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-Behind The Scenes...- An Applyfic, APPLY OPEN

reviews applicants #13

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Bae Zixin

 

Author's Review
Hello! Thank you for being our first applicant and a boy o.o! So, as you know, I let you not use the layout because ofyour problems but that doesn't take away from your application. I loved the nickname from Haru! It's just so adorable. Your faceclaim seemed alright. I find interesting how he was a trainee at first and then became a songwriter but no offense but the story was kind sob story like, where his mom died and then his dad ran out on him, I kind of found it sadder than it needed to be. I liked the habits of his and he will definately run into the co-author's character alot. I liked how you used an Oc as a love interest. But you need to give me a picture of what she looks like. Just give me a picture of your love interest and you will be accepted.

Co-author's Review- Hi! So, I really like the fact that he has tattoos and piercings but dresses very nice, that stuck out to me a lot. I also really liked reading about his personality and the fact that people are very drawn to him. The background story was a bit sad but I feel like the father becoming depressed is a reasonable reaction to the death of his mother. I also like that he origionally started as a trainee, that was really interesting. Overall, nice application!

 

Playitagain_yg's male songwriter _Zilver (Oc)_ Nam Woong_ — Accepted 

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Song Haeun

 

Authors review- Hello! Thank you for being our first female applicant! I really liked everything about your application every seemed ok. I loved your background, even thoug hit was alittle sob, it wasn't enough for me to say I can't accept you. I also LOVED your love interest! Thank god you chose a Kwon twin, If I had chosen your plotline, I would of also chosen one of the Kwon Twins! The relationship between them are so cute!!

Co-authors review - Hello! So, reading your review i really liked the idea of her being very confident about her legs and wanting to show them off, I feel like that says a lot about her. Also, for some reason I found it really cute that she works on cars with her dad like i know that's a really small detail but it's so cute! I also really like the relationship between her and her brother, and the fact that he is a mute adds a lot more to their relationship. Thank you for applying!

 

Loveisintheair7_ Yg's female back up dancer_ Kwon Youngduk (kwon twin) _Lee dasom— Accepted

Darren Nam

 
Authors review-
Hello! Thank you for applying! I liked your nicknames, their super cute! But he birthdate is way to young to be a vocal trainer, he is twenty two, he needs to be twenty four atleast to be accepted. The background and personality seemed fine. I love how your guy is they middle kid and the only boy child. I loved you love interest she is super pretty! 
Co-authors review -  Tabby messed up the thingy on this one but I agree with what she said!



Sakuraciel_ Sm's Male vocal trainer_ Jennifer cho (oc) _ Park jaehyun  — accepted

Moon Wan Hae

 

Authors review- Hello! Sorry for the late review, I was on vacation. Anyways, your application seemed fine. You NEED links to your gallery, I am to lazy to look up peoples ulzzangs/face claims for them. I like how everyone is applying for YG, I'm not complaining it's just funny XD. Your personality seemed fine. And I like how in your background, even though he didn't have parents, he still had a happy childhood. Overall if you could just link your face claims gallery, You will be accepted!

Co-authors review- Hi! So, I feel like your face claim works very well with the personality that you've created for Wan Hae, the sort of mysterious picture you chose works really well with his personality. I also like that you tied in boxing with the stress that he encounters at work. I also really really enjoyed reading his back story on how he was introduced to underground music, very well written!! Also, awesome love interest, i really like their interactions with each other. Thank you for applying!

musicbeat_yg's male song writer_Kwon Youngdon (Kwon twin)_Hwang jin uk — Accepted

Bang Hyunae

 

Authors review- Hello sorry for the late review! Can I say How much I love Hyun Ae! I like all of her tattoos. I like her style, but can you write about it alittle, like whats her favorites out of all of her clothes. Her personality was very different and interesting, which is good. I liked her background, it was 2 paragraphs, but it still told somethings about her life. I think maybe next time you should be alittle more specific but I will let it slide today :). Also, I LOVE your face claim. She is so pretty and she fits her age. I like how your love interest is a girl. Not many girls do that but you did and it added uniqueness to your app. Hyuna is one of my favorite girls in kpop and I liked how you described her because she is like that in real life too. I also noticed how Hyunae and Hyuna have a one letter name difference. I thought it was cute. Anyway the reason why its so long cause I loved it!

