[IMPORTANT] a/n + SEQUEL

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Hello, readers!

As you may know, I've been editing this story for a while. My beta hasn't replied yet about the changes I made, but I'm just going to say that I'm finally done. Yay!

Changes I made:

-added a scene at the end of chapter 9: Normalcy and then added chapter 10: Parallel

-changed some parts of the last chap

-fixed grammar mistakes and made things better.

 

I hope you'll reread the story and like it more!

 

Also, there's a hunhan side-story that takes place a while after the ending of this one called After Dawn. Luhan is an Elite while Sehun is still a Worker. Please check it out if interested ^_^

 

Again, thank you to everyone who has accompanied me through this story and subscribed and commented and upvoted and etc etc etc....

 

Thank you! MWAH~~

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[10010] I think I'm finally done editing!
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illjae #1
Chapter 13: i loved this so much ㅠ﹏ㅠ
xiu_mine #2
Chapter 14: Ow. Short! I didn't mean anything wrong with that but it feels kinda rushed towards the end. I mean it's a good one but given the chance to have build up a little more, i think it's gonna be great. I just felt bad that Baek had to go through that for him to realize the importance of his friends in his life and understand the value of freedom. I would've wanted closure on your sequel for a lot of things, it's just unfortunate that that was discontinued. Still thanks for sharing them!
xiu_mine #3
Chapter 7: So much for the fluffiness that I referred to earlier. This took an angsty turn of events and boy those words and the reality hurts so much! I feel bad for their friendship :'(
xiu_mine #4
Chapter 5: That surprise! Ahhh is that true?! I dodny2 dare read past the comments section below cos I didn't want the spoilers at all.. But why?! Ahhhhh

But this is sooo interesting! I love their numbered names and the idea of having their secret names too... I am so craving for dystopian but I'm getting fluff despite the general idea of their fates. Maybe it's the fluffiness of Chanyeol and the bickering/teasing of Kaibaek.. Or maybe this is the calm before the storm? But Yixing appearing however sudden it may be still gives me fluffy images with his and Baek's interaction through music.. I'll read some more
_jongdaenosaur #5
Chapter 13: The scene where baek thought of his friends in punishment made me rly sad. I hope sekai could forgive baek someday :((( i mean yes baek was selfish yes but i mean sekai made him happy and all but being born a number wasnt exactly the life anyone should be grateful for :((( and and and chanyeol was such a squishy character??? Like so squishy i want to hug him PLS BE HAPPY YEOL ughhhhhh also I don't need to comment on yixing do i lol

Am i commenting too much should have i just put one comment per fic am i blabbing too mucH IM SORRY I ALWAYS HAVE THINGS TO SAY ABT YOUR STORIES BC IM ADDICTED AF
_jongdaenosaur #6
Chapter 5: You. YOU.

ARE YOU TRYING TO KILL ME WITH YIXING JUST BEING YIXING no srsly i keep squirming bc this was unexpected af and ugh my heart
_jongdaenosaur #7
Chapter 2: Sekaaaaaaaaai my love (yesss my life is complete)

And ing chen at the end lol pls
_jongdaenosaur #8
Chapter 1: Like... Bc its #10 so i kept thinking it was yixing. I was like 'oh? Yixing is here?' But then it was puppy eyes and happy virus and like 'wait???? Chanyeol???? So not exo numbers????'

The prologue too omf like i kept associating yifan with #100 just bc he's #00 lmfao so for second i was like IS THIS KRAY FIC WHAT IS HAPPENING but then like the stupidly slow that i am i realised you weren't sticking to all exo numbers lol i don't even know anymore but i'm enjoying this fic so far

ALSO KAIBAEK FRIENDSHIP YESSSSSSSSSS
hyhigrin #9
Chapter 14: You made me think this was Baekyeol all this time... you shameless, shameless girl XD Anyways, I enjoyed reading it!
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