Confession ?

MINE IS MINE

AUTHOR'S POV

 

*KNOCK!* *KNOCK!* *KNOCK!*

 

Chorong knock multiple times

 

"  YAH ! OPEN THE DOOR ! " 

 

She bang the door until her knuckles turn red and swollen

 

" I KNOW YOURE THERE ! YOU BETTER OPEN THIS DOOR ! " she shouted , she didn't cared if someone might saw her banging someones door as if she is out of her mind !

 

" BOM AHHHHHH !!!!!!! " she scream with her dolphin voice 

 

" aiishh !!! " she glared at the door and even kick the door twice 

 

biting her lips , she look at the vase near bomi's door . she grab it and about to throw it at the window but she saw the key under it . 

 

" aiishh ! pabo ! " she mutter placing the vase back on its proper place

 

' you better have a good explanation , idiot  ' she whispered , smirking

 

as soon as she open the door 

 

she gasp looking at the living room as if a tornado entered bomi's house

 

" aiiishhh !!! " 

 

alcohol is lingering on chorong's nose . she enter the kitchen and was shock again seeing a scattered broken plates and bottles

 

seems like bomi's house was entered by a thief , thinking about that she ran on the living room grabbing the baseball bat near the sofa 

 

' what if someone gets in and rape-- OMO !!!!!!!!! " she thought

 

she grip it tightly and headed to bomi's bedroom . 

 

Feeling nervous thinking that a thief was on bomi's room . she started sweating from head to toe . biting her lips and about to kill the thief

 

as soon as she turn the knob to open the door

 

the room was dark

 

*GULP*

 

seems like there is someone on bomi's room

 

she turn the lights on

 

as soon as the bed gets lighter

 

her eyes widened

 

and her mouth were open agape

 

she see how bomi was laid on the bed . snoring and seems like she is drunk

 

Chorong glared at her and let go of the bat . She walks near bomi , grab a pillow and hit bomi multiple times 

 

" YOU.IDIOT.SCARING.ME.LIKE.THIS! IM.SO GONNA.KILL.YOUUUU~!!!! " she scream with each hit she did

 

but bomi is not responding from all the beat she did

 

" did you know how worried i was ???" she ask , talking at the drunk bomi laying on the bed

 

She close her eyes and let her heart raise in nervous 

 

' she's so gonna kill me ~ ' she thought , glaring at bomi

 

She scan the room and it was hella messy

 

she sigh in relief

 

' thank god , No one is here . she's fine ' she says . wiping her own sweaty forehead

 

as she kneel down to face bomi who is sleeping

 

she study her face features and smiled

 

' i didn't know you are this cute and pretty ' she thought . touching bomi's nose .

 

after scanning her face she noticed how bomi gets redder and redder . and her face looks so pale . looks like she is cold

 

chorong frown .She touch bomi's face and gasp

 

' omo ! she has a fever ?? ' she thought . she bit her lips and regret whart she did to her earlier 

 

" omo ! mianhae ~ " she whispered , studying bomi's face for the second time , biting her lips

 

 

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after recovering from bomi's beauty

 

" i shoul get a cold water . wait here pabo ~ " she whispered then get up

 

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she walks to the kitchen then make her hair tied .Then she started making a soup . she prepare a towel and cold water . 

 

 

then proceed to bomi's room again with the materials she needed in her hands

 

she started wiping bomi from head 

 

eyes

 

 

nose

 

 

 

cheeks

 

 

lips .....

 

chorong stared at her lips for a moment then look away

 

" park ! get a hold to yourself ! she's drunk idiot ! ' she scold to herself 

 

she take a deep breathe then proceed to wipe her lower and lower

 

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" bom ah ~ sit up ~ " she called

 

" uhhmmm "

 

" bomi yahhh "

 

" hmmp ! " bomi turn her back on her then cover herslef with a blanket

 

" wha-" chorong is surprised by bomi's action 

 

she's staring at bomi's back like what-the-heck-look

 

" aiiiishhh !!! " she was about to slap bomi but get a hold of her sef anyway

 

" this idiot ! " she mutter harshly and glared at her back

 

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after a minute

 

she called her again

 

" bomi yahhhh ~ " chorong whine

 

" waeee ??? " bomi whine as well . 

 

" look at me ~~" chorong says sweetly

 

" ihhhhhhhh ~~~~ " bomi whine then look at chorong

 

" who are youuuuu ?????" bomi ask , still her eyes were close

 

" just sit up . ill feed you . arrasso ?? " chorong says patiently 

 

chorong sitted beside bomi . she guide bomi so sit and let bomi lean on her .

