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CHEQUE MATE
AUTHOR: snowflake16
Wilde Entertainment closes mysteriously. Ex-trainees suddenly begin suffering from hysteria. No one knows the cause of this epidemic. Then one by one they start to die.

A special police unit is brought in to bring solace. Officer Yong Jun Hyung, attempts to solve the secret that lies behind the slogan: "Don't Trust Anyone," and endeavors to create a name for himself in the work field.

An enigmatic detective is requested to join the quest.

Who is the killer? What is his reason? Where is he hiding? And can Yong & Do stop him before it is far too late?
☓ ABOUT US
Hallucinated Dreams was once a review shop, but now, this will be a collection of writing advice that I will give to fellow writers. The writing advice is a collation of my own views towards stories as well as other people's perspectives and feedback.
☓ CONTENTS PAGE (WORKING AND SUBJECT-TO-CHANGE)
001. Brainstorming
002. Grammar: Do-nots
003. Ideal Summaries of Genres
004. Writing Style: Mood & Tone [Narration]
005. Writing Style: Mood & Tone [Dialogue]
Writing Style: Diction, Imagery, Tension, Suspense & Poetic Devices
Writing Various Scenes
Characters: Introduction
Characters: Motivations & Backstories
Characters: Stereotypes
Characters: Relationships


☓ FEATURED
001. snowflake16 - Cheque Mate (Winner of B2uty & the B2st Writing Contest) Recommended for Crime & Thriller fans [COMPLETED]
002. mistressdean - Pull Me Under (86/100 - Azeline) Recommended for Angst & Drama fans, as well as its amazing characterisation [COMPLETED]
003. pandoralacey - My Name Is Hers (88/100 - Azeline) Recommended for Angst & Psychological fans, as well as its unique twist in its storyline [WIP]
004. chubbyfaceDiVa - Leaning on the Edge (91/100 - Azeline) Recommended for Angst, Tragedy & Psychological fans, as well as its realistic characterisation. [COMPLETED]
005. honeylove - Mirror Image (85/100 - Azeline) Recommended for Horror fans, as well as its interesting presentation. [COMPLETED]
006. pandoralacey - Heart of Hearts (85/100 - Dee) Recommended for Angst & Psychological fans, as well as its elaborate description. [WIP]
007. choops - Novo Amor (90/100 - Alice) Recommended for Angst, Romance & Slice-of-life fans, as well as its portrayal of emotions. [COMPLETED]
008. Blu3Wind - Trapped in a K-drama (87/100 - Azeline) Recommended for Comedy & Fluff fans, as well as its interesting twist to an otherwise cliche storyline. [COMPLETED]
009. reddishDaiSy_95 - Ending Plan (90/100 - Alice) Recommended for Comedy & Fluff fans, as well as its enjoyable storyline. [COMPLETED]
010. iRaine - Revision (88/100 - Azeline) Recommended for Angst & Tragedy fans, as well as its twist of events. [COMPLETED]
011. snowflake16 - Everlasting Impressions (86/100 - Azeline) Recommended for Angst, Drama & Supernatural fans, as well as its meaningful themes. [COMPLETED]
012. gaksitalGaksital - False Vows (86/100 - Azeline) Recommended for Angst & Psychological fans, as well as its depiction of the struggles of idol life.. [COMPLETED]
013. paperdaisy - Erlebnisse (85/100 - Azeline) Recommended for Angst fans, as well as its depiction of the struggles of homouality. [COMPLETED]

☓ STATUS LIST


 

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Author's Thoughts
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alittleflovver #1
Chapter 99: thank you so much for this review! and its fine that its a bit late, besides everyone has lives outside of aff :) i'll take note of the things you said and probably change a few things in my story. this will help me a lot in my future in writing, so again, thanks a lot :)
Queensabelle #2
Picked up! I really love your review, thank youuus! <3
ilyhani #3
Chapter 93: Hi, thank you for the review!
writerFairy #4
hey hey
Sorry I'm late I've been away for 5 months. and I was wondering If I could get my review on Worlds apart somehow. I know I'm probably blacklisted or something, but is there any way I still can get it.
and thank you for taking the time to review it. I'm really grateful.
love WF
Angel110 #5
Chapter 91: Wow ... I didn't expect this kind of criticism but okay, I understand all of that and it should help me improve my story as I love it very, very much~ I do have some stuff in store and I could really expand some scenes and maybe I am giving some wrong opinions of some scenes but I will work on it asap~ as for the baek and chanyeol part, baek doesn't realize yet that chanyeol is a wolf, therefore he doesn't have these prejudices and hatred beforehand~ he wasdistracted by his thoughts for a moment and when he tried to spot him again there was only a wolf, baek didn't count one and one together~
The scene how taoris met will appear in chapter twelve and I tell you, it's definitely something people wouldn't expect :D
thank you for the honest review and I will try to work on the parts you pointed out~
mistressdean #6
Chapter 90: OMG I CANT BELIEVE you're closing down. I know this sounds like an exaggeration, but I really do love your reviews, Azeline. I'll definitely have to request from you privately in the future. Thank you for all of your hard work, and helpful and blunt advice.
Queensabelle #7
Username & Profile Link:
Queensabelle
http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/148259
Story Link:
http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/966063/he-heard-it-iusinger-oneshot-romance-schoollife-bts-jungkook
Genre/s:
Romance, Friendship, School Life
Criticism Level (1-10):
7
Focus On:
Grammar, Story flow, plot, writing skills
Other comments:
Umm.... some tips to do a better job and uh, give my story a short comment? So maybe I can post it on the front page ><! Thank youuuuu <3
Password:
Romance!
CrystalSnow26 #8
Chapter 88: Thank you for your hard work!
ilyhani #9
Username & Profile Link: ilyhani (http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/653292)
Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/943999/
Genre/s: Romance, School life, Drama
Criticism Level (1-10): 5
Focus On: Writing. I'm still new in writing a chaptered stories ^^
Other comments: Could you give some useful tips on how to write better? Thanks!
Password: Romance, ofc xD
Muahahaha #10
Chapter 87: Haha its ok for the critics it helps me in writing my story a lot ^^ plus i am not very good in my languages thus i makes a lot of mistakes be it grammar or vocab.. i am sure that ur review will help me a lot in inproving my story, thanks once again!
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