Three Musketeers, err, Three COOL Musketeers. (Edited Ver.)

Forget Me Not: Journey Of Memories
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~In The MIRAI's National Science and Technology Dept. (MNST)~

  "DAMN! Do we really have to be assigned in boring places?!" Hongki complained while scratching his nape. "I'm with you on that pal. This place is full of NERDS and GEEKS who love books and numbers!" Gikwang remarked while staring at the staff as if they were some aliens and the three of them were stuck in some UFO. "Oh come on hyungs. Not verything with knowledge can be THAT creepy." Jinyoung, the bright kid amongst the three went over to one of the working staff and asked for some directions.   Hongki ang Gikwang just stood there as if they were the cool kids from the story and Jinyoung was the nerdy guy. "Seriously? You talk NERDY?" Hongki asked, arching an eyebrow at his dongsaeng. "Not actually. Just when I have to. Wae?" Jinyoung anwered cooly while flipping his bangs from covering his fox-like eyes. "Hyungs, no time to waste. 2nd floor, turn left, 5th shelf. That's what the clerk-noona said." Jinyoung informed his elders, as if they were a group of rockers who went to a ballad concert.    "Cocky fox." Gikwang shrugged while Hongki rolled his eyes. They slowly made their way into the second floor's hallways, following the directions Jinyoung has retrieved from the clerk. They arrived into a huge room that has a lot of silver metal shelves containing folders with certain dates and titles on their spine. "Whoa! So we're here like some spies doing stealth and research work?" Hongki muttered in excitement and awe at the sight of the sci-fi scene he thought only existed in movies.   "Let's get to work now, shall we?" Gikwang suggested, and they got a pile of folders with the dates included within the time bracket Taeyeon, Yuri and Junhyung told them. The three read as if their life depended on it, since it was really a sting to the brain. 2 hours had passed since the crowd of three begain thei investigation. "Ugh!" Hongki stretched for the 15th time ever since he took his seat and opened the many folders he picked out from the shelves. All the silence went on until Gikwng exclaimed, "GOTCHA!"   "Mwo?" "What have you found out hyung?" The two asked curiously as the confident Gikwang showed them a file folder containing a photo taken from the date stated in the folder's spine. "This is..." Jinyoung and Hongki said in surprise and Gikwang finished the sentence by saying, "'s FEATHER." With a sigh of relief, he continued reading the remaning parts of the file folder until they came across a certain address.   "Forbidden Cove." Gikwang muttered out as the two went back into reading and was once again, caught by the sudden information said aloud by Gikwang. "Why hyung? What's with that cove?" Jinyoung asked. "As Iread it- HEY!" Gikwa
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Vampirexy192
#1
Chapter 11: Oh yeah, I know I comment too much on this but I just wanna add, no need to emphasize too much on every word that seems unnecessary like you give in a bold font or capital letter and reduce the 3 period symbol. It just dragging your sentence. Probably it was a habit to put three dots at the end of sentence. xD Maybe, I assumed. It's okay, everyone make a mistake that they unconsciously did. Even me, myself ^_^ But if you still keep it, it's fine. Everyone has their own styles to write. :D
Vampirexy192
#2
Chapter 11: First of all, I want to say that the colors actually distract me. I don't mind, it was colorful indeed but I would suggest you do not use yellow color because I couldn't see the word clearly. >.> And I preferred if you name the female main character so you wouldn't have to keep it blank in all you story. Also, the thoughts of a person and the person conversation should be distinguished. Like we can tell that it was her thoughts or she was talking. People's point of view is already considered as expressing their inner minds or thoughts. Unless that person voiced out her opinion in her head loudly as if she was talking to herself. That is different. Like you use this for the "conversation" and thoughts, you can use 'this' or in italic words. Oh! Btw in Chapter 11, the protagonist brother had changed from Baro to Jinyoung? o.o What just happened? That actually confused me, I don't know if you had mistakenly written that. Moreover, it was difficult to you know telling their perspectives especially the Lee's brothers. I was rather puzzled because it seems jumbled up to me. Therefore, the flow of the story is a bit disrupted. I'm just giving my comment not because of I hate it, I just want to point out the mistakes so you can improve and become better. :D I hope you don't take any offence from this. However, the plot story was interesting like I can feel European or Victorian kind of style. Classic and vintage. Hahaha. As well as the mystery behind her amnesia and the history of their descendants. :)
exolovechick
#3
yea i was surprised to see exolovechick i would recommend to name the main character but other than that, i am looking forward in reading this fic :)
rukehna #4
scared the crap out of me when i see my username lol
yoonaaegyo
#5
Its realy funny because my username is also yoonaaegyo but otherwise I am looking forward to reading this fanfics :)
ILoveKitCats
#6
Chapter 19: this story is so mysterious . i must keep reading to know the ans .. jinjja daebak !!
chimaniecricket
#7
always sj15forever!!!!
x3Yoongiex3
#8
Chapter 125: i just finished your story & really liked it (:
jonginies #9
okay! ^^
Little-Red
#10
@kpopaholic121: SEE YOU AT THE OTHER STORIES CHINGGU~ :D