Temptation

MINE IS MINE

AUTHOR'S POV

 

 

“Spill!”

 

 

“As I’ve told you e-earlier. I went to my grandma’s house. T-then I kind of saw her perfume on her table a-and tried it on” Bomi tried not to be suspicious as she manage to look straight at chorong’s questioning gaze

 

 

“I didn’t know that your grandma likes teen’s perfume” Chorong furrowed her eyebrows and observed the panicking bomi

 

“I-I was surprised too heheh” Bomi fake a giggle and immediately looks away as she feels like burning alive by chorong’s stare

 

 

“hmm.ok”chorong smiled and step back away from bomi

 

 

“Can I go now?” bomi pouted and looks at chorong with her twinkling eyes

 

 

“Ara!” chorong smiles widely at bomi’s cute act as she slaps bomi’s butt.

 

 

 

“Yahhh!!!”

 

- - - - -

 

 

“BOMI AHHHH!”

 

 

 

“WAEEE???”

 

 

 

“BOM AHHHH~”

 

 

“What the hell Rong! Are you crazy??” bomi knitted her eyebrows together. Being annoyed by chorong’s nonstop mouth. She’s trying to have a rest since she’s been having a headache from last night but chorong was being childish right now

 

 

“Nothing!!! Hehehhe” chorong giggles making her eyes disappear

 

 

Bomi looks at chorong unbelievably and turn her back from her. She grab a pillow near her and use it to cover her face

 

 

“Bomi yahhhh~~” chorong shakes bomi’s arms, trying to get bomi’s attention

 

 

“Oh gosh Rong please. I’m trying to rest hereeee~~” bomi starts whining and kicking making chorong frown

 

 

Chorong who is feeling neglected bit her lips and

 

 

*SlaAAap*

 

 

“YAHH~ WAEEE??” bomi sat up and whine at chorong who is jutting her lips in annoyance

 

 

“I just miss you” chorong whispers and bomi didn’t catch that

 

 

 

“What!?” Bomi frowned at her

 

 

“HMMPP!!!” chorong turn her back away from her and about to leave

 

 

Bomi immediately hold chorong’s wrist, she sigh and massage her temple

 

 

“Rong ahh~ just tell me what do you want?” Bomi says calmly this time

 

 

Chorong pulls her wrist away from her and stood up, back are facing bomi

 

 

“I say I just missed you” she made sure she says it loud and clear before she leaves

 

 

Bomi who’s trying to sink in what chorong says finally realize why chorong acted that way, she immediately looks at the door where chorong disappeared

 

 

“Aiishh stupid” bomi mutter

 

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Chorong was standing at the balcony. She is trying to imitate bomi’s behavior earlier and can’t help but to stump her feet on the ground

 

‘What? She didn’t love me anymore that she have to neglect me that way?’ she whisper and pouted

 

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“HMMPPP!!!” chorong who is having a tantrum didn’t notice bomi who is trying her best not to be notice.

 

 

Chorong bits her lips and touch her forehead

 

 

‘Am I sick? I don’t need her attention anyway! Pabo!’ she let out a sigh

 

 

 

She didn’t see it coming but all she know is that she is being drag by bomi with a bridal style

 

“KYAAAHHH!! YAHH! “Chorong who is shocked at the sudden appearance of bomi couldn’t help but to throw a multiple slap to bomi’s chest

 

 

“Yah! Yah! Yah! Stop! It hurts!” bomi whine and tightly held chorong

 

 

“Let me goooo!!! “

 

 

“No! yah! Stop hitting me or I’ll drop you!” bomi threaten. She stops on her track still holding chorong on her arms firmly

 

 

“Then drop me!” Chorong was still slapping her

 

 

Bomi bit her lips then furrowed her eyebrow

 

 

“Nah! I change my mind. I’ll kiss you instead”

 

Chorong stop hitting her and just look at bomi straight in the eyes

 

 

Bomi’s eyes soften as she saw the tears on chorong’s eyes. Even though chorong was being such a little brat right now, she still looks beautiful in bomi’s eyes. Chorong was so too cute and attractive that bomi couldn’t help but to kiss chorong’s crown

 

 

Chorong who is surprised at bomi’s action couldn’t help but to turn red and speechless

 

“I’m sorry ok? Maybe I’m just not feeling well, but don’t ever think that I am neglecting you ok?”

 

Chorong open her mouth but no words came out. Bomi was troubling her mind again

 

Bomi giggled at the unmoving chorong

 

 

“Your so cute chorong ah!” Bomi kiss chorong’s cheeks this time and made her way to her room with chorong in her arms

 

 

She laid chorong at the bed and lay beside her

 

 

“Please don’t think too much right now. Just stay here beside me and I’ll be better soon” Bomi kiss chorong’s cheek again

 

 

Chorong on the other hand can’t process the things bomi did to her, that kiss was too sweet and sincere. How she want to receive it every day but she’s still taken right?

