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☆ Hallucinated Dreams Reviews + Writing Advice ☆ Closed ☆

Hello all! Here is just a quick update in terms of the progress with the requests.

I have managed to find a reviewing method that works well for me so that I am able to produce quick (and good quality) reviews. I'll try my best to complete all my requests (since examinations is going to end soon!).

However, for the following requesters: nieeex, tiggee08 and alittleflovver, your reviews may only arrive at the end of October since your reviewer, Arika, is currently very busy. We apologise for the inconvenience that may have been caused, and we'll update you as soon as possible once the reviews are finished.

That being said, Hallucinated Dreams is officially closed. No more requests will be accepted via this shop, but if any of you are still interested for reviews or just quick feedback for your stories, feel free to pm me personally. Regardless, thank you to all those who have requested over here and I hope all of you have gained some insights on how you can further improve your writing skills. It has been an enjoyable ride for me, and although I'd love to continue as a reviewer of this shop, I have many personal projects to complete and there are some new things that I want to try out.

I may be uploading several chapters of writing advice on this shop so that anyone who is interested to know how they can write better can read these chapters. The writing advice provided will be based on my own reflections after reviewing some stories here and reading suggestions provided by other sources.

In conclusion, thanks for all of the support that you requesters have been giving to this shop! All the best and happy writing!

~Azeline

 

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alittleflovver
#1
Chapter 99: thank you so much for this review! and its fine that its a bit late, besides everyone has lives outside of aff :) i'll take note of the things you said and probably change a few things in my story. this will help me a lot in my future in writing, so again, thanks a lot :)
Queensabelle
#2
Picked up! I really love your review, thank youuus! <3
ilyhani
#3
Chapter 93: Hi, thank you for the review!
writerFairy
#4
hey hey
Sorry I'm late I've been away for 5 months. and I was wondering If I could get my review on Worlds apart somehow. I know I'm probably blacklisted or something, but is there any way I still can get it.
and thank you for taking the time to review it. I'm really grateful.
love WF
Angel110
#5
Chapter 91: Wow ... I didn't expect this kind of criticism but okay, I understand all of that and it should help me improve my story as I love it very, very much~ I do have some stuff in store and I could really expand some scenes and maybe I am giving some wrong opinions of some scenes but I will work on it asap~ as for the baek and chanyeol part, baek doesn't realize yet that chanyeol is a wolf, therefore he doesn't have these prejudices and hatred beforehand~ he wasdistracted by his thoughts for a moment and when he tried to spot him again there was only a wolf, baek didn't count one and one together~
The scene how taoris met will appear in chapter twelve and I tell you, it's definitely something people wouldn't expect :D
thank you for the honest review and I will try to work on the parts you pointed out~
mistressdean
#6
Chapter 90: OMG I CANT BELIEVE you're closing down. I know this sounds like an exaggeration, but I really do love your reviews, Azeline. I'll definitely have to request from you privately in the future. Thank you for all of your hard work, and helpful and blunt advice.
Queensabelle
#7
Username & Profile Link:
Queensabelle
http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/148259
Story Link:
http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/966063/he-heard-it-iusinger-oneshot-romance-schoollife-bts-jungkook
Genre/s:
Romance, Friendship, School Life
Criticism Level (1-10):
7
Focus On:
Grammar, Story flow, plot, writing skills
Other comments:
Umm.... some tips to do a better job and uh, give my story a short comment? So maybe I can post it on the front page ><! Thank youuuuu <3
Password:
Romance!
CrystalSnow26
#8
Chapter 88: Thank you for your hard work!
ilyhani
#9
Username & Profile Link: ilyhani (http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/653292)
Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/943999/
Genre/s: Romance, School life, Drama
Criticism Level (1-10): 5
Focus On: Writing. I'm still new in writing a chaptered stories ^^
Other comments: Could you give some useful tips on how to write better? Thanks!
Password: Romance, ofc xD
Muahahaha
#10
Chapter 87: Haha its ok for the critics it helps me in writing my story a lot ^^ plus i am not very good in my languages thus i makes a lot of mistakes be it grammar or vocab.. i am sure that ur review will help me a lot in inproving my story, thanks once again!