unnie . . Sooo omg . . U SHOULD WRITE A BOOK<br />
NEXT JK ROWLING ! <br />
Unnie, *tear* <br />
How do you write sooo good!?<br />