The first fall

I Have a Dream
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“Eomma what is this?” Youngshin pressed on the bruise that was forming on her neck, not noticing Minyoung’s wincing.

“Nothing at all.” She managed to smile away the pain, not wanting Youngshin to worry about her.

“Okay then.” He innocently grinned. “Read me a story.” He put the story in her hands and excitedly giggled.

 

 

 

 

Minyoung and Jia were at the next place of performance. The crowd that was following them, grew larger in numbers, no more fearing of the consequences of doing the right thing.

“Here is good.” Minyoung nodded at the musicians and they all settled down. Jia on the other hand was clearing the area for herself and dancers.

 

“What is going on here?” The guard, who was part of their people, walked up to her.

 

Minyoung said nothing…

“And 5,6,7,8.” Minyoung commanded.

 

Musicians played their music, and the dancers danced as their answer to the guards.

 

The sudden music and dance startled the guards, but seeing that the rich were staring at them, they went back into the revolutionising group.

“This can’t be going on forever.” There was no mercy in his voice. Despite the fact that he was going against his people.

Minyoung stared at the rich, intently watching while singing songs of freedom, songs that Kiseok wrote for her.

“I said stop it!” He pushed her. But that did not stop Minyou

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4everhite #1
Chapter 7: It's good, I like to position myself back to the civil right moment and occasionally back to the japanese invading korea. lol, but I like it. It's unique on my end and I'm a geek for history. I like books(stories) like this, Clay Marble, So Far From The Bamboo Grove, etc. It great Min is trying to stand up, but I feel for her and Yongshin. Fighting!~
psycho_d
#2
Chapter 5: what the ???????????????????????!!!!!!!
did she got shoot by someone ???? omg !!!!!
psycho_d
#3
Chapter 4: yes ! u made a great decision Min by quitting that maid job...
im glad finally Jia decided to join her.. at least she has someone with her supporting what shes doing...i want to know whos that boy that join her....hmmmmmmmm ~~~~~~
psycho_d
#4
Chapter 3: Omg! Its Simon D! At first I thought whos is Kiseok bcoz I dobt know his korean name...but its okay, their cute together in OMS...so I approved XD
Btw, wth?? Her father was killed??? Why??? Damn it!!! All those evil people should die...
4everhite #5
Chapter 3: Wahh, I was like terrified if anything happens to Youngshin! But finally, it's time!! Time for change! Min fighting!! Love the update! <333
mjooyeon
#6
Chapter 3: Simon D :D That makes me really happy

Is Lee Sunho just an OC? Or is he Andy Lee of Shinhwa?
shiningskyline #7
Chapter 3: This story keeps getting better and better, I can truly feel the desperation and rage that Min is feeling. I'm eager to see what happens now that this want for vengeance has been sparked within her, how she could topple this awful society that she lives in.
psycho_d
#8
Chapter 2: What a bad people!!! The family that Min working for...damn them!! I want to know who is the freakinh master thay always for ual abuse to her...
It seems like the man dont have much power in this story...I mean, look at Min husband...he looks like he cant do anything abouy yhe situation :(
I hope her child will be okay...
4everhite #9
Chapter 2: oh my wow, very intense things happening in ch 1, why do they keep killing. these people have no conscience whatsoever??! and yes this oppressive, corrupted society is really what killing these innocent, but all the peace, i only hope that peace will come soon for them.
shiningskyline #10
Chapter 2: WOW! This fic is so dramatic, but in a really meaningful way. I find this kind of backdrop so interesting, where the characters are fighting against something much bigger than themselves, like this oppressive society Min and her family are trapped in. I'm really eager to find out more about the world she lives in and why it is the way it is. Your writing style is so impressive, by the way. You're great at picking the exact words you want for maximum dramatic effect, without getting lost in a sea of adjectives and unnecessary wordiness. Great job! Can't wait for more!