 

chorong's right hand are on bomi's waist balancing her

 

" hmmmm" bomi groan , still her eyes is close

 

chorong looks at her then looks at the bed side . she grab the spoon then get a soup . she feed bomi

 

" bom ahh ~ say ahhhhhhh ~ "

 

bomi peek whoever she is with

 

" ahhhhh ~~" she obeyed anyway

 

then chorong feed her

 

" good girl " chorong smiled and bomi nodded like a child

 

" here take another say chorong ahhhhh ~~~ " she ordered

 

" chorong ahhhhhh ~~` "

 

and she feed her again

 

chorong giggle at the cute bomi infront of her

 

" cuteee~~ " she squeel in her mind

 

* cough*

 

 then clear her throat anyway

 

" hmm ~~ who are youuuu ~~~?? " bomi ask in a drunk state . poking chorong's nose

 

" yahhhh ~ stop it ! " chorong says irritatingly

 

" who are youuuuuuuuuu ~~~~~ " she naughtily ask again

 

" its chorong ~ park chorong pabo !! " chorong states truthfully

 

bomi started giggling

 

" noooo ~~ i know who chorong issss ~~ " she says poking chorong's cheek this time

 

" yah ~ stop ! who then ?? " chorong ask , staring at the now giggling bomi

 

" she's a monster ! " bomi exclaimed , clapping her hands

 

" WHAT ??!!! "chorong says , shocked at what bomi just says

 

"monsterrrrrrr ~~~~~~~ " bomi says again , giggling

 

"this stupid-- aiishh !!" she pinch bomi's left waist irritatingly

 

" ouuchhhh !!!!!! " bomi cried in pain

 

" who is she again ??!! " chorong ask again , glaring

 

" promise me first ~~ dont pinchhhh me  ~ it hurtsss ~~ " bomi pouted 

 

chorong eyes soften at bomi's cute behavior

 

" ok promise ~ "

 

" ok then lemme says the truth hehhehehehe " bomi says maniacally

 

chorong sigh in frustration

 

" arrasso " she says quietly

 

" she-park chorong is a MONSTERRRR !!!!!! " she repeated again and chorong will just glared at her but keep her promise anyway

 

" w-why ??" she ask , stopping herself to chopped bomi's body

 

" she - she keeps on hurting meee ~ " bomi whine . as if she's a child trying to complain on her mommy

 

" w-what ? she's hurting you ?" chorong ask again . shocked at what bomi says

 

" yes ! but imma keeping myself strong infront of her ! im super mannnnn !!! " bomi says , eyes were now open wide . raising her hand as if she's flying

 

chorong didn't know if she'll laugh or she'll feel dissapointed 

 

" she keeps grabbing my heart like this !!!! " bomi says acting as if she's holding a heart and rasing it like a mad

 

chorong's eyes widened again for the nth time

 

" hehehehhehe .. im kidding " bomi says giggling then slam her back on chorong's since she's leaning on chorong anyway

 

chorong sigh in relief

 

" pabo ! " she whisper infront of bomi's ear

 

" but honestly " bomi says seriously  , closing her eyes

 

" she's a monster " she confess

 

" w-what ?"

 

chorong can feel the truthfulness in bomi's tone of voice . it was like bomi was having something on her heart and mind that she herself can't explain

 

chorong listen intently 

 

staring at bomi's face

 

" she hurted me . she hurt me . she always does " bomi confess honestly 

 

chorong can feel the seriousness on bomi's words

 

chorong was surprised though . she feel like she is being choked on her neck . hearing bomi saying this was like it was near the end of her world

 

" but i stayed strong for a long time ! for her . for us " bomi continued

 

chorong can feel her eyes burning . looks like the tears are indicating to fall

 

chorong looks at bomi . bomi's eyes were close but still the tears were rolling down her cheeks . she look really hurt for real

 

" she has a boyfriend and still she had me " bomi says . now her eyes were open the tears are falling freely

 

chorong have to bit her lips stopping herself to cry right there and then

 

" ohhh ~ how i hate it seeing them together . but i still let them , i never talk about it , i never say anything " bomi smiled pathetically

 

" yet eveytime she saw me with someone else . it was like as if i cheated on her . and she will start saying something that can really hurt me eventhough she's not aware of it ? i still -- i still stayed by her side "

 

 

bomi talks as if she's not drunk . but she's letting it all out . she dont even know that chorong is the one she is talking to. anyway

 

chorong was stabbed real hard by bomi's word .

 

' i am hurting her ' she thought as she cried silently

 

" you know .. everytime we 'do' it ? she says it was just a 'sex' were all i wanted to called it as 'making love' " bomi started trembling and chorong would just hug her from behind silently apologizing and silently saying that everything is gonna be alright . chorong tighten her grip . bomi hold chorong hand tightly that it hurt chorong so much

 

' she must be really hurt ' chorong cried with bomi

 

" the thing that it hurt me the most is ~ " bomi stop and take a deep breathe .

