You Are DIFFERENT. (Edited Ver.)

Forget Me Not: Journey Of Memories
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Then HE appeared.

Nichkhun Horvejkul.   "Oppa. I thought you said we are SUPPOSSED to handle THIS?" Jessica questioned while her face didn't hide how annoyed she was at Khun's sudden intrusion. "I did. But did I tell you that PESTERING THEM is a part of our plan?" He shot back, leaving Jessica silent.    They all stayed silent for a few minutes as if they were waiting for something to break the ice and start up something blazing to bring back the aura of battling. When suddenly...   "Khun-ah." called out in a soft voice, close to a whisper as faint as it sounded. However, it was very audible to Khun's ears. 'It's been so long since I heard you call me by my name, Princess.' He happily hought inside while turning to face her with a straight face and a cold pair of eyes. 'I'd rather speak to her through the mind. It'll cause lesser hassle.' He decided and stared at until she stared back at him. And that's when they started to communicate through their minds.   --------------------------------------------------------------- ( AUTHOR'S MOTE: Khun = Purple; You = Gold )   'What do you want?'   'Nothing. I felt like I just needed to call you. Why? Did I disturb your thoughts?'   'You're annoying you know.'   'You still act so cold, when in fact, you're really kind, Khun-ah.'   'You get to say that after knowing who caused all of THIS?'   'I can't blame you, nor the Lees, nor Yeonnie-unnie. It's all a part of Fate's games you know.'   'And yet, you let yourself get co
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Vampirexy192
#1
Chapter 11: Oh yeah, I know I comment too much on this but I just wanna add, no need to emphasize too much on every word that seems unnecessary like you give in a bold font or capital letter and reduce the 3 period symbol. It just dragging your sentence. Probably it was a habit to put three dots at the end of sentence. xD Maybe, I assumed. It's okay, everyone make a mistake that they unconsciously did. Even me, myself ^_^ But if you still keep it, it's fine. Everyone has their own styles to write. :D
Vampirexy192
#2
Chapter 11: First of all, I want to say that the colors actually distract me. I don't mind, it was colorful indeed but I would suggest you do not use yellow color because I couldn't see the word clearly. >.> And I preferred if you name the female main character so you wouldn't have to keep it blank in all you story. Also, the thoughts of a person and the person conversation should be distinguished. Like we can tell that it was her thoughts or she was talking. People's point of view is already considered as expressing their inner minds or thoughts. Unless that person voiced out her opinion in her head loudly as if she was talking to herself. That is different. Like you use this for the "conversation" and thoughts, you can use 'this' or in italic words. Oh! Btw in Chapter 11, the protagonist brother had changed from Baro to Jinyoung? o.o What just happened? That actually confused me, I don't know if you had mistakenly written that. Moreover, it was difficult to you know telling their perspectives especially the Lee's brothers. I was rather puzzled because it seems jumbled up to me. Therefore, the flow of the story is a bit disrupted. I'm just giving my comment not because of I hate it, I just want to point out the mistakes so you can improve and become better. :D I hope you don't take any offence from this. However, the plot story was interesting like I can feel European or Victorian kind of style. Classic and vintage. Hahaha. As well as the mystery behind her amnesia and the history of their descendants. :)
exolovechick
#3
yea i was surprised to see exolovechick i would recommend to name the main character but other than that, i am looking forward in reading this fic :)
rukehna #4
scared the crap out of me when i see my username lol
yoonaaegyo
#5
Its realy funny because my username is also yoonaaegyo but otherwise I am looking forward to reading this fanfics :)
ILoveKitCats
#6
Chapter 19: this story is so mysterious . i must keep reading to know the ans .. jinjja daebak !!
chimaniecricket
#7
always sj15forever!!!!
x3Yoongiex3
#8
Chapter 125: i just finished your story & really liked it (:
jonginies #9
okay! ^^
Little-Red
#10
@kpopaholic121: SEE YOU AT THE OTHER STORIES CHINGGU~ :D