Co-authors review-  Hi! I'm gonna start off with the fact that i really like her personality and they way you portrayed her personality through your writing! I thought it was really nice (and super cute) that her family was so accepting of her feelings for the same gender, and her relationship with Hyuna is the cutest!!! I like Hyunae and thank you for applying!!

ljoeah_Cube's female vocal trainer_ kim hyuna_girim — accepted

Kim Chan Hyuk

 

Author's Review- Hello! Thank You for applying. Can I just say right off the bat that I LOVE your FACE CLAIM!! He is so cute and I cannot believe that I have never seen him before. His personality seemed fine. The background was a little messy but I could still read it. I feel like you should have added a little more about how he got into dancing next time, but I'll let it slide today :). For your languages, change it from almost good to advanced becasue that means that you know almost all the words but some things like pronunciation and stuff like that still needed to be corrected a little more. I'm honestly fine with him being single but you should have a back-up to when he finds the one girl/boy that he wants to date. Also can you give the uality of the character so I can find an applicant that also want another applicant as love interest. Fix those tiny mistakes and I will accept you!
Thank you for tweaking your app and you are now accpeted.

Co-authors Review- Hello! So I agree with Tabby that your face claim is super cute!!! I think it's really nice that he's so protective of his friends and that he was worrying about the fact that no one would be there to protect him once he moved away, that tells me a lot about his character! And i pretty much can''t get over the fact that he really likes pink like that is the cutest thing to me. Thank you for applying!

Ljoecutie001_Sm's back-up dancer_ Applicant_  Kim Dong wook— Accepted

 

Jemma oh se kyung

 

Author's Review- Hello! Thank You for applying. First all, I like how you mentioned both of her names. She is also really young for a model but thats fine because many models are 19. I LOVE you FACE CLAIM. The girl you chose, Yurim is super pretty and is one of my many favorite ulzzangs. Your personality was really cute. And her background was um interesting. Everything was fine in the background but how did she have supernatural powers. That kind of had me confused, like i was watching the anime ghost hunt again (XD). If you can explain it more, I will let it go. I like your whole history with Tiffany and Sehun. I thought it was cute. Thank you for explaining everything to me about Min Ho and their relationship. Both you and my other applicant who did idol love interests were really descriptive about it. Over all if you can explain some things to me, i will accept you! 


Co-author's Review- Hi! So, the whole concept of her getting kidnapped as well as having some kind of supernatural powers is a bit too much for me? Like it seems out of place with the rest of the fic as I think we were going for something more realistic. If you can convince Tabby and make it work then that's fine but right now I don't know I feel about it. Other than that, I like Jemma's relationship with Minho and I think It's cute that they met through modeling! Thank you for applying!

Thalieeeeee_Sm's Female Model_ Choi Min Ho_ Yurim — Accepted

Kang Haneul

 

Author's Review - Hello! Thank you for applying! Can I just say how detailed you were and it made me so happy. Her personality was well written and was very detailed on what she would do with each trait. Her background was very cute. I like how there was no type of depressing story behind it like most applications and it was so cute! Her best friends/ good friends are so cute. I can totally see your girl getting along with Min in real life because of their dance talents. Also, her age really matched the face claim, which brings me to the next thing i love about your application, I LOVE YOUR FACE CLAIM. I like Jin Jae young because she can really pull the sassy and cute face off. I'm pretty sure Sabeni would be up for you to be Min Jae's love interest, but Eun Mi might switch the tables on Min Jae and be protective of him XD! Over all, loved her really. Accepted!!

Co-author's review- Hi! I agree a lot with Tabby, Hana's personality is very nicely written out, as well as her background!! Her childhood was really nice and i think it's reflected nicely through her personality. Also I thank that Min Jae and Hana's relationship would be really cute, their different personalities would make for a very dynamic relationship (also the fact the Min Jae really like coffee and Hana not so much could be a cute lil story). Thank you for applying AND for being interested in Min Jae!

Mirilemonster_JYP's female back-up dancer_Applicant_Jin Jae young — Accepted

Kim seungjin

 

Author's Review- Hello! Thank you for applying! Can I just say I love your application so much! Nothing seemed extremely wrong but I do want to know how he knows english advanced if he hasn't been to america. That is the one thing that irks me alot but if you can explain it to me, I will consider it. I love your faceclaim, He's manly but kind of girly at the same time. I also noticed how light he was. like 49 kg is a little to under weight for a man if you can make him atleast 53 kg I will accept him. His personality seemed a little to short so if yopu could explain the bad traits better, I would be happy. His love interest is so cute! If your personality of Doojoon could be alittle bit longer same with the relationship part I will accept you. If you can explain to me a little bit more about him, I will accept him.

