Home staffs advertisement form review form PACKAGES Advertisement and Review shop established july 2014   lin       LITTLEEDEEER• Kaisoofexoforever •STORY REVIEw• PACKAGE 3       THE SACRIFICE     TITLE:   The title really tells what is it all about.     DESCRIPTION:   your description is well written and it makes the readers to stay till the end of the story     PLOT:   Even tho I've been reading alot of stories about cheating on their partners, your's is really one of a kind it has something that the other stories don't have, I can tell your plot is well written (I swear I can't think straight with your story it's so beautiful)   CHARACTERIZATION:   Kyugsoo and Jongin are well detailed character  here but as the other characters you need to emphasize what they looked like or who are they.   FLOW:   The flow of your story is nicely written, I can't say anything here cause for me it's perfect.   WRITTING CONVENTIONS:   your spelling, capitalization and paragraphing are good but your grammar and  punctuation is alittle bit off, try to read some of your chapters and edit it.   ENJOYMENT:   Honestly, Kaisoo fics are my favorite and your story really hit my soft spot specially in one of the chapters where Kyugsoo let go of Kai, a tear left my eyes and I will subscribe this to the end :D     NOTE:   Sorry for the delay but I hope my reveiw will help you writting your story and thank you for