 

" everytime she's near shell scream his name !~!!!! " bomi shouted her heart out . she started kicking and sobbing

 

chorong's grip tighter . not realizing that . her eyes were wide and it was like her soul left her body in that moment

 

" IT HURTS !!!!!!!!!! " bomi scream and sob louder

 

" IT FUCKIN HURTS ME YET SHE DONT KNOW ANYTHINGGGGGGGGGGGG !!!!!!!!!! " 

 

chorong sobbed hard too . she dont care if bomi realizes that it is actually chorong who is hugging her right now but the pain chorong is feeling is too damn hurt .

 

 

 

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bomi finally calm down with chorong still backhugging her from behind

 

" how i wish to hear her says she loves me yet all i hear was 'ilovehim' " bomi says and she stays quiet .

 

bomi close her eyes then let her self fall into a deep slumber

 

chorong is still crying . her heart is aching like stabbing it into many pieces ..

 

" m-mianhae bom ahh ~ mianh-hae " she sobbed

 

and she cried all night

 

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Good morning baby good morning ~~
Neowa achimeul hamkke yeoneun ~~
Nan maeilmaeil sangsanghae jami deol kkaen nune kiseuhae ~~
Keuge malhaji anhado arayo i love you ~~ 

 

"urrghhh !! " bomi groan . she grip her head then and stood up 

 

she heads to her bathroom to do her morning business 

 

after doing so 

 

she goes out from her room 

 

she gasp 

 

seeing how clean and crystal-like her living room was

 

' aren't my living room is messy like how my lovelife is? ' she thought and shrug it anyway

 

as she's getting nearer and nearer she suddenly sniff, smelling a pancakes or something

 

realizing that someone is on her kitchen

 

she tiptoed 

 

until she peek on her door 

 

seeing a girl with its pink apron dancing 'mr.chu' she gasp 

 

' omo ! how can someone enter my house? ' she mutter , she's getting nervous and sweating so damn much

 

she bit her lips as the girl on her kitchen continued to dance while cooking something more like a pancakes since it smells

 

' cute ! wait isnt that rong's voice ?" her eyes widened in realization

 

" omo ! rong ! what are you doing here !!! " she scream and chorong stamble back in surprised

 

" yahhhhhhhh !!!!!!!!!!! "chorong scream in her dolpin voice

 

" arrrghhhh ! " bomi grip her head again . chorong voice was like a needle to her head 

 

" geez ! stop screaming ! " bomi shouted

 

chorong stop screaming and shut her mouth up immediately

 

" good " bomi smiled and sit on the dinning area

 

" how did you get here ?" bomi ask looking at the now blushing chorong

 

' why is she blushing anyway ?" she thought

 

" ahh .. uhmm .. you cleavage is re-revealing " bomi realize that since she's wearing a loose sleeveless shirt

 

" omo sorry " bomi blush and chorong giggle at that

 

" its ok " chorong immediately turn around and continue cooking the pancakes

 

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" here eat " chorong says as she serve the pancakes and hot chocolate infront of bomi's

 

bomi is surprised

 

" t-thanks "

 

" welcome " 

 

chorong sitted opposite on bomi's

 

" did you eat already ?" bomi ask as she eat

 

" nae " chorong nodded and smiled

 

bomi nodded too

 

' damn . if she continue acting like this . ill fall deeper ' bomi thought . avoiding chorong's cute face

 

a minute later 

 

chorong lean closer and bomi was surprised

 

she looks at chorong , eyes widened 

 

chorong lean closer until her hand touch bomi's cheek

 

they stayed like that for a while until

 

*cough*

 

chorong cough then look away . bomi just stayed statued there

 

" ahhh ~ your fine now . uhmm-- last night you are -having a high fever -- so -i- iwas just checking " chorong explain . looking on her palms right now

 

" anii~ thank youu ~ " bomi smiled , blushing like a mad

 

" welcome " chorong bit her lips , stopping herself to smile like an idiot

 

' what is happening to you park ! ' she scolded herself

 

" uhmm~ this taste to good " bomi complimented her . bomi is giving her , her killer eye smile

 

chorong blush and smile shyly 

 

" gomawooo " chorong says shyly

 

 

Mr. Chu~ ipsul wie ~

Chu~ dalkomhage ~
Chu~ onmome nan himi pullyeo ~

Nae mam heundeul heundeureo ~

nal heundeureonwayo ~

 

chorong's phone rang

 

bomi looks at her then look away . already knew at was her boyfriend , she pretend that she dont care

 

chorong , being aware on bomi's feeling she cleared her throat then answer her phone

 

' annyeong ?" chorong says . less sweet . looking directly at bomi who is silently eating her foods

 