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pandaeyes7000_  Cube's Male songwriter_ Doojoon (b2st)_ Kim Gun (k) — Accepted 

Shang Ah Kum

 

Author's Review- Hi! thank you for applying! First of all There is a turn in on the cheatsheet. You complained to me saying the source code didn't but the you said you got it when you clearly don't. You can tell me if you can't use the layout but give me the reason. For your nicknames, tell me who uses them please. Also your blog post name should be Behind The Scenes |Character Name | Plotline. Look at other people apps so you know what we're looking for. Also, how does she know english almost fluently, that really irks me when people say she is almost fluent in english when she hasn't even been to the states. And don't give me the "her parents wanted to learn it" or she did really well in english class, cause that doesn't happen often. Also, your supposed to give me 3-5 sentences on the apperance, not 3 words. Can you give me galleries of her instead of pictures.  Also, you NEED a back up face claim. I don't really like how Jonghyun and Ah Kum knew eachother before their careers and let me remind you that they cannot be dating yet. Anyways I did like your girl's personality and the background was a bit messy and sad but I could still understand it. Please fix all the mistakes and you will be accepted. thank you for fixing the mistakes.

 

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Aliyashawol_ jyp's Female Model_Mark Tuan (Got7)_ Eun gyeong — accepted

Park Taehoon

 

Author's Review - Heyy! So sorry for the long wait on the review, I love your character. I like how his nickname is typhoon like a ticking time bomb. I love your face claim, he is super attractive. His personality is very long and detailed and you really gave me a good idea of what he is like in every way. His background was a little sad but it was good, His little sister is so cute, she is adorable!! Overall I loved your charaecter and you are accepted!!

Co-author's Review- Soon!

Imperfection--_Jyp's male producer_ Applicant_ Lee Seung Jin —Accepted

 

Kai Nam

 

Author's Review- Hello! Kai is really adorable, I really liked his personality and his backgorund, you were really descriptive in both. His face claim reminds me of an idol but i just don't remember who XD. Your app was fantabulous and is it bad that your guy reminds me of Eric Nam alittle, No, Just me, Ok (SIPS Reference). Anyways, ACCEPTED!
Co-author's Review- Soon!!

Jandii_Jyp's Male Producer_ Applicant_Oh Jung Kyu — Reviewing

Mio Takahata

 

Author's Review- Hello! Sorry for the late review. I really loved your character. She is really pretty and that picture for the app, GURL WERK IT, (haha srry I go to a ghetto school XD). Your app was really in depth and I remember reading it like three months ago when you turned it in. Your personality was AWESOME, I like how you sectioned each part off, it made it easy to see what your character was all about. Your background was written fantastically i liked how she was in a japanese dance academy, an elite one. Overall, I loved your app and you are ACCEPTED!!
Co-author's Review- Soon!

Limsoomie_Yg's Female Back up Dancer_Oc_Kite — Reviewing

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Author's Review- Hello! Thank you for applying, I love your face claim, tho everytime i see her, I think of Kai from exo, (No? Just me? Ok- Sips).your blog was removed so I really can't really review you, so right now you are pending because i need to see that blog post.
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Okitty_JYP's Female Backup Dancer_ Changsung (2pm)_Jo Eun hee — pending

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musicbeat
#1
Chapter 11: Hi guys~ I was wondering how's the status of the story? I hope this story won't get sunk... fighting~^^
Thalieeeeee #2
Chapter 11: Congrats to all that have been chosen!!
ljoeah
#3
Chapter 11: yay congrats to everyone who got chosen!
can't wait for the story to start officially hehe
blanderina
#4
Chapter 11: I almost forgot my chara's name and was like "*blink blink* is this mine?" lol otl
Anyway, thank you! And congrats to the other chosen applicants
musicbeat
#5
Chapter 11: oh yeah!!! thank you! and congrats to the rest^^ I'm so excited for the story to start^^ hwaiting author-nim~
ljoeah
#6
Chapter 10: congratulations to mirilemonster!!!! hehe
blanderina
#7
Chapter 10: Well, congrats again to another chosen applicant :)
Thalieeeeee #8
Chapter 10: I'm excited for the next character!!!
musicbeat
#9
Chapter 10: Jyp dancer~ ooh lot's of interactions with their artists... congrats to Mirilemonster aka. Kang Haneul^^