 

 

She shakes her head and clear her mind. All she wanted to do is rest and think of nothing. All she know is that her heart is beating on its unbeatable speed. Her body was stiffen as she was being hug by non-other than bomi

 

- - - - -

Chorong was still staying at bomi’s apartment for like 1 week. She is still in contact with suho but she will do it if ever bomi is not around. Luckily suho is gone for 2 more weeks since he is having a meeting out of the country.

 

It was 7:00 in the morning. Chorong was sipping her cappuccino while waiting for bomi since bomi is out for a jog. 10 more minutes and bomi will be back. After a few more minutes, she stood up and decided to wash the cup she used for the coffee. After washing so, She sit at the couch, grab the remote and turn the television on. 

 

Changing the channels as she can’t find any interesting shows. She turn it off and sigh

 

‘Aiishh? Where is she? It was almost 15 minutes? She’s still not here’ she pouted and decided to grab some magazine to entertain herself. She cross her legs and smiled at the different furniture designs.

 

She looks around and admire bomi’s apartment. It was not that big but clean and beautiful enough to live with. She smiles and turn her attention back to the magazine.

 

 

*opens door*

 

 

Chorong was too busy scanning the magazine when the creak of the door gets her attention. She looks at it and find bomi who is sweating real hard.

 

 

Chorong smiled but it was replace with a disturb one, once she saw how bomi tried to catch her breath

 

 

 

How bomi’s sweat rolled down from her forehead down to her chest

 

 

 

 

 

 Adding the fact that bomi looks so hot with her sleeveless shirt revealing her cleavage and

 

 

 

 

 

 

how bomi choose to wear a short shorts than wearing a pants is not helping at all

 

 

 

 

*Gulp*

 

 

She gulp a big amount of saliva. Her eyes was glued on bomi’s. She clench her thigh and secretly bit her lips. Damn she’s sexually frustrated

 

 

‘Am I fucking horny??!” she thought as she tried her best to look at bomi’s face

 

 

Bomi was still breathing, trying to catch her breathe. Bomi unclog her earphone and wipes her face using her the back of her hand, she looks at the frozen chorong, smiled at her and wave.

 

Chorong gulp again since bomi’s lips was so red that she wants to chew it using her very own lips

 

 

“Rong ahh” bomi wave for the second time and made her way to chorongs.

 

 

“o-oh?” Chorong says, she accidentally drop the magazine and bomi who is in front of her kneel down to grab it, since she’s wearing a sleeveless shirt, her cleavage was revealed and chorong automatically looks at it

 

 

“Here” Bomi pass it to chorong and smiled at her

 

Chorong gulp again and looks at bomi’s pink and soft lips

 

 

“Ah-oh t-thanks” she smile nervously

 

 

“Did you take your breakfast already? Bomi ask

 

 

Chorong nodded and cannot utter a word

 

 

“Are you ok? Why are you so red?” Bomi ask her and check her temperature using her hand

 

 

“AHH? T-this? It’s nothing. Hehe. I-i should go take a bath” Chorong immediately stood up and made her way to the private room

 

 

Bomi shrugged and immediately go to the kitchen to grab some breakfast

 

 

Chorong on the other hand was flushing her face with a cold water

 

 

What the heck? What’s with her clothes?! Isn’t she supposed to wear a pants and a jacket? Jesus please. She’s too sexy! I might raped her right there and then! Oh god please take the temptation away from me’ she prayed as she looks at her reflection through the mirror

 

 

“Don’t make her get onto me please’ she clench her thigh. Bomi’s sexy images kept on replaying on her mind. Damn her lips, her cleavage, her body, her everything, it’s too perfect

 

 

So much of hotness she is feeling down there, she can’t help but to run her fingers from her cleavage down to her stomach. Imagining it was bomi doing that to her. She bit her lips. She turn the shower on, so that it was unheard if ever she let out a moan.

 

 

Damn she’s about to masturbate. Fuck

 

 

She imagine bomi kissing her neck down to her chest. She lean on the wall and open her mouth to let out a gasp

 

 

She ran her finger down to her thigh and massage it. Feeling that her core was wet as fuck. She bit her lips and massage her chest real hard. Imagining that it was bomi, she let out a moan

 

 

“Ahhh~bomiii ahh” she moan

 

 

She bit her lips real hard and tighten the grasp on her boobs

 

 

“That’s right bom ahh~ ahh, feels so good” she moan again

 

 

She move her finger to her wet pussy and starts stroking it

 

 

“FUck you bomi ahh!” She raised her voice from so much pleasure

 

 

“Dammmnn! Fuck me! “She scream then starts pumping her fingers in and out

 

 

OH MY GOD! THAT FEELS SO GOOD!!!!” she moan as she speed it up

 

 

“Ahhh ahh ahh fuck yeah yeah!!!Uhhh”

 

 

 

“Bomi ahhh! You’re so good! Fuh fuckkk youu!!”