" ill be home later "

 

' iloveyou ' suho says in another line and bomi can clearly heard it

 

waiting for chorong's response . she readied herself and her heart . she closed her eyes ready to hear the truth pain in ass

 

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" dae ~ bye " chorong hang up

 

bomi open her left eye peeking at chorong . and surprised at chorong's response

 

'that's it ?" bomi thought

 

chorong giggled at bomi's cute action

 

' omo ! this is embarassing !!! " bomi thought . composing herself and sitted properly

 

" what ?" bomi ask . stopping herself to smile at chorong's cuteness

 

" cuteeee ~ " chorong says outloud

 

and bomi is surprised at chorong's words

 

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" you are cuter " bomi says outloud

 

and chorong cant help but to smile and blush at that 

 

 

 

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i am not really into fluffy ? lol but ill try my best hehhehehe :)

 

 

 

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Alaayyssa23 #1
Chapter 25: Please update athournim
Alaayyssa23 #2
Chapter 25: Please update athournim
Sam-TheReader
#3
Chapter 25: Update soon please :c
ChomiChobbom
#4
Author nim~ please comeback
ChomiChobbom
#5
Chapter 25: Still waiting for this to have a comeback, fighting author nim! We miss you so much ~ this coming monday will be 1 year after you updated T_T
Bunnylovehamster
#6
Chapter 25: Please update soon authornim. *sob sob*
NotYourOrdinaryBabe
#7
Chapter 25: Im still hoping that you'll update :(
ckaz99
#8
Chapter 25: *spoiler alert to the readers out there + major comment coming through*

I remember reading this when the chapters came out haha. One of my favourites. Ah so it seems chapter 25 was released in 2018! Wow not too long ago, and it's such a good chapter. So I just reread the whole thing and wanted to talk a bit. First of all, it's. so. good.

Not that you will, but if I can request it, please don't rewrite anything. I can see that your writing greatly improved from the beginning to the end and that's actually really fun to witness through reading! It also creates a lot of character development which is amazing.. Chorong started off with a temper and screaming all the time, to becoming this cute softie who is in love with Bomi. The confession and final arc with Suho was perfect! Suho's reaction was realistic, and so was their guilt, but it's also light-hearted enough that we readers aren't in pain - which is a good thing in it's own way. The fic Untouchable Face deals with cheating in a more mature way, so I think the difference is really refreshing!! Idk if what I'm saying is coming out right. I'm trying to say that I love this story in its own right.

When Chorong made her final decision, realising the one she is in love with, and then made that mistake of saying it as a response to Suho omg it was so funny and great. Then chasing after Bomi and those kisses, saying those words that Bomi never thought she'd hear, that was breathtaking. A different side to Chorong. Flashbacking to what happened with Suho after that was such a good way to do it. Argh the pace was so good!!

And this fic has such golden moments my god. Chorong finding out just how hurt Bomi is, Chorong feeling herself thinking of Bomi (hehe), Bomi being tired of this and telling Chorong to leave--how Chorong badly wants to hear Bomi's true feelings during that wowowow, Bomi hiding from Chorong in the cafe, Bomi being sincere in the cafe, Bomi saying hurtful words to Chorong before showing how much she loves her, Chorong's confused feelings the entire time too, and that all leads up to the end where I have even more to say!

Bomi needing to court Chorong to be her gf was the funniest fluffiest sh*t ever I loved it!! How did you come up with such greatness to fill this whole story gosh.. The April fools chapter haha, but we were rewarded with sweet sweet love. And now, the last chapter. What I personally really like about this is that it can pass off as an ending. The continuation of the story revolves around Bomi's ex who had supposedly passed away, so if we take out the whole idea that she's alive, there's already a perfect spot to end at, like ending version 1, or the end of part 1, if not just The End. And like I said how your writing seemed to have improved as the story progressed, Chapter 25 touches upon the disappointment of forgetting their anniversary, and oh my how you made me feel for Chorong. You can see the pure love she feels for Bomi. All that worry and guilt that came was fragile and beautiful. The way she spoke her heart out to Bomi was BEAUTIFUL. That "I love you. I love you. I love you" 3 times in succession melted me, fckkk. And how Bomi just chuckles asking why she's crying so much like Chorong is being silly, having prepared all that and she should be upset but she isn't... awwwhhhh.. Their love... Your mind..... can i cry pls

So I love this story. One of my favourites. You say there's more and I'll be waiting, but just know that I'm so happy with what you've given us already and my mind is at ease at that. Thank you.
ChomiChobbom
#9
Chapter 25: And to bomi's reaction what would be her reaction if naeun cameback and also chorong jealous rongie ^___^ please update author.
ChomiChobbom
#10
Chapter 25: Please update~ can't wait to naeun's appearance.