Bodiless

10010

I believe we hide and haunt ourselves.  

-Pavana पवन



Baekhyun's dream was much like his reality now: a mansion, pillows and a smiling Yixing. But there was a feeling of paranoia that clung to the back of his mind, squeezing his chest. He walked down an empty hall, heart thudding as he stopped to study a painting on the wall. Everything was sombre now, except for the bright painting with light reflecting off its frame. He lifted a finger to touch the picture, but something flashed in the corner of his vision.

 

He spun around and was met with emptiness. Slowly turning back to the wall, trying to breathe and calm his racing heart, he glanced at the painting again. The edges had begun yellowing, curling in, away from the frame.

 

 

Then he saw it- a leering face reflected in the frame, right behind him.

 

 

He wanted to scream, but when he opened his mouth, a hand covered it and dragged him backwards.

 

 

~ ~ ~

 

 

Baekhyun woke up panting, gasping for breath. But then he realized it wasn't the fear from the nightmare that had woken him up- it was the loud muffled noises outside his bedroom door. Straining his ears, he thought he could hear Yixing's voice arguing with someone. There was someone else in the mansion?

 

Not really knowing what he was doing, Baekhyun began climbing out of bed. One foot was on the ground when the door was forced open, blinding light flooding in. A tall figure- looking like nothing more than a shadow in front of that light- advanced towards him. The shadow hooked an arm over Baekhyun's throat and forcibly dragged him off the bed and out the room.

 

He was thrown onto the ground and landed, disoriented, at Yixing's feet.

 

Would you like to explain?” someone asked mildly.

 

I- I . . .” Yixing stammered.

 

Mr. Zhang, if you would allow me to do what I need to do, there will not be any more trouble for you.” Yixing began to stammer again, trying to protest, but the man paid no heed. Bodiless arms grabbed at Baekhyun, yanking him up.

 

As he was forced away, he caught Yixing's eyes, almost drowning in the unreadable agony.

 

So this is how dreams end, Baekhyun thought vaguely.




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illjae
#1
Chapter 13: i loved this so much ㅠ﹏ㅠ
xiu_mine
#2
Chapter 14: Ow. Short! I didn't mean anything wrong with that but it feels kinda rushed towards the end. I mean it's a good one but given the chance to have build up a little more, i think it's gonna be great. I just felt bad that Baek had to go through that for him to realize the importance of his friends in his life and understand the value of freedom. I would've wanted closure on your sequel for a lot of things, it's just unfortunate that that was discontinued. Still thanks for sharing them!
xiu_mine
#3
Chapter 7: So much for the fluffiness that I referred to earlier. This took an angsty turn of events and boy those words and the reality hurts so much! I feel bad for their friendship :'(
xiu_mine
#4
Chapter 5: That surprise! Ahhh is that true?! I dodny2 dare read past the comments section below cos I didn't want the spoilers at all.. But why?! Ahhhhh

But this is sooo interesting! I love their numbered names and the idea of having their secret names too... I am so craving for dystopian but I'm getting fluff despite the general idea of their fates. Maybe it's the fluffiness of Chanyeol and the bickering/teasing of Kaibaek.. Or maybe this is the calm before the storm? But Yixing appearing however sudden it may be still gives me fluffy images with his and Baek's interaction through music.. I'll read some more
_jongdaenosaur
#5
Chapter 13: The scene where baek thought of his friends in punishment made me rly sad. I hope sekai could forgive baek someday :((( i mean yes baek was selfish yes but i mean sekai made him happy and all but being born a number wasnt exactly the life anyone should be grateful for :((( and and and chanyeol was such a squishy character??? Like so squishy i want to hug him PLS BE HAPPY YEOL ughhhhhh also I don't need to comment on yixing do i lol

Am i commenting too much should have i just put one comment per fic am i blabbing too mucH IM SORRY I ALWAYS HAVE THINGS TO SAY ABT YOUR STORIES BC IM ADDICTED AF
_jongdaenosaur
#6
Chapter 5: You. YOU.

ARE YOU TRYING TO KILL ME WITH YIXING JUST BEING YIXING no srsly i keep squirming bc this was unexpected af and ugh my heart
_jongdaenosaur
#7
Chapter 2: Sekaaaaaaaaai my love (yesss my life is complete)

And ing chen at the end lol pls
_jongdaenosaur
#8
Chapter 1: Like... Bc its #10 so i kept thinking it was yixing. I was like 'oh? Yixing is here?' But then it was puppy eyes and happy virus and like 'wait???? Chanyeol???? So not exo numbers????'

The prologue too omf like i kept associating yifan with #100 just bc he's #00 lmfao so for second i was like IS THIS KRAY FIC WHAT IS HAPPENING but then like the stupidly slow that i am i realised you weren't sticking to all exo numbers lol i don't even know anymore but i'm enjoying this fic so far

ALSO KAIBAEK FRIENDSHIP YESSSSSSSSSS
hyhigrin
#9
Chapter 14: You made me think this was Baekyeol all this time... you shameless, shameless girl XD Anyways, I enjoyed reading it!