 

 

 

“BOMI AHHHHHHH!!”

 

- - - - -

Bomi heard some weird noises as she walk pass by the comfort room. She frowned and lean her ears so that she can hear it clearly

 

 

She heard a moan coming from it and with that her eyes becomes wide with every name she heard from her

 

 

‘Wait-I-is she…. What? She’s moaning my name?’ bomi whispered and lean even closer

 

 

“Did I heard that right?” she mutter

 

 

 

‘BOMI AHHHHHHH!!’

 

 

Bomi smiles widely

 

 

Damn chorong’s moan was so tempting and it was making her panty sweat like a mad

 

 

“Did I make her horny that much?” she bit her lips even harder and tried her best not to be tempted or else.

 

 

She skip her way to her room and lay at her bed happily

 

 

“So I have that effect on you huh?” she bit her lips and looks at the seiling

 

 

“You miss that much then I miss you too” she smiled hug her pillow tighter

- - - - -

Chorong was cooking for a dinner when someone backhug her

 

 

“OMO!!” chorong immediately turns around and found bomi smiling at her

 

 

“He-hey” Chorong smiled and continued cooking though her heart was beating real loud

 

 

“Hmm” bomi hugs her even tighter and smiled remembering the incident earlier at the comfort room

 

 

“W-what are you doing?” chorong ask

 

 

“Hugging you” bomi whispered and sniff chorong’s neck making her shudder

 

 

“Hmmm smells good” bomi says as she smiled secretly knowing that chorong is panicking

 

 

Chorong on the other hand was trying to be ignorant and change the atmosphere

 

 

“Yeah~ this omelet do smell good” chorong tries to change the awkwardness

 

 

“No, I meant. You smells *sniff* good hmm” bomi whisper at chorong and blow it making chorong close her eye and bit her lips

 

 

“Bomi ahh~~ Not now I’m~ trying to cook here~” chorong half moaned.

 

 

“Hhmm?” bomi kiss chorong neck and starts nibbling it. Chorong lean backwards to bomi and opens her mouth but no words came out again

 

 

“But I’m hungry chorong ahh~”

 

 

“S-stop it bom ahhh~ ahh”

 

 

“I want to eat you” bomi says seductively while grasping chorong’s chest

 

 

“Bom ahhhh~~~~oh god” chorong clench her thigh

 

 

 

“You want me to stop? Hmmmm” bomi ask as she nibble chorong’s ear making chorong moan

 

 

“Fuck ohm ahhh please~” chorong moan and grip bomi’s hand on hers

 

 

“Please what?”

 


 

“Oh god bomi ahhh~” chorong turned around and immediately crash her lips on hers. They kiss each other’s hungrily

 

 

Bomi smiled through the kiss and looks at the omelet being burn

 

 

Bomi squeeze chorong’s butt then pat it, she pulled away then says

 

 

“I’m hungry. Please finish our dinner” Bomi wink at her and peck her for the last time before she sat at the dining table. Giggling at the frustrated chorong

 

 

 

“Seriously YOON? SERIOUSLY” chorong stump her feet and rolled her eyes in annoyance

 

 

Bomi on the other hand was laughing silently at the annoyed chorong

 

 

“So cuteee~” bomi squeal and chorong couldn’t help but to imitate her

 

 

So cuteee~ Fuck you!” she mutter as she was poking the omelet irritatingly wishing it was bomi.

 

 

“Yah! I know I’m hot, but baby I’m hungry. I’ll eat you later” once chorong heard it, she immediately turn around and glare at the grinning bomi

 

 

 

“You wishhh!!! “

 

 

 

“I know you’ll like it”

 

 

“Fuck you!!”

 

 

“I’ll fuck you later!”

 

 

“Yahh!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHAT THE HELL YOON BOMI!!!!!!!”

