Unfinished Symphony

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Unfinished Symphony

"The mind is a battlefield." 

Everything starts crashing down when Contemporary dancer Choi Sulli develops an eating disorder, and becomes anorexic. The pressure of being perfect is weighing down on her shoulders and is slowly eating her alive, especially when a new student comes along and outshines her with no intention of doing so.

She doesn't know what to do, and yet she refuses to get help. 

Can she fight this battle on her own? 

 


Starring

 

Choi Sulli;

"I want to change my mind, I want to be enough. But why is it so hard, to say I'm beautiful?" 

 

Choi Minho; 

 

"Music is an act of distraction. It takes you away from all the pain as you lose your soul in it." 

 

Park Sunyoung; 

"If your feet are your life, then your feet just got a whole lot important." 

 

Lee Jinki; 

"I wonder why God had us cross paths in the first place. Having unreciprocated feelings doesn't feel good at all."

[Other minor characters maybe introduced later on.]

 


 

Foreword

I stood near the edge, at the topmost of this building, where I could clearly see the vast view of the city in broad daylight. I felt the wind softly howling in my direction. I wasn't alone.

"Why do you want to help me?" I breathed out.

"Because you deserve to feel beautiful."

"But I'm not. I'm not beautiful, I'm imperfect." A tiny voice within my mind agreed before he turned to me and left me in awe when he replied,

"You're breathtaking." 

 


Author's Note 

Hello guys! I've been wanting to write this in a long time and I finally did it. The inspiration came to me when I was in my dancing class, so you can say that it's relatable to me. I believe this is going to be the most precious story I've ever wrote, so hopefully as this goes I'm able to pour my heart out and do my best. The title will be explained as the story unfolds, by the way. :) Also, I'd like you guys to know that the ending may not be what you expect, but nothing's confirmed yet. 

So yeah, I'm quite excited for this! Feel free to comment and subscribe if you'd like, and I'll see you in the first chapter! 

R o b i n -

 


Playlist

Breathe - Jessie J

Young and Beautiful - Lana Del Rey 

Why don't you love me - Hot chelle rae

Moonlight - The piano guys 

Michael meets Mozart - The piano guys 

Pavane/Titanium - The piano guys

Code Name Vivaldi - The piano guys

 

 

Credits to:- 

Beauty lies within graphics' @Shenez73 for the beautifully made poster! You're a brick!

* This story would be mainly written in a third person's point of view with a few in first person's point of view.

RobinHood108
16/06/14 | Please forgive me if this chapter was a bit crappy, I will do better in the next one! Do enjoy!

Comments

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AveAstrea #1
Chapter 4: Thanks for the update author nim.

I'm glad they're starting. ^_^

Yey!

Until next time. Take care.
tercesjoy #2
Chapter 4: Again, an update that is worth the wait. I will wait for another wonderful chapter, authornim. This one is well-written.
choichoi94 #3
Chapter 4: thank u authornim for this update.
finally minho facing sulli ..yet too awkwrd f..does he bears any feeling for her ...obviously for sulli it startd. waiting for more minsul interaction
9MinSul9
#4
Chapter 4: Have been waiting for your update. Finally Minsul's interaction. Glad that they are getting a long so well and Minho seems to be attracted by Sulli, same goes to her I guess. Can't wait for the next chapter. Thanks for the update authornim. Good luck
samsomnear
#5
Chapter 4: Partly, is it because of Minho as well that she had one step closer to get over Jinki? And They interacted so well, hope more to come in future until they wipe away the word 'stranger'. Anyway likely they both are attracted to one another. Great!

Thanks authornim. Been waiting for your update and pls update soon. Take care :D
minsul123456
#6
Chapter 4: It's good to hear that Sulli is slowly getting over Jinki. It would make her fine but, I hate Sulli's mother for saying non-encouraging( is that even a word? xD) words towards her.

I hope that Minho can communicate and get closer to her more :)

I can't wait for the next chapter. Thank you for the update. Have a good day! :))
MinsulLovatic
#7
Chapter 3: Girly, this is sooo good! I keep re-reading it already even if it's just three chapters! Great and addicting plot you have here, good job! Can't wait for the next chapter, I hope you can update soon. Fighting, and enjoy writing!
minsul123456
#8
Chapter 3: Finally!The talented pianist is revealed,hahaha.I see...Jinki has developed some feelings for Sunyoung?This is going to be more complicated for Sulli right as they're in the same school?However,I'm glad Minho's there to comfort her,kekeke..

Will be waiting for the next update.Thanks for the update!

Have a good day! :)
tercesjoy #9
Chapter 3: I looooooovvveeeeeee this, authornim. I can't express that feeling enough. I'm grateful for this, I'm thankful for this story, actually. Thank you very much. :)))) I'll be waiting for your updates faithfully, authornim! AJA!
samsomnear
#10
Chapter 3: Omo is Minho hugging Sulli? Aww I'm also melted here. Finally Minho's appearance, hopefully his special presence little by little heal Sulli's deep wound. And Jinki falls for Luna at the first sight! Maybe he doesn't even know how much he hurt Sulli by now.

Thanks for the update authornim. I love it, so excited for the next chap. Update soon :)