Unique storyline! I'd love to read this!

I don't mind reading something this weird and unique. It's nice seeing something dierent or a change. The plot sounds interesting. Since no information of Kwangmin is rovided in the forewords, it makes me curious about what his role in tis story is. If he's not Youngmin's actual brother, he could be his cousin or some distant relative, or possibly is stepbrother.

Seventeen and thirty is a big . Miyoung's just trying to convince him that she's mature enough for him by making the sound like it's not a big deal. She's really got it bad for him. One thing that has got me wondering is the story of Hyunjoong's past. What could it be that Youngmin wants?

I heard that the Jo twins are Kim Hyunjoong lookalikes. There are similarities in facial features when ou study their aces closely. In real life, he's actually in his min-twenties. He does seem young as a father. It's weird since his son about or close to Miyoung's age.

Chapter 1 mistakes (Part 2):

11. His choking got better minutes after and I heaved a sigh of relief only to meet his serious eyes and it was as if the whole world froze and I could only have my eyes on him.
Correction: His choking got better minutes after and I heaved a sigh of relief only to meet his serious eyes. It was as if the whole world froze and I could only have my eyes on him.
* This is a run-on senence that's best separated into two ieren ones.

12. Is he going to confess finally?
Correction: Is he going to finally confess?

13. He’s the one in my life and has always been when umma and appa left for Busan to work, leaving me in the hands of this man who cared for me unconditionally even though we were only neighbours at that time.
Correction: He’s the one in my life and has always been when Umma and Appa left for Busan to work; thus, leaving me in the hands of this man who cared for me unconditionally even though we were only neighbours at that time.

14. I answered immediately at him waving before my face and watch him compose himself before he speaks.
Correction: I answered immediately at him waving before my face and watched him compose himself before he spoke.

15. Since when did Hyunjoong oppa had a son?!
Correction: have

16. My brain’s processing ability was going haywire when the doorbell rung and I was glad that it saved me from this awkward, incomprehensible and mind-blowing conference.
Correction: rang

17. I sprinted over at the first minute and I opened the door, expecting it to be a deliveryman or whoever but standing at the door was a male in his teens with striking blonde hair and his luggage sprawled all around on the floor.
Correction: I sprinted over at the first minute and I opened the door expecting it to be a deliveryman or whoever, but standing at the door was a male in his teens with striking blond hair and his luggage sprawled all over on the floor.
* Blonde is used or females.

Chapter 1 mistakes (Part 1):

1. “If one day you were to run into wife again, will you...”
Correction: your wife

2. Or what if they still loved one another?
Correction: love
* Since she's thinking about the current situation, the verb should be in present tense.

3. He smiled kindly and continued with dinner which I wished I prepared rather than transferred it from the take out to the dinner plate.
Correction: He smiled kindly and continued with dinner, which I wished that I prepared rather than transferred it from the take-out to the dinner plate.

4. I responded indifferently and felt my nervousness diminish at his no answer “answer”.
Correction: I responded indifferently and felt my nervousness diminish at his answer of "no."

5. I didn't care if the question sounded stupid or crazy but it was the question I think about every night before I go to sleep...
* Comma after "crazy"

6. I watch him pondered for a moment and gave a shrug could only mean bad.
Correction: I watched him ponder for a moment and gave a shrug that could only mean something bad.

7. “You're too young, Miyoung.” He said, and I was clearly sick of hearing that.
Correction: “You're too young, Miyoung,” he said. I was clearly sick of hearing that.

8. “Next question,” He short stopped me but he never knew I could still be persistent.
Corection: “Next question.” His short response stopped me, but he never knew I could still be persistent.

9. Then... if we were to marry and have children do you want a boy or girl child first?
Correction: “Then...if we were to marry and have children, do you want a boy or a girl first?

10. I exclaimed and shot out of my seat until a strong grip on my hands pulled me back to where I seated.
Correction: I exclaimed and shot out of my seat until a strong grip on my hand pulled me back to where I was seated.

>w< Cant wait for a update, luv all of ur ideas

i love it!!! please update soon,arrasso?? i'm so itching to read the next chapter!!! kyaa!! UPDATE UPDATE!!!! :)

Honestly, the word you use was daebak. Your english was sooo good. And even with the foreword, you already get 7 subscriber. I wonder in chapter 10, how many subscribers you'll get.

Loyal subscriber. :)

Jisung has son? With who? Omooo, update soon please. Thank youuuuuu <3