 

 

Bomi merong at her and chorong was having a heart attack in annoyance. She continued making the omelet but it seem like it was burned

 

 

“OH MY GOD!!!!!!” Chorong scream and bomi laughs out loud at that

 

 

Chorong turn the microwave off then glared at the laughing bomi

 

 

She grab a plate then put the burned omelet on it. She walks to bomi who immediately composed herself and sit properly, not giving an eye on chorong

 

 

“SAY HELLO TO YOUR DINNER THEN!” Chorong glared at her than put the plates in front of the pouting bomi

 

 

“b-but I’m hun-hungryyyy” bomi whine and chorong shot her a glare again making bomi to shut her mouth

 

 

“Your fault asshole! Chorong stump her feet and make an ‘hmp’ sound before leaving bomi with a burned omelet

 

 

 

‘Aiishh! I shouldn’t have teased her! Pabo!’ bomi pouted and shook her head

 

 

 

 

 

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“Let’s see who’ll beg for it then. Yoon bomi”

 

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TANTANTAN!! Another chappieee! It’s the start of my vacation so expect me to update more and more! Hing~

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Alaayyssa23 #1
Chapter 25: Please update athournim
Alaayyssa23 #2
Chapter 25: Please update athournim
Sam-TheReader
#3
Chapter 25: Update soon please :c
ChomiChobbom
#4
Author nim~ please comeback
ChomiChobbom
#5
Chapter 25: Still waiting for this to have a comeback, fighting author nim! We miss you so much ~ this coming monday will be 1 year after you updated T_T
Bunnylovehamster
#6
Chapter 25: Please update soon authornim. *sob sob*
NotYourOrdinaryBabe
#7
Chapter 25: Im still hoping that you'll update :(
ckaz99
#8
Chapter 25: *spoiler alert to the readers out there + major comment coming through*

I remember reading this when the chapters came out haha. One of my favourites. Ah so it seems chapter 25 was released in 2018! Wow not too long ago, and it's such a good chapter. So I just reread the whole thing and wanted to talk a bit. First of all, it's. so. good.

Not that you will, but if I can request it, please don't rewrite anything. I can see that your writing greatly improved from the beginning to the end and that's actually really fun to witness through reading! It also creates a lot of character development which is amazing.. Chorong started off with a temper and screaming all the time, to becoming this cute softie who is in love with Bomi. The confession and final arc with Suho was perfect! Suho's reaction was realistic, and so was their guilt, but it's also light-hearted enough that we readers aren't in pain - which is a good thing in it's own way. The fic Untouchable Face deals with cheating in a more mature way, so I think the difference is really refreshing!! Idk if what I'm saying is coming out right. I'm trying to say that I love this story in its own right.

When Chorong made her final decision, realising the one she is in love with, and then made that mistake of saying it as a response to Suho omg it was so funny and great. Then chasing after Bomi and those kisses, saying those words that Bomi never thought she'd hear, that was breathtaking. A different side to Chorong. Flashbacking to what happened with Suho after that was such a good way to do it. Argh the pace was so good!!

And this fic has such golden moments my god. Chorong finding out just how hurt Bomi is, Chorong feeling herself thinking of Bomi (hehe), Bomi being tired of this and telling Chorong to leave--how Chorong badly wants to hear Bomi's true feelings during that wowowow, Bomi hiding from Chorong in the cafe, Bomi being sincere in the cafe, Bomi saying hurtful words to Chorong before showing how much she loves her, Chorong's confused feelings the entire time too, and that all leads up to the end where I have even more to say!

Bomi needing to court Chorong to be her gf was the funniest fluffiest sh*t ever I loved it!! How did you come up with such greatness to fill this whole story gosh.. The April fools chapter haha, but we were rewarded with sweet sweet love. And now, the last chapter. What I personally really like about this is that it can pass off as an ending. The continuation of the story revolves around Bomi's ex who had supposedly passed away, so if we take out the whole idea that she's alive, there's already a perfect spot to end at, like ending version 1, or the end of part 1, if not just The End. And like I said how your writing seemed to have improved as the story progressed, Chapter 25 touches upon the disappointment of forgetting their anniversary, and oh my how you made me feel for Chorong. You can see the pure love she feels for Bomi. All that worry and guilt that came was fragile and beautiful. The way she spoke her heart out to Bomi was BEAUTIFUL. That "I love you. I love you. I love you" 3 times in succession melted me, fckkk. And how Bomi just chuckles asking why she's crying so much like Chorong is being silly, having prepared all that and she should be upset but she isn't... awwwhhhh.. Their love... Your mind..... can i cry pls

So I love this story. One of my favourites. You say there's more and I'll be waiting, but just know that I'm so happy with what you've given us already and my mind is at ease at that. Thank you.
ChomiChobbom
#9
Chapter 25: And to bomi's reaction what would be her reaction if naeun cameback and also chorong jealous rongie ^___^ please update author.
ChomiChobbom
#10
Chapter 25: Please update~ can't wait to naeun's appearance.