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LITTLEEDEEER• bts_kimtaehyung •STORY REVIEw
BLIND HEIRS
TITLE:
Your title is really captivating on my eyes an very intriguing. It will pull the readers to subcribe and continue reading the whole fic.
DESCRIPTION:
The way you wrote your description gave me some sort of hook on your story, it has the feeling of angst and I love it XD
PLOT:
At first I was worried that it will have the same story as The Heirs but you prove it that I'm wrong. I like stories that are based from MV's, TV shows , K-Dramas or movies but it seemed it will not be a new story but the idea of your story seems original for me,cause I never read anything like this and as I read on by chapther you dropped some hints which leads to some twist and turns of you story
CHARACTERIZATION: you explained Kim Yoo Jung very well detailed character here as the other characters I still don't read so much of them cause you stroy is still developing. FLOW: The story flow is nicely written and with the flashbacks it makes more beautiful WRITTING CONVENTIONS: your spelling, punctuation, capitalization, grammar, and paragraphing are nice, keep it up! ENJOYMENT: Your story is really my cup of tea so I'll keep on reading it till end :D NOTE: Sorry for the delay, I got
CHARACTERIZATION: you explained Kim Yoo Jung very well detailed character here as the other characters I still don't read so much of them cause you stroy is still developing. FLOW: The story flow is nicely written and with the flashbacks it makes more beautiful WRITTING CONVENTIONS: your spelling, punctuation, capitalization, grammar, and paragraphing are nice, keep it up! ENJOYMENT: Your story is really my cup of tea so I'll keep on reading it till end :D NOTE: Sorry for the delay, I got
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